An Exiled Immortal in the Mortal World

It's okay, the story frame is okay, but it's not decisive in killing, but it's not too indecisive. I want to slap my face and write a good story, but I always hold my breath, which is only half good. Also, the plot progress is slow. It's almost fifty chapters and I haven't practiced yet.

The author writes very well! Why don't you keep working hard to update?

Mysterious and mysterious, the door to all wonders, the difficulty of this type of writing lies in the plot after entering the world of immortality. Whether it turns into a dragon or an insect, it all depends on the author's use.

Well written, the author keeps it up

It's a good book, and it has brains. I recommend reading it. I've read too many novels about brainless killing, but this book gives people a different feeling. Highly recommended, I look forward to getting more interesting later on.

Mysterious and mysterious, this is the true cultivation of immortality. Put aside the mortal world, put aside the fighting, and put aside the cruelty. What you cultivate is the immortal energy, immortal will, and mystery. What you cultivate is a real immortal.

A true and objective evaluation. Although there are many shortcomings, it has the spirit of cultivating immortals, studying the exercises, earning spiritual stones, and the road is unstoppable, especially killing parents. Traveling to the North Sea, Dusk Wutong, and comprehending the world. The road is the cultivator in my heart. The characters also have their own scheming, thinking, and ambitions! But it's not as good as the Avenue of Immortality! Love [admiration]

I really like the style of this book, thank you so much, come on

To be honest, this is really beautiful, written with great care [I almost cried], a masterpiece with a score of 9.5 Or above The latest update shows that the protagonist has finally reached the world of cultivating immortals. I feel that the writing here is too speechless. The author wrote: The fate of those who come out of the world of cultivating immortals after walking out of the Tongxian Forest is to be blood slaves and must die! This setting is completely unacceptable, and it is even more paradoxical than the scarcity of things. Everyone knows that those who ascend in any immortal cultivation novel are potential stocks, so the people who come out of the land of spiritual enlightenment are more intelligent and have a more determined heart towards the Tao. Then I would like to ask these sects whether they are mentally ill and do not absorb potential stocks. Why do they want these local natives?

You come and you go, can you do it without you?