Mortal***

Except for the missing arms and legs in the title, the content of the book itself is pretty good.

It is very well written just in the mortal world, rigorous and orderly, everyone has a brain, but the title of the book is too ugly, and the update speed should be fasterᵎ(•̀㉨•́)و ̑̑ Come on

The author narrates the story of a poor child who lost his family and went through the hardships of survival step by step towards cultivating immortality under the circumstances of natural and man-made disasters. The writing is very exciting, but the author is working on two works at the same time. I wonder if the author can finish it? ?

It is in line with my idea of ​​a mortal cultivating immortality. It is not the kind where the protagonist wants to make elixirs and can master it in a month, but the quantity is too small and not enough to read.

Very good. It's rare to see a protagonist with online EQ and IQ. He is very smooth in dealing with things.

It's awesome, it focuses on a truth, how can you rise up if you don't endure hardships at the bottom, and you have to be forced to go to school and work by others?

I have been reading this book for several days. It is cleverly conceived, delicately written, and fascinating. All in all, it is a very good book. I hope the author can stick to it and not make it shoddy and disappoint readers even if he waits for an update.

I saw Chapter 45 and it was pretty good.

I don't know if I should say that the author's writing is good or bad. Anyway, the writing is quite attractive to me. It's just that the author's cultivation settings are different from most common logic. This can be said to have completely subverted my understanding of immortality novels, so I occasionally feel bored every time I read it. The reason why I am still following it now is because I want to see the complete system of the author after he writes about the world of cultivation. Forget it, I originally wanted to stick to it, but lately I've been getting more and more bored as I read it, and I know I probably don't like the style of this book anymore. Gone!

It's not bad. The writing is relatively realistic. It depicts the current situation of a small character struggling at the bottom. It is also interspersed with some opportunities from time to time, such as Qi training techniques, the discovery of gold-eating rats, and the help of some NPCs. It seems okay, but I don't know if the author can finish the book. I think he has written a book. Can the quality be guaranteed by writing two books at the same time?

Although it is spiritual and fantasy, it is not obtrusive and makes people accept it. Excellent writing style.

Goldfinger is small and the plot is reasonable

Indeed, he has sufficient writing skills and plot editing capabilities.

Four stars for now, I want to know if this has a female protagonist?

Very nice book. Come on!

Well written, keep up the good work!

Every aspect is written in detail. The process from mortal to cultivator is very well written. The cautiousness of the protagonist and the IQ of the supporting characters are all well written. Judging from the current progress of 60 chapters, it is the novel that I have read about cultivating immortals that is no less than Xuan Chen and Where is the Immortal Road?

Very very beautiful

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

I have read Chapter 80. How long will it take to get out of the Novice Village (to Qi training period)?

It feels like the early training sessions have a modern feel.

This book is very good, the writing is delicate, the logic is clear, the author writes well, the pace is slow, it is a slow pace, it is also very good to pass the time and read it [Read carefully]

The writing is very good, a rare quality article, I like it very much. The author should speed up the update. I want to gain weight before reading again. I must be steady and don't let it rot.

It's just like telling a story, it's vivid, but I always feel like the protagonist is taking advantage.

A good beginning of a story, I hope it will continue step by step, it is calm but fascinating, the author has put his heart into it.

Just change it to Sanxiu Zhuan.

Like, a little bit of a drag

Mortal flow without poking

The author is suitable for writing martial arts and fictional history.

I like novels in the style of Sanxiu Detao and Immortality.