Transferred to Tokyo and Met Her with One Wing

This is the first time I read the light novel style. Although it is the first time for the author to write, it can be seen that he has worked hard to perfect the story bit by bit with his pen (keyboard). The first perspective and split screen are like movie shots, showing us the story of the life change of the heroine Qianyu. She finally grows another wing and can freely pursue a better future. In the end, the agreement made by Qiu Yushou under the shrine is really romantic and full of pictures. I think it would definitely be very good to turn it into comics or even anime (I actually don't know much about these but I know that it probably won't be possible) and I'm looking forward to the extra chapter! (Bibi in a low voice: Let's forget about the second book)

Very good, I feel like watching Riqing. At present, there is no party struggle. Although the male protagonist has contact with the female partner, they are friends. The female partner makes me feel more like the CP boss [I learned it]

It's a very good Japanese-style novel. The plot and foreshadowing are quite coherent (although I personally don't like foreshadowing like Ao no Kanata Quartet). However, there is a small problem. The switching of perspectives feels a bit fragmented. Compared with the "Sister's Life" that I have read, which also likes dual perspectives, the perspective switching of the perspective of a step sister's life is done in a diary-like manner through chapters. Each chapter switches perspectives after the content of that day is finished. Dual perspectives are used to supplement the day and tell things that the other party does not know. Emotional changes. The general feeling of the book so far highlights the psychological changes of the woman "afterward". And because the process of perspective switching is sequential, it still feels a bit sudden with only one line of dividing line as a reminder. But overall it looks pretty good. I'll just base my remarks on my first impression.

It's really good-looking and the content is not ridiculous. I like daily articles😍

After reading it, it was pretty good. The heroine is very cute, and the male protagonist is also a Japanese standard Asasi male protagonist. The only flaw is that after the confession, there is suddenly no sense of expectation. Sure enough, it is still the same sentence: What is really worth remembering is not the love period, but the ambiguity before the confession, and the emotions during the confession. In addition, I am very grateful to this novel, which taught me a sentence: Confession should be a reward, not a lottery. In the future, I may be like this sentence, cautiously trying to figure out her thoughts, and finally "reward"

The atmosphere of Nikkei is particularly strong. I have seen a lot of Nikkei before, and the atmosphere is quite good. The whole book is based on the encounter, acquaintance, understanding, and later love between Ye Bai and Huajiang Qianyu. The book uses this as a clue throughout the entire text (although the author has said that his writing is poor, but I feel it is better than mine [facepalm]). There are a lot of emotional descriptions or psychological descriptions in the whole book, and the characters are very detailed, which is amazing. However, after the confession, the overall quality and length feel a bit down, but overall it's still pretty good, come on! ! I think the author can write about some small interactions between Ye Bai and Huajiang Qianyu after falling in love (this can be used as a side story). That's about it.

The dialogue between the characters fits what I understand. Then, the emotions are handled very well. There is no mention of emotional entanglements with other girls. The plot is just a little anxious. I know that I like the other girl, but I hypnotize the other person to think that he may not like me. Everything else is pretty good. Good cheers for the author! [You taste carefully]

Nice! It's really too short, too short! The main thing is that every time the protagonist says something, I am unexpected. I feel that the supporting characters are a little missing. I am looking forward to the travel chapter! I stayed up all night reading it, and I kept dozing off in class the next day.

It has the style of a Japanese light novel, sweet but not greasy, with sugar sprinkled in every detail. The first person and different perspectives gave me a refreshing feeling. The language description is very good. The action and psychological descriptions hope that the author can go further. I look forward to the author's next book.

The pioneer of this kind of light novel, the opening chapter is really amazing, the unexpected plot unfolds, and the twists and turns are just right, which left a big shock in my little heart, and I can't put it down now. I strive for a perfect ending, but I am afraid of the sadness at the end, a combination of contradictions, but as I continue to deepen, I finally understand that the story has an ending, and the ending is not the end. Keep it in your heart, it is eternity, just think of me as an innocent romantic. In my heart, they will keep going until the end of the world. Dear author, thank you. It is because of you that I feel a little more sad and a little heavier. We will eventually meet again hand in hand! Come on!

A particularly good-looking light novel, sweet enough to keep it interesting. The male and female protagonists are two-dimensional. Their sweet interactions and their respective monologues are the highlight of the book. The supporting characters are also very full [Top post][Top post][Please update][Please update] It's really good-looking, just jump right in.

It is one of the few high-quality campus love light novels on Tomato. It also reflects the differences between Chinese and Japanese cultures and can be compared with some Japanese novels (it also has my favorite second games). Anyway, keep up the good work (ง•̀_•́)ง

This is the first book I read on Tomato, and I was attracted by it as soon as I saw the name. The whole book is very sweet, and Chiha Hanae and other characters are all very three-dimensional! When I read a book, I spent half the time with the corners of my mouth pointing upward. The daily writing is very warm, and my heart feels warm after reading it. In fact, I had some problems with my grades before reading this book, and I was very bad overall. But after reading this book in five days, I adjusted my mentality in these five days. It is really healing! Sweet potato I love you! [Crying] Strong recommendation!

This is the first light novel with such a theme that I have seen. I only read it in 2 months (because I had to go to school), but it feels like two years have passed. The characters are all very distinctive and I like them all. I just don't know if Yue Xia-senpai ended up with Ryota in the end, so I care about it. Because I feel like I only particularly like Yue Xia-senpai's character, and I'm also relatively deep into the two-dimensional world. I've always thought that if I could meet such a senior, I'd cultivate a relationship and get her involved. All in all, this book is highly recommended. After reading it, my body spots faded a bit [like] [like] [face covering]

The first love story I read on Tomato. Ye Bai, the standard male protagonist template, has a wealthy family, stable emotions, strong learning and sports abilities, good physical fitness, handsome appearance, and a sense of justice. Qianyu Huajiang, the single-parent family has only affected her to be introverted and unable to make friends? Besides that, it's the beauty of ice and snow? The author mentioned changing the setting in the conclusion, and I think his decision was quite correct. But there's something strange about being so perfectly designed. But that's just an idealization, you shouldn't read the article so seriously. It's a pity that the relationship between the two was basically unimpeded, and they got together naturally, which was very ideal. Many details in "Christmas Confessions" reflect the author's intentions. From the perspective of an amateur author and a formulaic industrial saccharine, this article has no flaws and is a very good performance! Compared with the male and female protagonist's plot, I am more interested in the branch plot of Igarashi Haruna and Matsumoto Tsuyoshi. Unfortunately, the author did not give much ink and only wrote part of the plot of teaching basketball in detail. Their confession and sweetness are also spread through news, and it is a pity that they are not directly described. Overall, as an ideal book about Nikkei, this article has no merits and demerits. It is suitable for book lovers who have never been exposed to Nikkei as the first book to read!

I was already short of books. This is the first time I saw a novel like this on Tomato. The style is very daily and can make people calm down. In short, it is very interesting. If you watch a lot of fighting and killing, you can relax here. Finally, the author, please give it a try! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This is really good-looking. I have nothing to say, but the writing style is a bit strange and the light novel flavor is very strong. Maybe that's why I'm not used to watching it. Anyway, when I read the chapter about Shibuya's confession, I immediately transformed into a dark crawling maggot, squawking everywhere. [Hold face][Hold face][Hold face] It's just a little too short, not enough to read at all. I feel like I could write another hundred or two hundred chapters [Thinking][Thinking] But I still highly recommend it [Like][Like][Like]

This book is very tempting to single people like us, especially the author's portrayal of the characters in the article is relatively vivid and vivid. Whether it is from the psychological activities of the male protagonist or the psychological activities of the female protagonist, it can be seen that the author's portrayal of them is very good. Including the supporting characters, their existence also has its own appropriate benefits. In my experience of reading books for so many years, this book can be ranked at least in the top three. Because it is set in a Japanese context that is different from traditional online novels, it can better reflect cultural differences and that although there are some obstacles between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, they can overcome all difficulties through their love. This may be what we want to see. There are no obvious problems found in the article. I hope the author can continue to pass on some energy to us and keep moving forward. (I, who was also a freshman, envied the author's writing style [crying])

There is a long-lost comfort of reading Japanese novels I hope the author will work hard and don't stop (I haven't read enough) [eating melon]

This is the only first-person novel that I have read recently that is so good. Because first-person novels are more difficult than third-person novels, and I have very high requirements for books, so few first-person novels can be added to my bookshelf. The character descriptions and emotions in this book are pretty good, but it can also be a bit strange to read. It makes people feel that the pace is sometimes too fast and sometimes deliberately pauses. This is an inevitable conflict between the author and the reader when reading a book. This is also the biggest shortcoming of this book, but the author also writes in a less abrupt way. But I also hope that the author will not just write about love for the sake of two people falling in love, but to promote the relationship between the two through longer and more subtle things. In the early stage, it is almost all between the male and female protagonists. The other supporting characters do not have a lot of performance time. The entire novel is also as fast-paced as a light novel. But it's still a love novel worth reading [Chigua]

A light novel with a very refreshing flavor. It's well written, but the low rating is probably because the platform is not suitable for it.

Si Guoyi It is no exaggeration to say that it can be remade into an anime. The characters are described delicately and the sense of immersion is strong in the first place.

Watching Riqing for the first time gave me a very unique feeling. It can be considered a small to medium-sized novel, but the story line is very coherent, each character is well-shaped, the way the male and female protagonists get along makes people feel comfortable, and the mutual affection is also gradual. It brightened my eyes as I am used to reading the same love stories. All in all, this novel is quite good, but maybe because the subject matter is relatively niche on Tomato, it is not very popular. I wish this novel will become popular as soon as possible! —2025.4.23

It's really sweet. It makes me, an old man, feel a little bit excited. It's very good. It reminds me of the beauty of first love and the innocent love at that time. It's worth watching.

There are no shortcomings except that the ending is too sudden (although I don't know what else to write, I still feel that it is too early). The perspective of different characters can also give readers a better introduction. The character creation is also perfect, and it has the flavor of Japanese comics. I feel a little disappointed when I see the ending. I also hope that the author can write more similar excellent works.

This light novel is generally good. The author's knowledge content is quite high, it is relatively smooth to read, and the pace is not bad. Those who like cool and fast-paced articles can read it and practice their patience [Thinking]

How should I put it? It took me a few days to read it. This book gives me a very simple, plain, and simple feeling Of course, you said that the protagonist is either plain or simple. At the age of 17, he can sing, play basketball, dance, and has superb Chais Kung Fu😭👊 All it takes is a rap to be able to compete with the super chicken brother Tell me your sincere opinion and stop talking nonsense. Blandness and simplicity are the conclusions drawn from comparing "similar" novels. I rely on other messy ones, with super powers at every turn, guns flying all over the sky, and the extremely morbid love and outlook on life of the protagonist and other people around him. Why did it go against the will of heaven? To be honest, the author himself knows that the audience for Japanese campus light novels like Tomato is not wide. There is nothing wrong with being ordinary. The ordinary life of the people in the book has surpassed 90% of people in reality😭 Every time I read it, it may bring some comfort to my soul. Also, I think it is not sweet enough, and it has not reached the excessive concentration of industrial saccharin. 😭👊The new book gives me a lot of sweetness😭👊It takes a little knife to experience better sweetness😭👊

This novel is really wonderfully written and every word is exquisite, which makes reading it feel like a spring breeze. The author's writing style is smooth and contagious, as if every sentence contains profound thoughts and rich emotions. The article has a rigorous structure and clear logic, and each paragraph serves the theme appropriately, allowing readers to easily follow the author's ideas and deeply appreciate the profound meaning contained in the article. What's even more valuable is that the author skillfully used various detailed descriptions in the article, making the whole article rich in literary grace and full of charm. Whether it is vivid metaphors, vivid descriptions, refined wording, or powerful arguments, they fully demonstrate the author's profound literary skills and excellent writing ability. After reading this novel, I was deeply shocked. It not only allowed me to appreciate the charm of words, but also made me stand in awe of the author's talent and knowledge. This is truly a rare masterpiece, worthy of careful reading and study by everyone who loves literature. I believe that such an excellent novel will be widely circulated and become a shining pearl in the literary world. A highly recommended novel, it's quite good

Finished reading it in one day! Really well written! ! ! ! … I remembered that one afternoon ten years ago, I finished reading a light novel in this way and took a nap with unfinished emotions. I had a dream that was neither long nor short, as if all this was really happening. Thank you, the author, for giving me a very wonderful reading experience.

Written Feng Chang is great, the author has great literary talent, and one look at Nine Years of Compulsory Education will leave an indelible impression on you. I hope I can continue to stick to it. I really love this style.