Let You ***************

I hope you all will use your little hands to give me a good review. Your support is my biggest motivation. I want to tell you something. First of all, I know that everyone is helping me to score, but try not to give me one or two points. If I want to push my score, three points is usually enough. Otherwise, if I receive a lot of bad reviews, my traffic will be reduced to very little, with only a few dozen people a day. Secondly, the main focus of my book is on love development. Of course, after the prologue, there will be a main plot starting from the second part. But if you come with the mentality of wanting to read fantasy epics, see mysteries, see swords, and see slaying gods, then I will not be able to hand in a satisfactory answer. All I can do is try my best to write every female character. The fate of the main character, and then based on this, I designed a relatively large world. Even the early plots were driven by the female protagonists. This led some people to comment on me that there was no main line. In fact, it was not that I didn't want to write, but that I really didn't have the ability. I was just a new writer and I was still challenging myself. Also, some younger or simpler readers may not be able to understand some of the in-depth interactive plots with the heroine in my books. I have seen it more than once, and I have seen readers give me bad reviews because they thought the protagonist was using violence against the heroine. To be honest, I was helpless, because in fact this is just a way for two people to communicate their love. I don't want to write a purely mindless novel, because I hope that after reading my book, everyone will feel that this is a world with depth and history, and the characters here seem to be real. Therefore, I did not write a label such as a brain storage place at the beginning, because it is true that in the second part, there are some plots that need to be read with the brain, and many of them are not easy to express through Shen He. I will also use the words that require thinking to understand. Bai's expression is substituted, but this does not mean that my books are great. I know that what I have written still has many shortcomings. I am also deeply sorry for the readers who came with high expectations but were disappointed with me, but I still hope that everyone will be more tolerant to me, a newbie. My mentality is not a particularly good one. I will still feel uncomfortable for a long time when I see negative reviews. Of course, I have gradually gotten used to it, but I still long for the book to be read and the feeling that someone recognizes me. I saw some people saying that I was stupid, saying that the battle in the previous academy lasted two chapters. In fact, one and a half chapters were all foreshadowing. I had to pave the way for the plot of the senior sister later. When the real fight started, it was the end of the first half of the chapter. In the end, some people still said that the protagonist was beaten violently. It's not that I can't accept mistakes. Regular readers should know that I am very obedient. People who advise, but many times when I see some mindless comments and some offensive words, I will be really sad, so I hope everyone can be more merciful and thank you for your support. The second part should be about 500,000 words. I hope to achieve a small success in stages, and then the third part will be launched in Middle-earth, and it will be more Chinese style.

The writing is good, the author just needs to take it easy and don't get banned [Like] [Like]

I always feel distressed when reading a book because I can't free my hands to turn the pages [shy][shy][shy]

I love the author's character🥵

OK, this book is also very OK, so it is also very OK, OK, then it is OK, then it is OK, then it is so OK, then it is OK, it is also very OK, so since it is so OK, it must be OK.

A weakened version of @Tom's Victor, but the plot is sweeter than Tom's

I have finished reading the first volume and there is nothing particularly strange about it so far. Personally, I think this book is relatively fresh among the Western fantasy novels. The characters are more three-dimensional and the path switching is also very flexible (laughs). Overall, it has interesting elements and is quite refreshing. It is worth reading when you are fishing.

Over time, I found that there are more and more people writing stories among Tomatoes. I have only read the first volume so far. Although the author occasionally has minor problems such as typos and unclear expressions, the overall story is very good. Of course, if you don't like the story, you can clear the bookshelf. There's no need to leave too many uncomfortable comments in one of your few comments. Small mistakes can be corrected, but it is better to leave the description of the plot to the author. As the "audience" of this story, if you are satisfied, you will stay, if you are dissatisfied, you will leave.

I don't know why the rating is so low, but it's really good to watch. Recommendation from Lao Se Biao, hehehe, the relationship progresses very quickly, not too supervising, fast-paced and refreshing, there is no such thing as frustration, but the companion spirit seems a bit wrong, I hope you can enjoy it to the end, and don't do anything cruel halfway,

You must support it. It is so complete and has detailed plots and story lines. It is rare to find it anymore. Why do people still give negative reviews? [Almost crying]

I hope I can keep writing and not be held hostage

Just the first 50 photos made me excited. The writing is very good. I want to save the book now. Otherwise, I will feel uncomfortable after reading it. I have to wait for the serialization. Forget it, continue reading. I beg you to finish it.

The more I read this novel, the more familiar it becomes. The plot is the same as that of the online game Confession of a Noble Girl, but it's better than that one with a little more astringency.

It's okay, it's basically not toxic at all, I hope it becomes a big hit, and I hope the author sticks to it.

It's really good to read, and it's a rare novel that doesn't demote you.

The author's writing skills are very good, the details are well described, and the plot is logical and novel. However, the number of words is too few. It is rare to encounter such a good book.

There are two similar flowers growing on a tomato. One flower is more beautiful and popular among people, and I chose the other one. When people asked me why, I said: "Because this one is more yellow."

Come on, come on, come on, I hope I can keep writing

It's so healthy, so healthy. I have only read the first part so far. I have one thing to say. Some plots about increasing the upper limit of blood volume can actually secretly v my [shy][shy][shy][smile][smile]

It's a pretty good book on Tomato.

The book is very good, and I think the content is very interesting. The characters are well written. When I saw the teacher learning about magic marks, I knew I should download it so that I wouldn't miss it later. Also, write more leisurely. If you write like this, I can only give you four stars [I learned it]

The content is rich and exciting, the details are exquisite, the characters are meticulously portrayed, and the plot is full of ups and downs. Some words in the novel are worth pondering.

The author is very powerful

Hope it won't disappear suddenly

The writing is very good, I love reading it

The novel is good, and more importantly, the author used some game terms, such as Se Lian and Kallia Magic Academy, which made it easier for me to imagine the scene while reading, but it didn't feel so troublesome, which is pretty good [laughs]

Good book, enjoyable and enjoyable for a long time just because of the content.

The author is really brave enough to write. I must give it a big thumbs up. It's so cool that it's not sloppy at all. By the way, should the author give our white-haired lolita more roles? After all, she is the one in the title and cover of the book. It feels like there are so few roles. I only watched the lolita, although I was completely attracted by Sese.

It's so beautiful, thank you to the author!

It's the first time I've seen a book written by Seese that doesn't drag on at all. It's a great book. I hope I can keep writing it [Top post][Top post][Top post]