Western Fantasy: from Wilderness Lord to King of All Races

Worth a look 1 In general, the author wants to create a world that is closer to reality and more reasonable. Therefore, in terms of perception, he often abandons the pleasure of reading novels in order to write more realistic and reasonable things. This means that he does not correctly realize that what he writes is a novel, not a so-called literary masterpiece. 2 Past life memories were discovered by others, and others saw through the entire soul 3. The logic is reasonable, but the plot does not look good. The little mouse dares to talk to outsiders in front of outsiders, but does not talk to the familiar protagonist. 4. The protagonist is a happy-go-lucky character. The fierceness in his bones all comes from the original owner of his soul. He himself is really a character who is more like a virgin. He has a pure image that can perfectly circumvent the review mechanism. 5. Another problem is that the writing is really not exciting enough. It is really that kind of dull and refreshing. The plot of the story develops slowly, grows slowly, and the relationship between the characters slowly deepens. The story is told lightly, so there is really very little excitement, or it is not suitable for today's fast pace. The above is a summary of the poisonous points and impressions I have seen so far. Generally speaking, it is worth watching, but it is not exciting enough. It can be used to kill time when you have nothing to do. This is not a cool article, this is a slow-burning article about farming development. The problem of general direction 1 This author is accustomed to describing the so-called more real world and abandoning the readers' perceptions. 2. The author is accustomed to using the shortcomings and accidents of the protagonist to promote the development of the plot in a negative way. 3. The protagonist is the kind of person who doesn't fight and just accepts the situation. 4 The author is good at writing about ordinary daily life, but not good at writing about fierce battle scenes. Small problems arising from big problems 1. The way to improve personal combat effectiveness is not clear. 2. The protagonist's combat effectiveness increases slowly. 3. For the sake of plot development, the protagonist often makes mistakes unintentionally and appears to be lacking in brains. 4 The protagonist is in a different world, retaining the modern kindness and reserve (but in fact, modern people are more ruthless than those in ancient times) 5 The world described in the article is a relatively kind world. People and alien races can live in harmony, which is very peaceful. Finally, let me talk about my own impressions. I was originally a book lover, so I found this book and read it. I found it very interesting. The big framework developed in the front is very normal, but my enthusiasm for this book was cut down by small problems here and there. This is a kind of screening. Obviously, you have to be aware of the above things and read this novel with the attitude that this is a world that accepts mistakes. Only then can you finish the book with a good attitude. Otherwise, you will feel exhausted after reading half of it.

After reading about 200,000 words, I quickly gave it a good review. Let's briefly summarize it first. Soul-piercing farming articles have no system, no space, no plug-ins, no cheats, and are slow to develop. Those who are used to reading cool articles, especially those who like mindless articles, can avoid it. Please don't leave negative comments casually. This book reminds me of the extremely regrettable Beast Blood Boiling. I will hate you if I stop reading because of you people. The advantages are outstanding. First of all, the author is very well prepared. He should have been a fan of Western fantasy for many years. Coupled with the reasonable arrangement, the entire story background can withstand scrutiny and will not make people feel that it is divorced from the background of medieval Europe. The general strengthening of various data in the extraordinary world is also reasonable. Secondly, the writing style is considered to be the best among Tomato's Western fantasy novels. Apart from anything else, there are really very few bad sentences. It's not that I can't understand it if you write a wrong sentence, but for people who really read the book, bad sentences really affect the reading experience. Once again, the story progresses very smoothly, and the plot is compact while also taking into account the overall logic. Up to now, the plot has been advancing in an orderly manner from the first perspective of the protagonist Leomundo, without arranging very abrupt events or obviously unreasonable plots, which makes people feel comfortable watching. I won't go into the shortcomings. It's up to you, the author, and I don't want to rush you. After all, we also know that high-quality writing takes time. No matter what, we still hope that this book can be completed successfully with high quality and quantity, so keep writing [love] [love] [love]

It's very interesting. It's not Tomato's usual exaggerated and mindless writing. The protagonist has brains, quality, and warmth. To be honest, I think this book might have done better if it had more ideas, but I don't know. I hope Tomato will give you more in the future, and the author will do my best!

It looks good but there are too few. There is no system and no plug-ins. The achievements are all based on one's own strength and wisdom. It is wonderful. 👍👍👍

Unsystematic realistic style, perfect world view setting, rigorous society, class, currency, system, setting... Forget it, I can't say these things... In short... Smart Feisha! King of the Kobolds! Woof woof woof!

The writing is quite good, I recommend it to those who like fantasy [laughs]

I'm a bookworm for ten years. From the time I stayed up late reading novels with a push-button phone in 2012 to now, I have read a lot of various themes, including a lot of western fantasy farming novels. I really can't read many of them all the time. This is a very good book. It's a good read and I love reading it [laughs][laughs][laughs] Come on, author!

The logic is clear. It can be so exciting without a system or a cheat. The characters are rich, and it is not just a single conflict, nor is it a mindless focus. The world view is grand and the future is promising!

This is an excellent Western fantasy novel that was almost delayed by the title and bad reviews. After reading the latest chapter in one go, the writing is smooth and logical, and the online digging and repairing of holes is very good. It has its own Western fantasy writing style, which is rare in Tomato. Some comments say that it is a pseudo-Western fantasy, but the fact that the protagonist is an Easterner who travels through the past and crosses Chinese and Western cultures is not an exaggeration at all. Now the latest chapter of "Insiders from Extraterrestrials" suggests that you can pave the way for everything. The integration of life, culture, technology and development are all worthy of paving the way. If Che Zhulunhua writes more, the character image will be more distinct and more in line with the characteristics of the novel. I just like this kind of author. This kind of novel is not tiring to read. It is logical and warm. It is warm and non-toxic. It's not like other books that are either too exhausting to write or read along with the four major classics, or are all kinds of poisonous green-haired turtles.

I only reviewed it after tying it in one breath (860 chapters). It has a very traditional Western fantasy setting. It ranks among the top three of all the Tomato farming novels I have read (in a broad sense). It is also the best Western fantasy novel I have read after Sword of the Dawn. It is even more traditional and more Western fantasy than Sword of the Dawn. It's like going back to the days when the beast's blood was boiling, the devil's laws, and the magic apprentice. Moreover, this book is only the author's debut online novel. For a debut novel, with this quality, it is also a popular candidate for the best emerging author of the year. It is very suitable for readers who like Western fantasy and Western fantasy infrastructure farming. The author's writing style is relatively humorous and the style is relatively relaxed. There are no knives and there are many cute dogs. To be honest, the harem is very coquettish and pretentious, not grand at all. I think you either don't want to have a harem, if you want to open it, you should be more generous and sincere, I don't like the way the female partner throws herself into the arms of the male protagonist and the male protagonist refuses to welcome her, but there's nothing else.

A highly recommended time-travel lord novel... The background draws on many settings from World of Warcraft... Therefore, the characters' races appear more reasonable, unobtrusive, and easy to understand quickly... The numerical design of the battle is reasonable... It can be seen that the author has carefully checked the information... The story has a compact and reasonable rhythm... The characters are vivid and distinct... The personality is outstanding... Funny and humorous... Pictures It feels very strong... It highlights that the author has rich experience in writing... And there are people who help review the manuscript... Re-polishing the plot... Making the story more in line with the taste of online readers... The quality is guaranteed... Although there are some flaws... But the flaws are not hidden... It is one of the rare masterpieces I have read... As long as it is not abused... I believe I will continue to follow up...[Laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's a very unexpected novel. I really like the description of the characters in it. But I hope the plot of the little mouse can be handled well. I don't want to see the old plot of the princess returning and the royal family fighting within the family again. . .

First of all, the plot is okay and the early details are okay. It is not as exaggerated or unrealistic as some works. However, there are also problems that I don't like. 1. Why are druids as elves so cowardly? The more powerful you are, the more cowardly and friendly you should not be. It cannot solve problems. Being peaceful and not wanting disputes is not cowardice. Being afraid of everything. 2 Soul Transmigration is soul transmigration. You can explain it as the influence of the memory of the original owner, but it is too deliberate, which is not good. It feels like you are trying to make up for the unreasonable behavior in another world. 3. The portrayal of some characters is also too deliberate. First of all, I won't comment too much on the cowardice of Druid. I haven't seen the back, I don't know. It's just that based on the current "sleeping game", it makes me feel ridiculous. Solve problems by sleeping? This may not be the western fantasy world I thought. Furthermore, the intellectual enlightenment of the kobolds is too baffling. They somehow know the common language, and they obviously have little contact with the cowardly races of the outside world. But somehow there is a genius who knows the common language, has a high IQ, and knows how to exchange. I think domestication is better than this. . . The existence of this kobold leader seemed to make up for the existence of the beast mother. It was too deliberate. The blood feud between kobolds and humans was just put aside. . . I don't understand Although there are shortcomings that I think may be my personal problem, I apologize. But if you come to force me to spray me, then it is your problem. I hope everyone can have a little more branches and spray me lightly. A good work that needs to be improved. The author's imagination is good, but the writing style and arrangement could be more thoughtful. This is a good work. I hope it will get better and better. Let's brainstorm and take action (っ＾▿＾)💨

Really super pretty It can be said that I have found the best novels for boys in 🍅. Lord novels like Xixiang are best developed on their own without golden fingers. I really love the Western Fantasy infrastructure and the extraordinary system is also great. The author must stick to the single heroine of childhood sweethearts🥺 Olivia is great The plot is also well paced, not greasy, and the logic is online. It will not let people know the subsequent development at a glance. It has the feeling of unfolding from the perspective of playing a game. There are no mindless supporting characters. The female characters also have their own characteristics. There is no plot like falling in love with the male protagonist inexplicably. Too rare The author feels that the quality of this book is better than that of King. After writing it, I can go out to preach (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ I posted this twice before posting it. Shen He, I hate you😭

Reading along the way, my biggest feeling when reading this book is that it is smooth. I can feel that the author has paid attention to the structure of the world view. He is humorous and humorous without making people feel ridiculous. So far, I have not seen any poisonous points. All in all, it is a rare and good book.

The writing is very good, the overall style is funny, but it is not lacking in rigor. The plot is neither fast nor slow, attractive, and the details are well grasped. It also slaps the faces of those authors who cannot write novels without the knife. The protagonist is an ordinary person who travels through the body of a barbarian in the north. There are currently two stories. The first one is about the protagonist and his tribe coming to live in the Riverbend Territory. On the way, he picks up a little mouse from the imperial princess (who recognizes the protagonist as his father). The protagonist becomes a central figure from a marginal soldier, and the story ends with the protagonist. Gathering wild folk, kobolds, ogres, and the elf princess Freya, a giant bear-shaped marmot, met. They communicated with the demigod Druid Bobaka, developed technology, and turned the kobolds into dog-shaped goblin craftsmen. There is a love part, but not too much, not too little, just right. The turning point is that the identity of the little mouse is told by the protagonist to the adventure group looking for the Elf Atrium, and the members of the adventure group tell it to the knights. Then there is the story of the protagonist leading the little mouse to escape before the knights' large army arrives. Finally, there is a certain sensational part. The protagonist chooses to "sacrifice" himself and hands the little mouse to the members of the knights riding griffons. He falls off the cliff, but there is no such vulgar plot as a knife or amnesia. The protagonist is found by the marmot and brought back to the territory. The second part is the story of the protagonist's continued development. I won't reveal more, as the follow-up is not finished yet. There is no system, it all depends on the luck given by the upper level narrative.

The reading experience is great. Although it does not have an epic feel, the humor has surpassed that of the high-quality Sword of the Dawn with similar themes. The main reason is that it is not embarrassing and is comfortable to watch. Although the plot is not ups and downs, it still made me watch more than half of it in one day. So, the author will update it soon! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

This is a standard Western fantasy novel. The author relies on his solid writing style and rigorous attitude to present a Western magical country in front of our readers. If you also have a strong thirst for knowledge and a rich enough imagination, then I recommend you to come and explore this "world".

It looks good. I checked the author's information diligently. There are some compromises with the plot and world view, but there are no common sense bugs. The plot is not complicated, the interpersonal relationships are not messy, and you can watch it with your mind. A rare piece of good farming writing in male videos. Much better than those stallions and those who are always murderous. It's also worse than writing both the system and the plug-in. In the end, the plug-in was written like a bastard in a wishing well. He gets whatever he wants. That's not called a golden finger, that's called who's your daddy. There are no systems or plug-ins, not even many adventures, so watch with confidence.

The logic is clear, the growth point of the protagonist's camp is not abrupt, the combat power does not collapse, the character creation has a clear focus, and the plot is rich and interesting. Lao Chu really put his heart into it, and I hope he can continue to write steadily and stop being a eunuch. (By the way, when did Lao Chu become Level 2 [Shocked])

It's a rare good book on Tomato. It's enjoyable but very unconventional. The writing is very good and the descriptions are very real. The laughs are dense but not deliberate. Unlike some books where the main character's character is like a mental patient just for laughs.

Tomato is one of the few good books. Everyday life is very warm. There are no poisonous spots or knives. Very purely written. At least the author plays Mount and Blade very deeply. Writes about medieval military battles at least more than most lordship majors do. But for some people, the tomatoes everywhere in Shuangwen are bland. I have read many books on Tomato, all of which have naughty characters. It generally annoys me greatly to watch. Everything written is very unreasonable. But this book is written very well by the naughty child Elf Princess.

It's a bit rigorous in the fast-paced 🍅, but the occasional witty humor plays a very good role in adjusting it. The large-scale description of human geography is mixed with a long list of names of Western forces and people. If you don't read it carefully, you really can't understand the relationship. [Crying] I thought I had survived human geography, but it turned out that what followed was all artillery cleaning, domestic and foreign affairs. I wanted to watch Western fantasy, but ended up watching Eastern history [awkward laugh]

It is a rare Western European themed alien world travel masterpiece. The writing is not that good, but the logic is basically self-consistent (some parts are still unreasonable, but it is a common problem in Internet literature, and it is difficult to form a universe worldview with a real structure in an imaginary world). The protagonist does not have any cheats that defy the sky. It can also be said that the cheats come from modern vision and thinking. The emotional lines are also handled well, not confusing and traceable. The overall writing style is also more humorous and interesting, vividly portraying the quirky, silly, cute and heartless image of the kobolds. In fact, I feel that the author did not write the kobolds well enough [laughter]. The plot design is a little tired now, but the level is still high. Overall, it is a good book. The plot behind it will be very tomatoey.

I've just read the second volume, and it's a book I can read. Worth a look. (Also, can the author simply draw a map to see the distribution of forces? After reading one volume, I am still confused about this continent. Or, like a beast's blood boiling, specifically describe the map territory and force races [I learned it]) Or if any book friend has read to the end, can you give me a general introduction [sending my heart]

I originally wanted to give four stars. Fraser and Strong were a little bit toxic in the early stages. Let's not talk about reading cool articles. The subordinates are out of control, leveraging the protagonist's interests and stealing the protagonist's achievement points. It is very uncomfortable. Although I have always said that they are not subordinates, but companions, but what I read is an online novel, and it is not a masterpiece of Chinese studies. It doesn't have to be so meaningful, right? In the end, fortunately, Fraser majored in science, and Strong became a strategic and ruthless general, although he still had to give orders before obeying them. But then again, except for a little bit of poison, this book is one of the few online books that can be read with your mind. It ranks third among online books in my heart. The Master of Mysteries - The Super Mechanic - "The Dog's House" The author will endorse many things and will check the information before writing. There will not be some ridiculous plots. Overall, it is very comfortable to watch. 9.5 Points are definitely too low.

The most comfortable Western fantasy at present, especially after the sword master's will, the rhythm is very comfortable, and the author has obviously planned the plot intentionally. The emphasis on writing and ink of the main and supporting characters is also very comfortable, with more watery strokes and less dry strokes.

Many good-quality novels cannot cross the threshold of "profit". It is not easy for every writer who writes books seriously. The author of this book has qualified writing, emotional characters, and can listen to pertinent advice. It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air among tomatoes. (Why does it look like a navy [staring])

What I personally feel is the most distinctive part of this book is the social ecological system composed of "people" of various races and regions. After the incident, the interesting changes that occurred in the territory every time, this part that is more daily is more attractive to me. Among the many interesting characters, kobolds and elves, as well as "characters" that fit the style of this book, set the tone of this book in a very comfortable range. It is not too bitter and hateful, nor is it brainless, but more of a humorous style. Generally speaking, it has distinctive features, setting logic, plot rhythm, and character creation, all of which are harmonious and unified. They have been consistent with the same tone for so long. I love so much. In the end, I hope I can stick to it and finish the book.

It's a bit like Sword of the Dawn. There are a lot of things to write about. It's a promising future. But can you write about the development of Pig's Foot from the perspective of the enemy? Otherwise, you will miss a lot of cool points. Of course, this is just a suggestion. If you don't write it, I still support it.