The System Is Paranoid, and One Person Has Become a Martial Artist?

Writing a fan fiction heroine early will basically determine one-third of the reader retention. Let me ask the author, how many of you who like one person fandom have read Little Broken Window? It's a blessing if one out of ten sees it! Little Broken Window is not a phenomenal TV series like Love Apartment. "Little Broken Window" is really not suitable for blending into one person. It is a serious youth campus drama [face-covering] [face-covering]. It is not like a love apartment that can be thrown into the alien world with just a little magic modification. It's over, I didn't adjust the iPartment timeline.

Is there Zhuge Dali? Zhuge Dali who practices Qi

The content is very good, the time of the integrated world is close, and it does not fool the readers, it is done carefully. Keep writing. The protagonist is very real and not exaggerated. The world of fusion is also unique.

My mom, my grandma, my gown, my coat, my aunt and aunt, who were so scared that I was limping, my dad, my grandpa, my socks, my shoes, my uncle and uncle, half of my pants were wet, my mom, my immortal milk. Breasts, seventh uncle, third aunt, my son, my sweetheart, my torx screwdriver, my father, my mother, my uncle sells brown sugar, my heart, my liver, my dried red beans and radish, precious eggs, night pearls, a rare thing fell from the sky

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Good ideas and good writing

It's pretty good, but the system isn't in place, but it's okay, after all, the combat power is not low.

The writing is very good, very good and very interesting. Just don't stop updating. The author is great! ! !

In fact, the writing is quite good, but to use a sentence from Stephen Chow's movie, it's called What Are You Talking About? Are you doing it? Who is Zhong Bai and who is Lu Chuan? They are confused. Are they famous? Is it very popular [covering face]

It should be a rich man, a poor man Either you write mixed martial arts at the beginning, write half of it, and you can't understand it at all. There is also the failure of Feng Shayan. I really want to give you 4 stars, but this article does not allow it.

The series is very interesting and an excellent book.

This book is generally good, but since I haven't read Little Broken Window, I don't know what the author's plan is for Little Broken Window. However, the subsequent writing is very good, and it is very interesting to read. I hope the author can work hard.

It's like a shit yellow button, it's over [smile]

It's too sudden for you. Have you changed the platform? Please let me know.

I feel like Zhong Bai can't be the heroine, she's just an ordinary person.

Interesting, isn't it? , Then can you tell me, will there be any updates in the future? Or open a new one, where can I find it?

Author, please work hard, don't interrupt updates, don't be lazy, and don't take advantage of others. [Cover face]

The more the merrier, the writing is quite good and it suits my taste. I give you a thumbs up.

Super beautiful, highly recommended, everyone must watch the finale

Who is the heroine? Zhong Bai?

Okay, good, come on!

Well written, author, please work harder [Like]

Why did it end?

Is this the end?

Very good, I don't know why the score is so low⊙_⊙

It suits my taste. Personally, I think the company, as an official, is unqualified. Strangers are also human beings.

Much prettier than the other fics

The linkage between the aliens and Soul Ferry is great. The small broken window plot in the front is redundant, but the superintendent in the back is perfect.

Nice. The style of painting is very comfortable. Especially the ending is so refreshing and refined

It looks good. It's smooth overall, but it's a little lacking.