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It's okay. First of all, the setting is quite novel. The heroine in the front feels quite normal to me, and those complaints are quite real and normal. The setting and operation of the heroine in the back makes me a little disillusioned. First, the heroine hit the mistress, and said that it was self-defense for the heroine to survive. The hero told her not to look back, but the heroine didn't (see, I won't say anything). The problem is that you regret it later. You wasted time and money on such a thing [star][star] and then started arguing in the comment area. There is no morality [star][star]. The female protagonist is the behavior of a normal person [star][star]... You yourself regretted complaining even if you didn't watch it, uh Secondly, the female protagonist becomes coquettish around the male protagonist later on, and she no longer has the same thinking as before. She was quite normal before, but I really suspect that it is the suspension bridge effect in one aspect. Under such circumstances, she will fall in love with someone who has a sense of security. There is also a male protagonist who gives the female protagonist a rolling pin as a magic weapon, and the female protagonist gets angry [what] [what] Third, sometimes the heroine is really like a virgin, but sometimes she doesn't understand and takes care of it. In the end, it is the hero who solves the problem. The same thing with Lin Jiaojiao. Some of the plots are really pushed forward. For example, the heroine doesn't want to do something, but she has a premonition, and then she says she wants to go to divination. Many times, it feels like the heroine finally stops being stubborn for a while, but in the end she still has to solve it. Then there is the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Their characters are quite normal. The male protagonist is a stingy programmer who just bought a house and paid off the mortgage. He is also a mage. The female protagonist is a junior high school art teacher. She has a rare normal career. Both of them are quite stingy, and the male lead's stinginess is quite funny. The relationship between the two of them is really a bit confusing. Before they got together, what was described was their natural hugs and other people's hints about the difference between the hero and the heroine. I don't know what they think psychologically. When the heroine wanted them to be together, she briefly described it and said that the heroine understands the hero's special. She is ready to attack and wants to create an ambiguous pull between them both. I'm really confused. After talking about it later, it felt a bit too boring, and the development was very average and boring. After the third book, it was almost over, and I didn't want to read it. The story combination here is quite novel. I think the most charming person is the third brother. I feel like he is the only normal person.

A very nice novel. The heroine is a normal person in a normal world. The thinking pattern is similar to that of ordinary smart people, and they don't fluctuate up and down. It's a micro-horror novel, and sports betting is novel. It can be seen that the author checked a lot of information.

He's very good-looking, and it's rare to find a male protagonist who's not offensive. He's a good guy who has a safe life. The characters in the book are all very rare normal people. They're so normal that they have a cold sense of humor that goes against the grain. What about a Chinese-style rant? The author is a man of culture. It can be seen that he checked a lot of information in order to write the article. It is rare to find a book with logic and literary quality on Tomato. I recommend it.

Double cleansing, the male and female protagonists are clear The writing style is more serious, a little nonsensical, the plot is relatively relaxed, and the characters are not black and white. Original text: (He is not even interested in finding someone to satisfy his desires. He cannot lose, and he must not be like a fool the first time.) ("This is my first kiss!" How could I not mind!) (Gu Huai's ears turned redder, and he muttered, "It's like it's not the first time.") (I have no choice but to get up early and go to work the next day. Both of them are doing it for the first time. Who knows what will happen, we still have to find an opportunity.") I read a few more novels, and after being tortured, I angrily changed the five-star reviews.

It's good-looking (○｀ε´○), and the male protagonist's character is very interesting. The characters are all three-dimensional. Although the author often says that he made it up randomly, it makes sense! The writing style is relaxed and interesting, really interesting!

It's wonderful. I feel that the author has great literary skills. All the contents are well-reasoned and adapted from classics. I was stunned for a while while reading it. I even wanted to try it myself (just kidding). The logic and theory are all self-explanatory. The thinking is also excellent. It is a rare good article among foreign persimmons, but the subject matter limits the audience. Otherwise, I feel that it would be much more popular [Please update] [Please update] [Top post] [Top post]

The setting is interesting and imaginative, but it is still a bit controversial. I personally think it is a bit flawed. In the author's words, the heroine has a sense of morality, but to me, I feel that the heroine's moral sense is a bit too high when dealing with things, a little bit like a virgin. For example: Personally, if a mental illness attacks me, I fight back and the other person is admitted to the hospital. I don't have a good impression of the mentally ill person, let alone seeing him immediately and paying for the medical expenses. If I don't let the other person stay with me at home to pay for the mental damage, it counts as my morality. But the heroine has been hesitating and thinking wildly. Even if the police have closed the case and clearly told the heroine that she is fine, it is self-defense and let her go. The heroine is still indecisive and condemns her conscience. When she comes out, she is going to pay for the medical treatment of the mentally ill person. After being persuaded by others and knowing that the mental illness is a third person, she still insists on going to see the mentally ill person. I don't know how to put it, but the author also answered in the comments that he is just more moral. Emmm... Maybe I am of low quality personally. The character of the heroine is controversial, but the plot is still very interesting.

The book is okay, and it feels like it has a huge world view. I hope I can write it to a million words. I really like to read long stories. Let me talk about some of my feelings when I read the article. (I did not point out, did not push, and did not mean to say bad) I saw the author mentioned the golden elixir and the foundation building in the article in the book review area, which felt a bit like cultivating immortality. In fact, I don't quite understand whether the main purpose of this article is career or emotion. If it is career-oriented or an upgrade stream, I think the power system needs to be introduced in detail. I am curious whether practicing this will increase longevity? Then there is the writing aspect, which I feel still needs to be improved. For example, reading this book is like riding a bicycle. You can read it but it is not smooth and has a bit of a lag. Finally, there is the character of the heroine. I stayed up late to read it. At first, the heroine gave me the impression that she is a very calm person and relatively rational. But the heroine kept crying in the last few chapters, which felt very strange and a bit like a spoiled wife. The author explained that for example, in the murder scene, she felt scared that the person was dead, so she cried, but she felt the heartbeat. In the previous episode, she could calmly say to call 120, but then in the part after checking that the person was alive, she called and cried and said that she had beaten the person to death, which was very strange. I think it's just my personal opinion. Based on the heroine's initial experience, I thought she would look into the law to see if she needed to go to jail for self-defense. The character aspect is weird. The article is quite innovative, the author is well prepared in advance, and the emotional line is developed step by step, which is not bad.

The jokes and complaints are spot on, and the theme selection is really good. However, the writing style of this article is similar to a two-dimensional light novel, which makes people tired after reading it for a long time. Moreover, the heroine's behavior is not like a well-organized social animal but like a Liben high school student in the anime... As a result, I felt a very strong sense of fragmentation when I read it. Overall, it is okay. I can only say that it is not a brainless article.

I have reached an age where both sides can understand. I can indeed understand the author's displeasure at being scolded for writing about a wife-loving heroine, and I can also understand those who scold the author. After all, for someone like me who usually has nothing to do but read literature about wives, it still feels a little bit when I see the heroine crying wildly after knocking someone's head out for the first time and asking the third brother to tell the hero that she killed someone, ah? Is the normal person that has always been shaped like this? So that later on, when you see the heroine slowly growing into a very calm person, you will feel sincerely happy. I know everyone is fragile, but sometimes some things just make people a little bit weak. . . Emmm. But the author is still very good, and his research and writing skills are very strong. . . . . . .

Stunning! ! ! I didn't expect to see such a novel in 🍅, with a rigorous world view (the setting will not be fully revealed until the middle and late stages), and mature characters. For the first time in the novel, I saw that the doctor who is the favorite hero of the group is a dermatologist and is stationed in a leprosy village. One of the twin male protagonists studied anthropology and then entered an official institution, and the other studied sociology and couldn't find a job and went to cheat. The male protagonist in the main text was laid off and went to labor arbitration. It is very accurate to the times. The story is smooth, lively and humorous. It has some supernatural elements but fits the setting of the novel very well. The author's comments about quantum mechanics are very interesting and powerful. He treats readers as a high-quality author with brains and IQ. His knowledge reserve is extremely broad and he can incorporate so many pre-Qin and later supernatural literature, related papers and field research results. The story also introduces the folk beliefs and systems of the South and Shao people. As a person who has lived in the North all year round, after reading it, I felt a wonderful sense of intimacy with Mrs. Linshui Snow Mountain Monk. I also miss the little stone man who loves to watch the excitement. Next time I travel to Fujian, Guangdong and other places, I will definitely have a deeper local cultural experience than just watching the flowers. Thank you to the author for creating such an excellent work and giving me a very enjoyable reading time. [Love]

The development of the story is unexpected and reasonable, the character design is reasonable and the description is realistic. Although the author talks a lot and outputs a lot of ideas, fortunately, he doesn't have a father's taste and has a correct outlook on things. The first anti-routine type article!

The ghost-related writing is very good, the world view is grand, and the subject matter is novel. One star is deducted for the emotional line. . . The male protagonist was good at first, but after they got together, the impression dropped a bit. I feel like the author is not very good at writing emotional dramas? It seems that the description of the relationship between the two is a bit too much. There is a feeling that I tried to express the good relationship between the two but ended up using too much force. They were always kissing, hugging and so on. I felt that there was no need to describe all these. There is also the plot of Lao Wu eating fruit when he went to the male and female protagonist's house. The author gave the male protagonist's psychological activities. I understand that it may be to portray the male protagonist's "pet" and stinginess towards the female protagonist in depth, but I feel that it is not necessary. It is normal for a boyfriend to buy some fruit for his girlfriend, and it does not fall into the category of "petting" the female protagonist. But the ambiguous pull before the relationship was confirmed was really good~~ Thinking back to when I read Weiyu's book, although Weiyu's emotional line was not well written, the proportion of her emotional line was also low, so I didn't feel uncomfortable while reading it...

The article is good, and the world view is quite novel. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. Some of the customs and formulas in the article are like real ones. No wonder some people follow it and practice it hahahahahaha. I also like the character of the heroine, a kind and principled little girl, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is just right, not too much. I personally like to read stories where the plot is mainly about love and supplemented by love, so I like this book very much. In addition, the portrayal of the female characters in this book is also very good. They are basically three-dimensional and cute. However, I am not very satisfied with Qing Ge's CP. I think the second brother is not very good, and Song Chuxue is too miserable. Cherish life and don't become a sadistic heroine! As for the deduction points, one is in the middle and late stages. The preaching is so strong that it is difficult for people to ignore it. The other is the stereotype that is still a bit hard to detect. Moreover, I don't really like the plot of giving birth to a child. The child has the surname of the male protagonist. If you object, you are right. Don't scold me. I am just saying my opinion.

On the whole, it is a good book in terms of logical system, article structure, and story progression. The author's writing is smooth, his quotations are appropriate, and he draws on the best of others, which complements the plot development. The story is innovative to a certain extent. It combines modern elements with intangible cultural heritage (traditional Chinese culture) while showing the human heart and the complex aspects of human nature. It also hints at some of the current social conditions and is thought-provoking. All in all, it's a great product! [Praise]

Very interesting! I also had a lot of complaints and reflections on some phenomena, which gave me a feeling of enlightenment! The writing is very smooth and true, I love it! Then those who came later thought it was so funny when they heard about Da Da's previous encounter. Sure enough, Da Da's writing was so good that some people jumped at the novel. Maybe it's because it was deleted now that they haven't seen it? Anyway, it looks great! It shouldn't have such a low rating!

A particularly talented author. There are very few articles nowadays that can describe the world view so clearly, and the logic is also very clear. Although she is not a strong female character, the heroine is not a slut, and the story lines of the supporting characters are also very complete. It is very good!

The author's knowledge is really broad. Although many of the contents in the book are made up by the author, they are basically supported and quoted from ancient books. I was originally attracted to this messy novel where multiple novels were fused together and shared the setting of a female supporting character. I thought it was a mindless and refreshing novel, just to pass the time. Unexpectedly, the more I watched it, the more exciting it became. I am already looking forward to updates and future content. The worldview is very complete and unique (unique compared to other online novels). The female protagonist is very mature and independent, and has a healthy relationship with the male protagonist, so I won't be embarrassed to skip the emotional scenes. Tip: This article is only suitable for atheists. If you have local beliefs, proceed with caution.

It's really, really good to watch. I think the setting of the plot and the character of the heroine are very in line with my wishes. It doesn't feel too brainless and is in line with the logic of normal people. Unlike some novels that forcefully impose some confusing plots and character settings, it is close to our real people's thinking habits. Generally speaking, if you like to read those mindless and cool articles about big heroines, I suggest you not read it, but if you like to read those that are logical and smooth, this article is really, really recommended! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The author's writing style is very good, the writing is well-written, and the setting of the world view is very complete. There is no big problem, but the plot progress is very slow and too tame. After watching it for a long time, it feels like a lot of things have happened but nothing has happened. A novel of this type (with fantasy and ghosts) (There is a ghost realm) generally the pace is very fast (unless you are extremely confident in your writing, even if you spend a lot of space describing personal emotions and scene descriptions, it will still make people feel excited, such as the dragon clan), and you have to fight ghosts and monsters, and you have to be more passionate and passionate, but This article gives me the feeling that everyone is bland, the plot is also bland, it cannot mobilize the emotions of the characters, and it is too everyday. The author may write about falling in love in a passionate novel or living a daily life as a passerby in a battle novel. The characters of the male and female protagonists are too good and too normal. Such characters are indeed very realistic and not like the character labels in novels. However, too normal characters also mean that there is almost no outstanding personality and particularly attractive personal charm. As a protagonist, there is no such thing as sharpness. Personal characteristics are not able to support the position of the protagonist, which makes people feel very boring. On the contrary, these popular novels, such as Tomato's current male channel's Ten Days End, and the female channel's Drinking and Song Searching, the protagonists are sharp and full of energy. They can cry and laugh, and they are strong and weak. It feels like the heroine is driving the story, but some kind of mysterious force (plot master) is deliberately pushing everyone forward. That's why some people in the comment area said they found it frustrating to watch the heroine being coquettish. I think this is also the reason. There are also many heroines who love to cry and act coquettishly, but their crying and coquettishness are also With some purpose or a bonus to the plot and the completion of the character, few people complain about this issue (for example, crying is to reduce the enemy's wariness, or crying is for the transformation of the heroine, etc. It is rare to write about crying just for the sake of crying, which is because the word count is not appropriate)

1. The author has a good writing style. His writing is fluent and logical, without being clumsy. This novel is very beautiful. 2. The author did a lot of homework before writing the article. The words are full of care and the content is worth appreciating. 3. The author cares very much about readers' comments and interacts with readers a lot. I hope everyone can speak politely and not hurt the heart of an excellent author. 4. There is a slight shortcoming, but it is not a shortcoming. It is that the author likes to intersperse some of his own understanding of life in the text. People who are not very firm in thinking may read it with caution, as it may be affected by some decisions. You can also ignore the testimonials and just read the plot. After all, this novel is really well written.

The characters are very three-dimensional, and the heroine is ordinary, but she is also growing. Everyone has imperfections, but this is the truth. I really like my wife's writing, it's very logical. I really like Xia Yan (that's correct?) And Gu Huai. Their natural and everyday relationship is quite easy to relate to [note][note][note]

It's really rare to see a good book with a well-written logic. The protagonist's character is very down-to-earth and stands up. The character is portrayed from daily life, and the image of the character comes to mind. In the early stage, Jiaojiao makes people stupid and speechless, and in the later stage, he loves and cares for the lovely sister Bao Jiaojiao. It really makes people feel sympathetic and very funny. There is also Gu Huai, who is stingy and stingy to others but generous and good boyfriend to others (to be honest, this is the first time I have seen the male protagonist of this character. It is quite interesting. The time when Xia Xia suspected that Gu Huai was the male protagonist of a "male video" article, and the time when he went to Gu Huai's company to declare his sovereignty, the profile descriptions of his colleagues made me happy) Our heroine Xia Xia is a standard worker and a social worker. When the big devil comes, hahaha, she has to go to work. To be honest, I was a little envious of the profession of art teacher when I watched it. (Because I am a social worker who has no public holidays throughout the year except the Spring Festival, no weekends, and dare not say anything casually. I have three days off per month and have to choose a suitable day for the boss to approve the leave.) The winter and summer vacations of working as a worker were so valuable that they left me with tears of envy! ! ! Thank you to the author for writing such a good article. I was really surprised to read this article. I have no words to express my surprise and love for this book. Let me tell you secretly that reading the article brought me great pleasure, which manifested itself at four o'clock in the morning. I laughed secretly under the quilt until I couldn't stop (thanks to my roommate's excellent sleep quality, which did not make people think that I was going crazy in the middle of the night).

Finally finished reading it and it's my turn to write a book review! This book is indeed very new. Unlike other novels, you already know what its "routines" or "counter-routines" are. It is very unexpected. You don't know how the plot and setting will develop. I am also a person who likes to read suspense and supernatural novels very much. This novel is really different from other novels I have read. Maybe because of this, I can't really follow many plots and contents. I even skipped the latter content... I'm not saying that the author's writing is not good. I don't know if you have ever read that kind of popular science literary novel. This is the feeling. So I don't like this very much. A lot of the content is just the author's thoughts or popular science, rather than the plot, because what I want to read is just a "novel". The author may want to write some content that is very thought-provoking, or satirizes current writing routines, but in novels, I think there is no need to have so much of it. I think this kind of content is more suitable to be placed in essays, as the author's own opinions and thoughts. I just hope that the author can use less long-winded thoughts and content in the novel, and focus more on the narrative and plot of the story in the novel. I believe that most people will not read and remember word by word, so after reading it, they will only remember the general plot line, but well-written novels will use plots and stories that everyone remembers to make people remember the truth and insights contained in it. Regarding the character setting and world view setting of this novel, I like it very much. It can be seen from the author's world view setting that she does not want to write a traditional and perfect hero and heroine. Therefore, I do not think the heroine is too kind and the heroine is too narrow-minded and picky. Human beings have good and bad qualities and will not be perfect. Finally, I really resonated with the novel that the author complained about, which reduces the blood bar little by little, because before reading this novel, I read that one (who knows!), So it is obviously a cheating article, can it still be called a metaphysical article? It's not like I just rely on metaphysics to show off... But many people have recommended and praised it. I'm really grateful. The rest of my heart is nothing but a great encouragement. A good novel will make people read it over and over again. I hope I will write better works in the future. This is the first time I write such a long review, so cheers for the author~

Not much to say, it's very interesting and interesting. The author's world view setting is very novel, the writing style is also good, and the logic is clear. I haven't encountered such a good-looking article in a long time. I'm really looking forward to the interaction between the male and female protagonists. Come on, the author [blowing kiss]

It's really beautiful! Although according to the author this is his debut novel, there is no sense of rawness at all. The characters are well created, both the protagonist and the supporting characters, and even the emotional lines are very full. It can be seen that different people have different relationships! And this is a novel that breaks stereotypes. There are no stereotyped characters, nor stereotyped conflicts or stereotyped relationships. The author is trying to tell a story well, rather than using the skin of storytelling to become some inexplicable opinion leader. I think this is more brilliant than some novels. I think the author has great respect and care for his characters, which is very rare and I like them. Even if the author is creating some villains or villains, they still have their own uniqueness - in a sense, although he is indeed a villain, he does not feel boring. Moreover, the author is also very diligent in setting up the world view and combat system (well, I think metaphysical combat is also a combat system). I saw that some readers even believed it was true in the middle, and I thought it was inexplicably funny. But at the same time, this is also a reflection of the author's strength. There are some writing settings in the system. It is easy for the author of the work to write the setting into a bag of books, or a pile of nouns that are not known, but this novel does not have such big holes, which is very good, and the author has his own innovation and thinking in the setting system and combat system, which is rare. I hope there will be more interesting works like this. It really meets the elements of a fantasy comedy that the author himself said, great! By the way, I would like to add that the kind-hearted protagonist is really a plus for me, because if you think about it carefully, when most people encounter difficulties in life, the person who reaches out to you will always be a kind-hearted person, not an exquisite egoist who plots against you and always cares about how many cents you can exchange for you. What's more, this heroine's kindness is sharp and kind. While she is kind, she does not condone others, but changes the people around her and makes everyone, including herself, better. I think this kind of kindness is very powerful.

The heroine is a mixed female supporting character shared by 4 books, a group favorite, a sweetheart, a sadomasochist, and a funny character. The male protagonist Gu Huai is a male mage who was originally a bit stingy. Because of the world game in the four books, each female protagonist in the original book is assigned a ghost. The heroine who can see ghosts accidentally encounters the male protagonist and is rescued. She works hard for a hundred days to build the foundation and becomes a mage. In order to eliminate the ghost behind the heroine, she starts a daily life of catching ghosts and showing affection at the same time. The full text has a relaxed and scary atmosphere, is slightly funny, and is full of useful information and knowledge points. It is a super good article, highly recommended!

A very responsible and rigorous author. He loves the people and ghosts he writes very much, whether he is the protagonist or the supporting character. Among the fantasy books I have personally read, it ranks No. 1! Both the male and female protagonists are very successful and down-to-earth, giving people the illusion that "as long as you work hard, you can be so good", of course, appearance is another matter. I feel sorry for Song Chuxue, and I always feel that there might be another ending. But if you think about it carefully, it seems that there is no other choice. She was like a person trapped in a swamp in no man's land, watching helplessly as she was swallowed bit by bit by the quagmire. From the initial struggle to save herself, to the later numbness and waiting for death, darkening should be inevitable. Despair, destroy it! There is another person who is regrettable, Dad Gu. Especially if I could sympathize with Ms. Li Xiulan, who was doing divination, and how she felt before and after Gu's father's accident, I would feel as if my heart was being pulled. It took me several days to read it carefully. I also learned a lot about the author's popular science knowledge. I admire Da Da's profound knowledge and hope to read the next one as soon as possible.

A very interesting and knowledgeable article. It is not a regular heroine slap-in-the-face article. The setting is very novel and interesting, and the author's reference is also very rigorous. It is also fun to add additional explanations about the setting. To be honest, I was very surprised when I saw this article, because it is so professional and dedicated. It is not like the articles that would appear in Tomato. It is very similar to the hot articles (is it called this) that you can see in Tieba in the early days or the literary creations that will be published. In addition, in order to prevent anyone from actually following the content related to practicing metaphysics, the author also said many times that it was made up, which is a bit funny and a bit sympathetic to the author www

The plot is very novel. The time travel of four books combined is a bit confusing, but it combines them together, which is very, very novel. It looks like a book written by a rich family, and it complains about all the shortcomings of rich people's books. It is particularly down-to-earth, because the final book is a book about normal human beings. It's a book about the lives of poor people like us who want to buy takeout at a discount and usually ride shared bicycles and electric bikes. Moreover, it is actually a book of ghost stories, and it also shows that the whole world can be made into a circle, which is really good. It also quotes a lot of ancient texts and talks about a lot of fascinating things, all of which can be justified and you can learn something. Now I have started to do the eighth set of radio gymnastics, which is still highly recommended.