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I haven't finished reading it, and I feel that the main plot of the book is a bit confusing, and the main plot has little relationship with the introduction. Mention some improvement points 1. The name of the main character must be easy to remember. There is a reason why there are so many leaves in tomatoes. Although it's a bad street, you can tell he's the protagonist at first glance. The protagonist of this book has a name I don't recognize. 2. The early plot must stick closely to the theme, and later the world view can be gradually expanded and enriched according to the story. 3. The protagonist can lose his memory, but the reader cannot feel like the plot is fragmented. The reader is God's perspective, the protagonist is the first person, and the plot requires information asymmetry to drive it. I hope the author will continue his work [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The author should practice writing Small World first. It's so confusing that I can't even guess.

The preface does not match the postscript, and the donkey's lips are not in line with the horse's mouth. I couldn't understand, so I backed off [smile]

It's outrageous. Their experiment only allows you to communicate normally. The key surveillance objects also allow you to exchange secrets through official communication channels. When the protagonist wakes up and knows this secret, his memory will be deleted and hypnotized by them. Then they can use the communication channels provided by the villain to exchange these secrets at will. What is the villain keeping secret? Treat people as fools

The main plot has not yet been completed, but branch plots are added like crazy. The author's level needs to be improved, and the priority is unclear. I hope to improve.

It's so confusing. After reading a few chapters, it feels like a story is being told continuously. I always seem to be indifferent to sudden things. I believe in what others say. I feel very uninterested. The more I read, the more irritated I am.

I was confused when I watched it, and I felt like there was a lot of nonsense and inner words that were probably talking to myself, which made me feel a little uncomfortable (just my personal thoughts)

My brain feels so confused The more you listen to it, the more confused it becomes.

I can't understand it...

No, this work is not good, personal opinion

It's too long-winded, a little ink-stained, and I feel like I have no direction after writing for a long time.

The preface does not match the postscript, and the subject matter is in vain.

Can't read……

Just one word, chaos

It's so confusing, I almost cried when I saw it

The preface does not match the postscript

I can't understand, it's so confusing

What is this? It's funny.

Doesn't look good

[What][What] I really can't understand, it's too confusing

The worldview is huge, but the clues are too confusing. There are various foreshadowings set by the author, but these terms and foreshadowings are not explained at the beginning. Making this seem trivial

Nine-star praise, don't ask, ask and you'll get the highest rating, just like your protagonist, 100-level rewards