All Heavens: from a Soldier in the City of Time to a War King

Come, the author, read with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will not play games, I will not be clumsy, I will be strict in self-discipline, cherish time like gold, be unyielding, strive hard, advocate first-class, strive to achieve brilliance, take pleasure in coding, and be tempered to steel, and I will be worthy of my readers, my youth, and my future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent writer and I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard in the Great Wall of Internet. I am willing to dedicate my life to coding day by day and night by day. Just... Is that all? [Pouts]

The writing is very good and very satisfying, but the plot should be faster. Don't write two or three hundred pictures of one world [face covering] I'm afraid the author will cut off the world before he finishes writing it🐔

The pace of this book is fast enough without being sluggish, and the plot is enjoyable enough. The worlds are clearly prioritized, and the episodes in the real world are not too abrupt. The proportions are very clear, including the future vision of the world of mechanized combat and the holes that have been laid in the future. Transformers will fill them in. To be honest, this novel is still very interesting. There are no shortcomings except for the slow update. It is a five-star review. I don't know why the rating has become so low. Anyway, I think it looks good. I'm not a human or a machine. I'm not a supporter.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on I don't really like the mention of Xia in the novel, it feels like a steel seal has been implanted into her. Novels should make the author and readers feel at ease. When I think about the novel, I still [laugh and cry] 1 afraid 7

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. After the demining is completed, the same person + the world (pseudo) + the clone from another world + the system. Slightly white and refreshing article, off topic. The main plot is given to the clone, so Adventures fans are optimistic about it.

The Adventures of Lolo. The King of Machine War. Wu Zhan said. This is a big job! ! ! I just love watching plots like this!

I finally finished reading it. It is an obvious battle-upgrading and strengthening work. The emotional line in it is like a pebble thrown into the lake, without causing any splash. Maybe the author should write more about the emotional drama. You can see the heroine's telekinesis ability in the work, but the heroine's role in the main plot does not help at all in this work. Maybe this is because the hero did not reveal all this to the heroine, so the plot of the heroine assisting the protagonist is a bit difficult for the author to describe. Although the whole text is obviously aimed at upgrading and becoming stronger, I hope the author can focus on promoting the emotional drama. However, the author still did a good job with the story of upgrading and becoming stronger in this article, at least I think so. Another point is that although this article is an infinite time-travel flow, it does not force the protagonist's ability. There is no phenomenon of entering a new world and then having the ability to be restricted to a large extent. This phenomenon is extremely common in quite a few infinite time travel works that I have seen. For this work, the author made a restriction on the degree of compatibility, but there was not much ink. All in all, the plot is good in terms of fighting being fun, it would have been better if there were more emotional scenes.

The two best parts I have written so far are The Adventures of Lolo and Transformers. I think the real world is quite ordinary. The real world is a bit different. If you don't like it, you can skip it to avoid the impact. The other worlds you go to do not expand the world view again in the original plot, and there are quite few bonuses in other worlds. Even if you only read The Adventures of Lolo and Transformers, it is okay. Generally speaking, when writing fan fiction, it is based on the original world view. The world view is expanded, extended, modified, and the garden dream is mainly used to improve it.

Sure enough, the author's writing of this type is really good [laughs]

It feels pretty good, just like what the author said. I didn't start writing it at the end, and I felt I couldn't write it. There is also the issue of combat power. At the end, the combat power is too strong and many film and television worlds cannot be entered. Some of the battle scenes are too simple and not exciting enough. Also, the identity of the main world feels useless, and some of the identities that travel to other worlds have no effect. The composition is already very good, and I hope the next book will be even more exciting.

The writing is pretty good. I was busy with work a year ago, so I finished reading the updated one. I will continue to follow it after the new year.

I was attracted by the theme of the adventures of Luoluo. After reading it, I felt that it was okay. It was at a good level. The main world was less written and only the background was expanded. The focus was on the world of the King of Machines. I picked up the key descriptions of other worlds. The level is good. Come on.

It's great. I can see that the author's writing style is very good. The description of the mechanical fighting and the reaction of the mecha are really vivid. I feel like he is a person who loves mechas? We can also see the problem with the framework of the work. The main world is a bit separated from other worlds. It feels like it was thought up in one go. The author's advantage is that he has a solid writing style and is smart in writing war scenes. Moreover, the pitfalls of the original work have been rounded out, and there are no poisonous points. It's a pity that I like to read relatively simple and direct novels. This novel is solid and solid, but it doesn't have the exciting and exciting points that I like. It can only be said that it is not compatible, but the author's skills can be seen.

At the end of the story, the author's writing of this book is quite good. Although the world of machine combat in the early stage is indeed a bit long, and the rhythm in the later stage is not mastered very well, the author himself has also realized it. I look forward to the extra chapters and the author's next book.

I feel that I am looking forward to the subsequent plot unfolding, and it is not limited to the plot according to the original work. The supplements to the original work are also good, but too few.

Yes, it has surpassed more than 80% of the books, because at least I have finished reading it. Although there are not too many chapters, it is a pity that the writing at the end is not as good as before. The ending always feels a bit rushed, but it is still a rare thing. At least it is much better than most of the chapters that have been interrupted for a year or two. At any rate, I have finished reading it.

Not bad, you can watch it. It's just that the biker's skills are a bit bad, such as the Solar Storm Sword. From the name, it should mean multiple damage and multiple attacks, so you end up with one attack (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ). The protagonist's skills are not explained either. What kind of attack he has, you can explain that it can do multiple damage, or it can do one-time damage. Just two modes will do｡◕‿◕｡

How should I put it? Before I finished reading it, I had been thinking about how to evaluate it. Then after reading it, I found that I was running out of words. Maybe it was because my brain was a little confused after reading it. But this book is really good and I highly recommend it.

In the early stage, directly build a new motorcycle race with nano-robots as the core of the body. In the main world, the incarnation will be directly integrated into the main body. The combat power will be directly reduced from zero to a whole body. The higher the level of the motorcycle, the stronger the main body will be.

Very good setting, but unfortunately the world I chose later is not to my liking.

Regarding robot-type movies, does the author know of a movie called Robot Man? There are a lot of black technologies in it that can be added later [Thinking], and the robots' combat capabilities are also off the charts.

This book is actually quite good. [Like][Like][Learned]

It's not bad. I won't write the question. It would be better to read it yourself. Comments are other people's opinions and feelings, don't be misled. A good book for an old bookworm.

There are many mechanical elements, and I also like Elements. I am waiting for your updates every day. [Shy] More updates soon.

Very nice. The protagonist is not a virgin, and there are few poisonous points. The main reason is that the plot suits my taste. Be a leader in the world of robot beasts.

It's very interesting. There are many well-known TV or animation scripts as time-travel scripts, but it doesn't just follow the original plot. It has developed its own script. The direction of the plot is all written according to my ideas, which is very consistent with my heart.

The plot idea is good and there are no big holes; the writing style didn't make me feel stiff; the division of power levels is also quite reasonable; and it's rare to be able to integrate the previous childhood Chinese comics into the real world without seeming too abrupt. Overall, with good writing and good plot, it is already a good book.

This book. The world where the protagonist lives is the main body. Travel through various mechanical worlds and obtain clones. The clone can be brought into the main world. The first 100 pictures are guaranteed for the 1,000-hour bookworm's honor. Absolutely top notch. If you like The Adventures of Lolo, you can watch it.

The Adventures of Lolo is a pretty good book. This is the only one I've written so far, and I'm very satisfied with it. I also wanted to read Predator and Aliens before, and I happened to have this book. I am very satisfied with it. The author is great [love] [love] [love] It's good to read, but it's just not enough. It's a bit sparse. I hope the author's next book will be bigger. This book is too short and concise for me, an old bookworm, to read. [Eat melon]

I have seen 329 chapters so far, which is generally okay. Personally, I think the shortcoming is that there is too much content in the first world, and the alt account has no sense of existence. If you read too much and don't change the map, it will lack freshness, but the overall content and storyline are okay.