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Not bad. The setting is pretty good, but the pace feels a bit slow. Come on, author.

Looks good! I quite like it.

A very nice book, worth recommending.

I really like this style of immortality novels. . . I can't think about it with my head. Otherwise, I would think that the fairy roots that waste so many resources cannot cross the border to fight. They all rely on various external resources. I should be despised by heaven.

The author writes very well, with a fantastic plot and rich imagination. The writing is smooth. The disadvantage is that the early description is very detailed, but the middle and later stages are too rushed. The ending felt like it was unfinished. The plot is only temporarily over. In short, I feel that the author can go deeper. I believe the author can write better books in the future. Five-star praise.

In essence, this is not a particularly good novel, but it is undeniable that there are no outstanding flaws in the cohesion of his stories, the depiction of characters, and the arrangement of the plot. He describes the environment, people, and things in relatively detail. This novel is more suitable to be read during the book shortage period to relieve boredom!

The novel seems pretty good so far, so I'll continue reading.

Why don't cultivators have space rings?

Come on, well written

It's a pretty good mortal novel, above and beyond the basics, without too many surprises or too many flaws. Not a cool article. Come on. It's almost the end, and it feels like the upgrade speed is accelerating, and the author is ready to finish it.

Wow, this book is so good, cheers to the author＾0＾~＾0＾~! ! !

It's okay, but it's a bit sparse. I finished reading it in half a day.

Come on, the author will update more. I've finished watching it now, and I'll watch it again after I gain weight.

This book is recommended. The protagonist immediately kills the woman who attacked and framed him; decisively refuses the woman who approaches him with evil intentions; he does not have sex with women! Practice wholeheartedly, keep secret the two realms of travel, and become a god!

Good, novel setting

Although the writing is rough in some places and the creation is not perfect, it is still good in terms of the unpredictable nature of people's hearts [laughing]

It's pretty good. I like this kind of novel. I don't know why the rating is so low.

I almost don't want to worry about it.

Is this the end? ? ? Send me a five-star review

Everyone has a lumbar disc, why is it so prominent like yours? How can my boyfriend/girlfriend accidentally see this?

With encouragement, the article is okay but the progress is slow. If the author does not update 10 chapters every day, it is not enough to read. It looks pretty good so far, and the other thing is that the author shouldn't make the male protagonist too invincible. Then it's worthless

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad😊not too verbose👍

Such a beautiful book, the rating is not high! ! !

I just like reading this kind of double penetration article

After reading this novel, I just want to say that the urban-like [smile] plot and writing style of traditional true fantasy novels can be referred to "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality". The grassroots little people struggle to survive and cultivate themselves, and they grow step by step. It is very inspiring. Give it five stars

Come on, good writing

Very pretty! Keep up the good work!

Please encourage me, your writing is okay.

Good luck to the author!