Heart Signal 6: Which Guy Could Resist a Girl Who Makes the First Move?

It was very interesting to watch before, the male protagonist is so powerful, but since Sister Yang appeared on the scene, the male protagonist forcibly reduced his intelligence, which is a bit ridiculous. He is such an emotionally stable person and has had love experience in his previous life. In addition, Sister Yang is not really beautiful as a fairy. There is no need to reduce his intelligence to such an extent.

It's fine in the front, but it's really bad in the back. . . I feel like I've lost my wits, and I have to help several other male guests chase the female guests. I clearly know that some of the female guests like the male protagonist. The original part of giving gifts has actually been solved very decently, but the subsequent plot of helping the guests chase is a bit strange. . . .

Is this plagiarism or is the same author posting twice? I suggest you check it out. Heartbeat 6. You only play ball with your sister. The basic plot remains the same. Only a few names have been changed. The main thing is that this book has just been finished. You can just follow the same book.

Samsung Bar. The best part of the writing is the two Shura Fields at the dinner party. The writing is very good. It is really suitable for eating melons. Then after Yang Ruqing appeared, the writing was not very satisfactory. Two lives, especially the second life was so successful. What kind of woman has not been seen? She is a high-ranking family, Tsinghua University and Peking University. She is also the company CEO. After seeing Sister Yang, she became wise and then described it. There are really many metaphors. It is a bit awkward to read. She said that she had to hide the results. I really didn't feel the sweetness of the two people behind. I basically looked at it with a frown. Let's keep it for a while and see if there are any more melons to eat.

Two stars for the first 40 chapters. The first 40 are all describing the protagonist's awesomeness. The heroine can't stand it after the first chapter. Although she hasn't turned into a bitch yet, it's almost there. There is no feeling of rival at all. If it is turned into a female channel, this book will have a lot of market.

It looks good, but is this sudden change too fast? A wise man doesn't fall in love. Are you nervous? Blush? Is the sense of helplessness exaggerated? Don't write so absolute when transitioning a few chapters or setting up the previous characters. This change will surprise most readers🍉🍉🍉

The writing is good, but what I want to say is, what is a freelancer? I understand that the last show had to hide its identity, but what do you mean by saying there are a lot of things being planned? Just say you want to invest. This is simply lying.

To be honest, after reading this kind of niche novel, everything else feels the same. This one does have a novelty, that is, the protagonist is raised too high, so high that Sister Yang really doesn't deserve it. And then if you let the protagonist descend to earth at this time, the character will collapse. If he doesn't descend to earth, the heroine will not be able to reach her when she flies.

Can't write anymore? Because the male protagonist is too perfect in your portrayal, so perfect that it doesn't look like he really exists. Such a person reveals falseness in every aspect. And you said that if you want the other person to take a fancy to you, you can't steal the limelight from others by yourself first. Otherwise, how can you understand other people's personalities? How do you know if you like someone if you don't see what kind of person they are? Only if they do enough can you have a lot of material to refer to each other, instead of just focusing on the protagonist. It was originally a novice novel, but the way it was written was completely illogical. It was a bit embarrassing to portray the male protagonist as a top student from the northern Qing Dynasty. If you want to write this well, you should be silent in the early stages, talk less, do more, and use a third-person perspective to describe the other guests in the protagonist's eyes. Until the heroine appears and plays crazy straight shots to make the protagonist fall in love with her, this is the correct answer and the development method that is most in line with the protagonist's original intention. Then after the show ends, the mystery of the protagonist will be slowly unveiled and he will be with the heroine.

It is indeed very beautiful, but there are too many typos. Can Chen Ze and Chen Zhuo check it?