Potion Survival

The three golden chapters are as boring as a washing machine operating manual. Author, you write a novel, not a collection of items or rules in a fantasy world made by junior high school students during class. What is the most important thing in a novel? What kind of story is it!

I don't understand why the protagonist is like a villain [what] suddenly wants to kill others all at once, and suddenly wants to control the rights of other people's organizations. But doesn't the organization help each other and survive, so he has to demand the freedom of others??? What do you mean?

Make persistent efforts. Awesome.

Others update three times a day, but you update once a day. Don't you think it's a bit excessive? Update soon!

The writing about pets is very good, but the others are extremely average.

It's quite interesting, but the plot progress is a bit slow, and the protagonist's improvement is also slow.

Great ideas book.

Talent gift packs contain various one-time items. Does this have anything to do with talent?

Come on, author, I believe in you

Not bad, come on