The System Is Too Strong, Grassroots Teams Can Also Produce Ball Champions

The writing is very good. I like this kind of protagonist who is down-to-earth and training hard even though there are dangers. I can clearly see the growth and progress of the protagonist [heartfelt] It would be better to occasionally add a little detailed description of wonderful moments or interesting descriptions of character interactions. .

Different from previous football articles, this article uses the commentator's vision to describe the unique concept of the game, which brings a different color to the novel. However, there is a flaw in the selection of commentary. The author can look at He Wei's explanation, which is rich in poetry and has a lot of charm. There are also things about the protagonist's life. Don't be like a flowing water barrier. Football comes from life and is higher than life.

Personally, I think the writing is pretty good, and it's not the kind of mindless article. But judging from the author's arrangement, I feel like I'm going to join the national team. I actually don't hate being in the national team. It depends on how you write it.

Okay, you can. My bookshelf is mostly filled with football articles, and this one is top-notch.

The only football article I can read on Tomato. Unfortunately, the author did not write about participating in the 2014 World Cup. It will take a long time to reach the 2018 World Cup.

It's well written. Although I don't like the national football team, I don't object to the author writing about the national football team. I just hope it has less weight.

So far, it seems to be a very good novel. It doesn't grow too fast, and it doesn't become very awesome right away. It has time, space and development and change process, and it doesn't make people feel abrupt. Come on, the author, it will be a good book if it is written according to this situation.

A rare normal football article from Tomato

Good, good, one of the few good works, support [like][like][like]

You can go to Dortmund to play for a few years, and your value and goals will increase even more if you play.

The content of the game can be written well, but the commentary is not passionate enough and is always slow. After the game, I can write the comments of netizens and the titles of the media.

I feel it is a very good football novel.

The author's writing is very good and logical. I hope I can stick to it and not be affected by some extreme book fans.

It's really well written.

I don't know why such a good novel has such a low rating, but it's a pity that it ended so early! Come on, author! I hope I can continue writing✍🏻

A very good book. It has a system but does not rely on the system. You can achieve success by relying on your own hard work. That's the most exciting thing about this book

It's well written, not too strong. I can only say it opened up but not too much.

Come on, it's very well written.

Not brainless, enhanced and reasonable

😊A very good book, keep it up

It's well written, not superficial, but also in-depth. I give it five stars.

Not bad, worth a look

Okay, very good

Very good book

Come on, it's actually very well written.

The story can be advanced, but not outrageous

It ended too quickly. I haven't seen enough yet [crying]

When will ideals become reality?

How much I hope the national team plot becomes a reality [crying]

The writing on the court is particularly good, I hope to add some descriptions off the court.