I Was Told to Play a Lowly Soldier in the City of Time, but I Became a Battle King

Come, the author, read with me my solemn oath: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will not play games, I will not be clumsy, I will be strict in self-discipline, cherish time like gold, be unyielding, strive hard, advocate first-class, strive to achieve brilliance, take pleasure in coding, and be tempered to steel, and I will be worthy of my readers, my youth, and my future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent writer and I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard in the Great Wall of Internet. I am willing to dedicate my life to coding day by day and night by day. Just... Is that all? [Pouts]

The writing is very good and very satisfying, but the plot should be faster. Don't write two or three hundred pictures of one world [face covering] I'm afraid the author will cut off the world before he finishes writing it🐔

The pace of this book is fast enough without being sluggish, and the plot is enjoyable enough. The worlds are clearly prioritized, and the episodes in the real world are not too abrupt. The proportions are very clear, including the future vision of the world of mechanized combat and the holes that have been laid in the future. Transformers will fill them in. To be honest, this novel is still very interesting. There are no shortcomings except for the slow update. It is a five-star review. I don't know why the rating has become so low. Anyway, I think it looks good. I'm not a human or a machine. I'm not a supporter.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on I don't really like the mention of Xia in the novel, it feels like a steel seal has been implanted into her. Novels should make the author and readers feel at ease. When I think about the novel, I still [laugh and cry] 1 afraid 7

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. After the demining is completed, the same person + the world (pseudo) + the clone from another world + the system. Slightly white and refreshing article, off topic. The main plot is given to the clone, so Adventures fans are optimistic about it.

I finally finished reading it. It is an obvious battle-upgrading and strengthening work. The emotional line in it is like a pebble thrown into the lake, without causing any splash. Maybe the author should write more about the emotional drama. You can see the heroine's telekinesis ability in the work, but the heroine's role in the main plot does not help at all in this work. Maybe this is because the hero did not reveal all this to the heroine, so the plot of the heroine assisting the protagonist is a bit difficult for the author to describe. Although the whole text is obviously aimed at upgrading and becoming stronger, I hope the author can focus on promoting the emotional drama. However, the author still did a good job with the story of upgrading and becoming stronger in this article, at least I think so. Another point is that although this article is an infinite time-travel flow, it does not force the protagonist's ability. There is no phenomenon of entering a new world and then having the ability to be restricted to a large extent. This phenomenon is extremely common in quite a few infinite time travel works that I have seen. For this work, the author made a restriction on the degree of compatibility, but there was not much ink. All in all, the plot is good in terms of fighting being fun, it would have been better if there were more emotional scenes.

The Adventures of Lolo. The King of Machine War. Wu Zhan said. This is a big job! ! ! I just love watching plots like this!

The two best parts I have written so far are The Adventures of Lolo and Transformers. I think the real world is quite ordinary. The real world is a bit different. If you don't like it, you can skip it to avoid the impact. The other worlds you go to do not expand the world view again in the original plot, and there are quite few bonuses in other worlds. Even if you only read The Adventures of Lolo and Transformers, it is okay. Generally speaking, when writing fan fiction, it is based on the original world view. The world view is expanded, extended, modified, and the garden dream is mainly used to improve it.

Sure enough, the author's writing of this type is really good [laughs]

It feels pretty good, just like what the author said. I didn't start writing it at the end, and I felt I couldn't write it. There is also the issue of combat power. At the end, the combat power is too strong and many film and television worlds cannot be entered. Some of the battle scenes are too simple and not exciting enough. Also, the identity of the main world feels useless, and some of the identities that travel to other worlds have no effect. The composition is already very good, and I hope the next book will be even more exciting.