Something's Wrong with How to Start This Urban Novel

It's okay. First of all, the setting is quite novel. The heroine in the front feels quite normal to me, and those complaints are quite real and normal. The setting and operation of the heroine in the back makes me a little disillusioned. First, the heroine hit the mistress, and said that it was self-defense for the heroine to survive. The hero told her not to look back, but the heroine didn't (see, I won't say anything). The problem is that you regret it later. You wasted time and money on such a thing [star][star] and then started arguing in the comment area. There is no morality [star][star]. The female protagonist is the behavior of a normal person [star][star]... You yourself regretted complaining even if you didn't watch it, uh Secondly, the female protagonist becomes coquettish around the male protagonist later on, and she no longer has the same thinking as before. She was quite normal before, but I really suspect that it is the suspension bridge effect in one aspect. Under such circumstances, she will fall in love with someone who has a sense of security. There is also a male protagonist who gives the female protagonist a rolling pin as a magic weapon, and the female protagonist gets angry [what] [what] Third, sometimes the heroine is really like a virgin, but sometimes she doesn't understand and takes care of it. In the end, it is the hero who solves the problem. The same thing with Lin Jiaojiao. Some of the plots are really pushed forward. For example, the heroine doesn't want to do something, but she has a premonition, and then she says she wants to go to divination. Many times, it feels like the heroine finally stops being stubborn for a while, but in the end she still has to solve it. Then there is the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Their characters are quite normal. The male protagonist is a stingy programmer who just bought a house and paid off the mortgage. He is also a mage. The female protagonist is a junior high school art teacher. She has a rare normal career. Both of them are quite stingy, and the male lead's stinginess is quite funny. The relationship between the two of them is really a bit confusing. Before they got together, what was described was their natural hugs and other people's hints about the difference between the hero and the heroine. I don't know what they think psychologically. When the heroine wanted them to be together, she briefly described it and said that the heroine understands the hero's special. She is ready to attack and wants to create an ambiguous pull between them both. I'm really confused. After talking about it later, it felt a bit too boring, and the development was very average and boring. After the third book, it was almost over, and I didn't want to read it. The story combination here is quite novel. I think the most charming person is the third brother. I feel like he is the only normal person.

A very nice novel. The heroine is a normal person in a normal world. The thinking pattern is similar to that of ordinary smart people, and they don't fluctuate up and down. It's a micro-horror novel, and sports betting is novel. It can be seen that the author checked a lot of information.

He's very good-looking, and it's rare to find a male protagonist who's not offensive. He's a good guy who has a safe life. The characters in the book are all very rare normal people. They're so normal that they have a cold sense of humor that goes against the grain. What about a Chinese-style rant? The author is a man of culture. It can be seen that he checked a lot of information in order to write the article. It is rare to find a book with logic and literary quality on Tomato. I recommend it.

Double cleansing, the male and female protagonists are clear The writing style is more serious, a little nonsensical, the plot is relatively relaxed, and the characters are not black and white. Original text: (He is not even interested in finding someone to satisfy his desires. He cannot lose, and he must not be like a fool the first time.) ("This is my first kiss!" How could I not mind!) (Gu Huai's ears turned redder, and he muttered, "It's like it's not the first time.") (I have no choice but to get up early and go to work the next day. Both of them are doing it for the first time. Who knows what will happen, we still have to find an opportunity.") I read a few more novels, and after being tortured, I angrily changed the five-star reviews.

It's wonderful. I feel that the author has great literary skills. All the contents are well-reasoned and adapted from classics. I was stunned for a while while reading it. I even wanted to try it myself (just kidding). The logic and theory are all self-explanatory. The thinking is also excellent. It is a rare good article among foreign persimmons, but the subject matter limits the audience. Otherwise, I feel that it would be much more popular [Please update] [Please update] [Top post] [Top post]

It's good-looking (○`ε´○), and the male protagonist's character is very interesting. The characters are all three-dimensional. Although the author often says that he made it up randomly, it makes sense! The writing style is relaxed and interesting, really interesting!

The setting is interesting and imaginative, but it is still a bit controversial. I personally think it is a bit flawed. In the author's words, the heroine has a sense of morality, but to me, I feel that the heroine's moral sense is a bit too high when dealing with things, a little bit like a virgin. For example: Personally, if a mental illness attacks me, I fight back and the other person is admitted to the hospital. I don't have a good impression of the mentally ill person, let alone seeing him immediately and paying for the medical expenses. If I don't let the other person stay with me at home to pay for the mental damage, it counts as my morality. But the heroine has been hesitating and thinking wildly. Even if the police have closed the case and clearly told the heroine that she is fine, it is self-defense and let her go. The heroine is still indecisive and condemns her conscience. When she comes out, she is going to pay for the medical treatment of the mentally ill person. After being persuaded by others and knowing that the mental illness is a third person, she still insists on going to see the mentally ill person. I don't know how to put it, but the author also answered in the comments that he is just more moral. Emmm... Maybe I am of low quality personally. The character of the heroine is controversial, but the plot is still very interesting.

The book is okay, and it feels like it has a huge world view. I hope I can write it to a million words. I really like to read long stories. Let me talk about some of my feelings when I read the article. (I did not point out, did not push, and did not mean to say bad) I saw the author mentioned the golden elixir and the foundation building in the article in the book review area, which felt a bit like cultivating immortality. In fact, I don't quite understand whether the main purpose of this article is career or emotion. If it is career-oriented or an upgrade stream, I think the power system needs to be introduced in detail. I am curious whether practicing this will increase longevity? Then there is the writing aspect, which I feel still needs to be improved. For example, reading this book is like riding a bicycle. You can read it but it is not smooth and has a bit of a lag. Finally, there is the character of the heroine. I stayed up late to read it. At first, the heroine gave me the impression that she is a very calm person and relatively rational. But the heroine kept crying in the last few chapters, which felt very strange and a bit like a spoiled wife. The author explained that for example, in the murder scene, she felt scared that the person was dead, so she cried, but she felt the heartbeat. In the previous episode, she could calmly say to call 120, but then in the part after checking that the person was alive, she called and cried and said that she had beaten the person to death, which was very strange. I think it's just my personal opinion. Based on the heroine's initial experience, I thought she would look into the law to see if she needed to go to jail for self-defense. The character aspect is weird. The article is quite innovative, the author is well prepared in advance, and the emotional line is developed step by step, which is not bad.

The jokes and complaints are spot on, and the theme selection is really good. However, the writing style of this article is similar to a two-dimensional light novel, which makes people tired after reading it for a long time. Moreover, the heroine's behavior is not like a well-organized social animal but like a Liben high school student in the anime... As a result, I felt a very strong sense of fragmentation when I read it. Overall, it is okay. I can only say that it is not a brainless article.

I have reached an age where both sides can understand. I can indeed understand the author's displeasure at being scolded for writing about a wife-loving heroine, and I can also understand those who scold the author. After all, for someone like me who usually has nothing to do but read literature about wives, it still feels a little bit when I see the heroine crying wildly after knocking someone's head out for the first time and asking the third brother to tell the hero that she killed someone, ah? Is the normal person that has always been shaped like this? So that later on, when you see the heroine slowly growing into a very calm person, you will feel sincerely happy. I know everyone is fragile, but sometimes some things just make people a little bit weak. . . Emmm. But the author is still very good, and his research and writing skills are very strong.