It's Just a Secret Place of Cards, the Warmth of Going Home

The writing style and the ideas are what amazed me the most about this book. But the plot is a bit sparse. If you didn't look at the plot, I think the score should be higher than 9.5, Even comparable to Zhan Shen Shen. Looking at the overall score, it should also have a score of 9.1. This book is really worth reading. In addition, the author should help me code the words faster! ! !

Judging from the current content, there are no shortcomings except for the stream of consciousness. I can only say that the stream of consciousness is like this. If you get it, you will like it very much. Don't write something so amazing... A young man walks across the world leaning on his sword. He leaves in a hurry and returns in a blur. I don't know who in the world is dreaming about it. One dream is floating, and the other is yellow beams.

Okay, okay, the title of the book is a little confusing, and I was almost persuaded to read it, but luckily I opened it. It's my favorite type, with deep plot lines and a big world view. So far, it seems like it's a fantasy antique romance drama disguised as Yu-Gi-Oh!

It's really good, but there are a few updates. Come on, dear author, read with me. I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author, and coding is my bounden duty. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet literature. Starting today, there will never be a shortage of updates, and they will never be updated. I will not watch dramas, travel, play games, or write about literature. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, work hard, strive for brilliance, enjoy coding, and be worthy of your youth and readers. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding, day and night, and never give up.

Finished reading, please update soon! The author is simply a genius in writing novels. His sentences are very fluent and his poems are full of charm. As for the content, I hope that the card competition can also be familiar with it. Now it's up to you and me to add some settings and player health to make the situation change. You can refer to Yu-Gi-Oh! The plot and characters are just what I dreamed of. However, an ant like me only deserves to dream. Thank you to the author for writing it and letting me know that there can be such beautiful things in life.

It's pretty good. The subject matter is novel. In the card genre, most of them are card-making novels that rely on their own talents and some reference materials to create cards. As for your book, which is based on a story and uses cards as the result of your own choices, it can be said to be different from most of Tomato's card-based novels. At the same time, the details, emotions, and relationships of the characters in your writing are well written, and the story background and foreshadowing are also concise and clear, allowing people to know what may happen next at a glance. Therefore, this book is worth recommending. Come on, try to write an excellent novel.

Okay, okay, okay, this thing is so well written, especially the copy of Su Qi. Although I have only seen this copy at this time, the writing is excellent, the story frame is also very good, and the wiring ability is also very strong. , I didn't say it was written in a confused way. Anyway, I quite like it.

A rare masterpiece, gold always shines "But people will eventually be trapped by the things they don't have when they are young." Yes, the protagonist is young and frivolous. Jinghong is really just Jinghong. In the end, he loses his ambition. Eventually, he loses his pride as a time traveler and becomes a walking zombie. This is the case for the rest of the world. Sister, yes, it is a pinch of fire that turns into a moth. Maybe this fire is not to illuminate her, but it is fire after all, like charcoal in the snow or a candle in the night. It is a pity that we are destined but not separated. This is the case in the world. Su Muxue, yes, the young man who saved her that day had no intention of betraying the family, but he just took the opportunity to cause a torrent. She asked for it but couldn't get it. She loved her so much that she was crazy... If we were together with Muxue in this life, we would be together in this life. … There are many more, this book is very real, the plot and missions are lifelike, all of them are unsatisfactory, but also very false, because at least they have a better ending in the end, and it is also very dreamy, because this life can make up for all the regrets in the past, and you can come back if you are not successful or unsuccessful. All in all, it is a good book with good literary polish. The villain's IQ is online and can even be said to be very real. It makes people feel that this is a real time travel. The second world, Loli Saigao, is still considered he (otherwise I wouldn't read it)

This is the best fusion novel I have ever seen. The emotions of the characters, the development of the story and the ending of the fragments are all so well written. Without further ado, I'm going to read a novel [Love]

Really, this book is very beautiful, with all the foreshadowing and details. The characters' emotions are also very clear. I feel that if this book was better written, it would be as good as the Demon Suppression Pass.

It is full of charm, and some stories are also reincarnations. The real world and the virtual world overlap, and the past life and the present life meet. It is a calamity and a fate. I only hope that the regrets of the past life can make up for the perfection of this life. This book is absolutely similar to the cards I made. The writing style of that book is funny, while this book is more literary. The story is touching and philosophical, human beings and the devil in the heart of spades? The author has probably read the card book in Mao Li!

I was amazed by the Su Qipian in it. What is a lie and what is the truth? I witnessed Su Jinghong's ambition to drift with the crowd, Mr. Su's "saint" came to Su Wutong Road and Su Qi invited immortals to die, the greed of the refugees, and the teachings. The disciples' deified worship, he is a saint, he saved everyone, he is a liar, he fools everyone, Su Muxue's confusion, Su Jiu's melancholy, there are too many, that year Su Jinghong chased his dream, and that year Su Qi met his end in soup. The Su Muxue card at the beginning of the novel made me feel very clearly what people call the past and present life.

It's so beautiful. I especially like Su Qi's part at the moment. You buried your bones in the mud under the spring. Su Qi. Those three lines: What is heaven? What is... Just? What is an immortal? ! After pairing it up, I watched it. Su Wu's shaping feels very good. Ergou's expressiveness is very poor, but it feels like Ergou has another dungeon special. But I still hope that the author will write more exciting things later. I think Su Qi's part is a perfect success, but the serialization period and the new writing are too long, so many people can't stand it and quit. The more people follow, the more people will flow. Hold on.

How can I say that? It is very well written and beautiful and can basically be called a masterpiece. The only problem is that the title of the book is really not worthy of the writing style. It is obviously very good, but it is the title that made me miss the book four times. Moreover, I had better read the title because I was bored and wanted to read a good article. Also, it is already 101 chapters. Where did the promised Bai Si go? It is not there at all. Hey, the worst thing. The important point, and the one that I think should be deducted, is that the dungeon for the main plot was opened too fast. Half of it was completed after only 100 chapters were written. Now the card elements of the book only account for half of it. It would be much better to wait until more than 100 chapters of cards are written before starting the main plot. Now that it is opened so quickly, it can be clearly felt that it is off topic. Opening it so quickly and deviating can easily cause a large number of people to withdraw from the book. Oh, the author! (By the way, I wish the author will write better and better. It is rare to see such beautiful writing. By the way, I urge you to update more)

The collision between reality and ideals is also the collision between the extraordinary and the ordinary. The dragon approaches the snow mountain and the swordsman opens the sky!

I feel that the world view created by the author is very grand, but the logic is a bit confusing (maybe there are more foreshadowings, I can see). However, the characterization of the protagonist is lacking, but the plot feels very novel, and I look forward to the follow-up [Chigua]

Don't read the introduction. I'm really confused after reading the introduction. Keywords: brother and sister, system, card Card battle type, it feels like 5% Yu-Gi-Oh and 10% Pokémon. The battle is based on card possession or summoning. The writing is quite good, the main plot and brother-sister relationship drama are not obtrusive, and the overall world structure is quite attractive (thank you to the author for the excellent main plot development that made me almost forget the title). It is not the kind of story that focuses on strategy and scheming. My intention score is 8.5-8.8, But there are too few people watching it, so it's 5 stars. Downgraded, the battle and plot development will not work.

Needless to say! Emotional talents can be called geniuses! The process is well written! And... The knife! It smells so good! I haven't seen a knife in a long time, and it can make me emotional! The last one seems to be Mi Huhao? And your first book! I thought it was so familiar and so beautiful. It's the same author!

Don't believe the title and introduction of the book. The content is of high quality. The story lines of the three characters are amazing. It can be said to be imaginative. The content also contains frequent golden sentences. It is worth reading. The contents of the reminder cards are all foreshadowing. Please take a closer look. I think it will make you feel enlightened when the mystery is revealed later. The author's naming of the characters can be said to be original and absolutely a fairy grass. I look forward to the follow-up.

It's pretty good so far, other content is average, and the sister's PK fight is also boring and boring, but Su Qi's story is very attractive so far. Approval from a hardcore book lover who has read for 5,000 hours.

The writing is good, capable and smooth, and the card settings are very exciting. The shocking feeling of completing the story of the Drifter is like the reappearance of dusty and immortal history. This is very attractive to me. However, the male protagonist blindly being behind the scenes makes people feel a little frustrated. The sense of separation from the previous shock is too strong, which somewhat disrupts the rhythm.

It's very good. It's one of the rare masterpieces in Tomato. The copy is more beautiful than the main text. Reading it can make your brain grow. But at first I thought it was a behind-the-scenes article or a semi-behind-the-scenes article, but it was revealed hastily. The system doesn't have enough sense of existence, does it feel like it's been scrapped later? I thought that by binding a secondary character, new settings would be added, but it turned out that except for the first copy, it was more in line with the previous article. The later dungeons are written as if they were upgraded to fight monsters in the dungeon. They have broken away from the original setting, and have turned the semi-behind-the-scenes system novel into a novel about global martial arts. It can be said that the content after the second plot is the biggest failure. It is not that it is not exciting, but it is out of context and the plot cannot be connected. Now it has become an ordinary apocalyptic dungeon. In fact, it would be good to continue writing it with the initial setting, but it may have to be sacrificed and it cannot become a dedicated girl-controlled lolita novel. As for why I gave it four stars, it is very exciting to read the dungeons separately. After all, each dungeon is quite long, so just read it as a short story. The content of the dungeon is indeed very exciting. If the setting can be continued and the plot is better connected, it will definitely be a proper five-star novel.

It was late at night, and it took a long time of companionship to make this impression impressive. I admire the author's idea very much. After all, I saw at least three short stories and one main line. The quality of these three short stories (not remembered for the time being) can be regarded as a good article in my eyes. Simply put, it means that you can write a book alone. This surprised me. I know very well how valuable these are, so I think this book is one of the high quality ones. I personally like to read carefully, so I can understand and discover many foreshadowings in the book. I think it is a pity that the story about "Yuan" is not as complete as the story of "Su Qi" and the brave "Su Qi". This hazy feeling will be attractive, but I hope the author can write a story specifically for the story of "Yuan", so that it will not have any impact on the main plot and satisfy curiosity. If not, there will be no regrets, so the author can only make a suggestion. Talking about the current story, in my eyes, the story of "Su Qi" has brought this book to a great height. Judging from the current direction, there will be more stories like "Yuan", "Su Qi" and the brave "Su Qi" appearing in the article. This also makes me look forward to it. I also hope that the author can continue to write this story at such a high level. I also have a strong feeling of comparison. From the author's message at the end of the chapter, I can see that the author is very conscientious and responsible. , Is also a very interesting one. Of course, this is a bit redundant. After all, people with such writing skills are naturally of good character. I think I have read a small number of books, and the author's books can be said to be outstanding among the books I have read. Although I don't know what other people think, I think it is very comfortable for me to read. I have also experienced being scolded. The main purpose of mentioning it here is to hope that the author can persevere. In short, don't let down the readers who like this book. I believe everyone has had a dream, and the protagonists in the dreams are so similar, and I am no exception, so I have a feeling for the protagonist in the book, which is one of the reasons why I like this book. Everyone has a story, big or small or few or more. I mainly want to show that one of the stories is similar to mine, which is another reason why I like it. The world is very big, but sometimes it is very small. There is only one place where you can accommodate yourself, just like the stars, small but shining. This kind of thing sounds pretty good, doesn't it? Like I said before, just find a destination. The story in the book is very long because the story is not over yet. When this story ends, it always feels shorter, and this feeling of worrying about gains and losses is not uncommon. I still hope that the author can stay longer. This is just my hope as a reader. The story is still long, and I don't know if the people reading it will continue it, but this is all in the future, and time will give the final answer... Put this aside for now and come back to it after you finish it ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ

Judging from the early plot, it's really good. The author's writing is really good. Moreover, this article is supposed to be a single female protagonist. The Su Shixue is the tool man preparing for the next chapter of the protagonist. So please feel free to read it. It's just that the side plot is a bit long. I hope other book friends will read it patiently. I can only give four stars because the volume is too small now. Please update the author.

Su Qi's part is the most interesting part of the book. How the little guy defeats the superior immortal step by step, especially in the end when he dares to ask the immortal in heaven if he dares to come to this world, and the one at the back where he plays chess with the gods. Although I didn't understand it very well, the writing is still good. The protagonist is not bound by morality in the traditional sense, and tells others in his own way that even if what you do is not necessarily a good thing, you have saved many people's lives, and others will still thank you. You have a great scholar to argue for you (self-understanding). When the protagonist becomes stronger, it will really feel uncomfortable if you continue to write as before, but I feel that the author can try to enter the dungeon that will not bring you the power you gain.

After reading it in one go, (please update it soon, author), I feel that Su Qi has too many scenes at the moment, and then I forgot about it as a memory after watching it [laughing awkwardly], but it is still very exciting (should we return to reality soon, right?)

It's hard to evaluate this book. The author's writing is excellent, but I came here for the card novel. I didn't expect it to be a light novel, telling the world view of the boss's previous life in the skin of cards. Each secret realm is a legendary story of the protagonist or the protagonist's relatives and friends...

It's absolutely amazing, the most satisfying novel I've ever encountered in my life. I didn't expect it to be written with such depth. Selfish people ask immortals to die to save the troubled world from dire straits, but are drowned by human greed in the dawn of darkness. Under the gaze of the stars, the brave man who "surrendered" to the gods changed the fate of the world with his life, and finally disappeared from people's minds, remaining only in someone's lonely memory. The pace is a bit slow, but you will definitely not regret it after watching it. The second time you read it, you will find that the foreshadowing and foreshadowing are also excellent. The main line of the novel is that the exciting stories in the secret realms are interspersed with the main world. In the end, all the plots are gathered into the main world, and the puzzle pieces of the story are completed and presented. Every time I see the introduction of the cards obtained after clearing the secret realm, I will be quite touched. Perhaps it is because of the origins that I can't let go. Wonderful stories often touch the soul and point directly to the heart.

@ The novel is well written and the rhetoric is gorgeous. There are some quoted sentences that made my blood boil. However, there are still major shortcomings in the setting of the power system. If you pay attention to the bonding effect between cards, you can learn from "Who taught him to play cards like this!" , If it is the background story of the card, you can learn from "Chinese Card Maker". If you want to enhance the production of cards, you can read "My Cards Are Ridiculous" The battle scenes in these three books are also good. But the author of the novel often disappears

The author writes very well! This is an amazing book! Don't underestimate yourself! From the several style changes throughout the book, it can be seen that the author has been confused and adjusted many times. These are valuable experiences! It will eventually be woven into a beautiful article tomorrow! Looking forward to the author becoming a god! I suddenly felt a strange sense of comfort when I saw that the author was as bad at naming as me... I helped the author come up with a book title. You can refer to it when taking the million-word book test. "In the time when I was writing, I am free to pick up my sister in this life"