Helping the School Beauty Find the Male Protagonist, but She Says She Likes Me?

It's sweet, come in if you want to eat; for the sake of my five-star praise, the author has a single female protagonist, and other girls should let it go. Love requires 1V1 sweet doting, and it is even better if the female protagonist dotes on the male protagonist☆△☆! ! !

To be honest, there were a lot of bad points in the early stage, but it was mainly due to the three-dimensional problem of the small characters, and there were also some problems with the lack of coordination between the front and back scenes. Anyway, it was okay. It was produced by Tomato, and it was already very good. I think this type will be popular. Girls should like it, and men may also be okay.

There is a lot of foreshadowing in this book, and it has a good structure. It is just a bit messy when it comes to cutting the ground later, and there are a lot of holes to dig. But I really like Luo Ningxue. She is a little more controlling but much better than the perverted ones in some yandere books. It's cute.

The prosperous old thief found a similar article after not updating it. I really like the style of this book! Highly recommended

After eating at so many restaurants, this is the most authentic one I have ever eaten. The taste is pure and the texture is top-notch. My favorite takeaway, I've been eating it for a long time, it's so delicious and clean, I'll miss it if I don't eat it for a few days. , The portion is really huge. It's the first time I've seen takeout with such a large portion of meat dishes. It's a great value for money! ! ! The takeaway packaging is almost the same as shown in the picture. The rider delivers it quickly and the taste is very good. I give the boss a five-star rating.

Luo Ningxue's portrayal is really good and deserves 5⭐, but it's a pity that she doesn't have a single female protagonist. Also, the male protagonist's performance towards Ning Xue is not satisfactory. I hope it can be changed later with the memory addition⭐

Personally, I think it is a good book. The chapters are foreshadowing, but it is also moderate and does not make the plot too abrupt. The author's description of the heroine is very appropriate, and the wording is precise. It is not as brainless as other novels, and it is progressive and arouses empathy. Of course, there are also some flaws. The plot of the book is currently too slow. It should be that the author is paving the way for the reversal later, and some female protagonists seem a bit like a "formula" (referring to content that has appeared repeatedly in other novels). But fortunately, the author has a certain degree in mind, and he has added his own content based on this. All in all, the good outweighs the bad. I think a good article is about listening to readers' opinions or opinions and revising it again and again. Finally, I wish the author good luck! 💪 There is a typo. It's not that the current plot of the book is too slow, but that the current plot of the whole book is too slow [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

(｀ω´) It's a pretty good book. If you read it with your brain in mind, you will feel a little awkward. Then the details of the characters and the plot are quite good. Because the plot is abrupt, many people will think it is a short film, so it will be rated poorly. What if you read it later? , Everything is as it should be. Of course, there are too few chapters and it has not been fully developed. It is still too advanced for the whole tomato. Finally, the author must work hard ↖(^ω^)↗, more and more, after all, the subsequent development is becoming more and more interesting_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

I think it is very difficult to write a book of this type, how can I say, this is the first time I have seen this type of book, and it has to be written well, wonderfully, and in a way that meets the public's taste! I hope the author will work hard, and Oli will give [like] [like] [star] [star] It's easy to stretch out the back

What can I say about these books? Overall they are pretty good, and I feel that there are not many of them in this genre. I have seen this type of book in comics before, but I didn't expect that there are also novels. They are quite good, and the writing is also good. Please give me a 5-star review [Love] [Love]

I'm currently giving it four stars to wait and see whether I will give it five stars in the future. I feel it is inexplicably consistent with the observation diary of a darkened girl written by a prosperous SMSA that I read in a certain pineapple many years ago. I don't know if the author has read that work. Both the world view and the story of the first girl brought back memories from many years ago. Xiao Su's portrayal is quite successful. The psychological description and detailed description are quite in place, showing readers a vivid image of a girl. In order to promote the plot, many works omit the portrayal of the characters. For example, after reading a work, I have nothing to say when commenting on a character. I said, but the lovable image of little Susu was deeply imprinted in my mind. I personally think that an excellent work should pay more attention to the characterization of the characters before showing the plot. I hope the author can pay more attention to this point, which means that the characterization is the main thing and the plot is supplemented. I have just finished reading the first volume, but the transition in the second volume is inexplicable. I personally feel that the connection between the two stories still needs to be improved. If the connection between the two stories is too blunt, the readers will give up halfway or even quit due to lack of expectations for the subsequent plot. As an old bookworm, I still choose to be patient and continue reading. I haven't started reading the second volume yet, but I do have a psychological wave of lowered expectations. Regarding the focus of the follow-up plot, I personally persisted because I was looking forward to Su Qingling's follow-up. However, the protagonist suddenly changes scenes and the girl he likes suddenly disappears. It is best to carry out the transition pattern after sufficient foreshadowing. Hahaha, I accidentally wrote a lot. As a reader, it's not good to say so much. It feels like criticizing the author. I'm sorry, but we really don't have the qualifications. I just want to talk about my personal feelings after reading it (I am full of desire to survive). It is the first time to write a book review with so many words, so it is very subjective. Please forgive me.

It's very interesting to watch. The suspense is just right and the Riddler is always there at the beginning. Overall, it's quite interesting. However, I will also mention something that most people cannot accept: this is a harem novel. It's very good. The mystery is just right. It doesn't say that the readers don't know anything or that the ending can be seen at a glance. The characters are also well created. It is an urban fantasy that has both imagination and emotional lines. It's the author, can you update it faster?

This is a novel that I couldn't put myself out of. From the beginning of the focus on Sue, I was already deeply involved in it. Later, when I saw the protagonist slowly regaining his memory and going back to the past, I even imagined the scene in my mind where the protagonist awakens and kills the mastermind behind the scenes, and says goodbye to the heroine. The writing style is also very good, and the short paragraphs describe the story vividly. Ahhh, I love this style so much. I hope the author will keep up the good work. (I was a bit annoyed at the beginning and almost gave up.) Overall, this is a story about finding love. What is love? Everyone has the answer. But for the protagonist, reality and the game are contradictory. He wants to go home, but he saves Su because of the love in his heart. However, the contradiction pushes the story to a new level. Come on, it's not enough to read in such a short time (๑> <๑)

, The language of the whole novel is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work. 2. Although the language of the novel is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, making it enjoyable to read. 3. The structure of the novel is concise and reasonable, and the author has a very deep and thorough understanding of the original text. 4. This novel has novel material, wonderful conception, and lively language. The fresh and sweet atmosphere and interest are revealed between the lines. Worth looking forward to, great potential [top post]

Why is the rating so low? It's obviously very interesting, the plot is well set, and the time structure of traveling to parallel worlds and the past is not boring. Moreover, the author's description of the characters and the shaping of his character are eye-catching. Anyway, I think this is a good book, and the author will update it quickly!

The writing style is very strong, the characters are quite distinct, and the emotional rendering is also very unique. It doesn't feel like describing a few characters and then applying a template. The ending is a bit hasty. It can be seen that when the author wrote to the end, reality may have encountered a bit of a dilemma, which had a little impact on the author's state (just like the theme of Volume 34, it is generally a confused emotion? That illusory sense of fragmentation is integrated into the book, making the emotional tone at the end a bit more subdued. However, I personally feel that this makes this book more unique. More profound), but the rating of the book itself seems to be relatively low (I heard it was only 6 points before? Now it is 8.7). Even under such conditions, the author can still insist on giving this book an ending, and he has not let down the readers who followed from the beginning to the end. In terms of this kind of perseverance, I quite admire the author, well, because this traffic is almost equivalent to generating electricity for love? Come on, look forward to the author's next book (if there is one...).

Good! This is okay! The plot is novel! It's the first time I've seen this type of work, and I'm very attracted to it. The characters create a sense of immersion! (｡ò ∀ ó｡) Recommended!

For me, the subject matter is very novel, and the author can control this kind of plot well. I think it is very good, the writing style is also very good, and the plot is not bad, but it has dug a lot of holes. If it can be filled in, this novel is definitely not bad, but what attracts me most is the characterization. Although there is a big gap between it and those literary greats, it is definitely superior among online novels.

The story is very good, especially the characterization is good, but the main character is not very familiar with his psychology, but the rich plot allows people to fully understand the ambivalence of the male protagonist. Whether it is the confusion of the boundary line of love, the heart-warming moments of heartbeat and emotion, the inseparable relatives and friends and the gradually dependent love, the escape and withdrawal when faced with choices, and the cowardice of Luo and Su in life, they are all vivid portrayals of the male protagonist. Come on😊

Just Luo Ningxue and Bai Yeming, this is the first couple that I fell in love with after reading many love stories. Bai Yeming is polite and feels like the kind of gentleman who can always keep calm. They are a bit similar to me, although relatively speaking, I am a bit socially anxious.

It looks good, but the front is a bit too toxic, but the writing is much better at the back. Also, I really like Qing Ling, don't kill her [crying]

The writing is beautiful, and after reading it all, my impression is that the male protagonist can change his attitude towards Ning Xue as soon as possible, so as not to be alienated from her while doing things between boyfriend and girlfriend. The harem story also hopes to adjust the mentality of the male and female protagonists better, otherwise it will really look a bit disconnected. After all, Ning Xue's character is so affectionate and generous.

It looks good, but it doesn't look like a dog. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Covering face] [Aggrieved] [Almost crying] [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

The imagination of this book made me feel very happy, and the author's writing style also grasped the article very well. But the thing that the company sent at the beginning, and then fell into a deep sleep, made me feel that it was definitely a knife [eat melon] [punch out] [punch out]

It's very good, but there are really too few updates. I slowly don't want to read it anymore [I'm about to cry] Come on, author, more updates will definitely make you popular. The first volume is okay, the next one, eh😓

The materials are novel, the ideas are unique, and the language is lively and hearty. The fresh breath of life and children's interest are revealed between the lines. The realistic description of details is just right enough to show the inner world of the characters. This is the success of this article.

It's very good. I like this novel very much. I like it so much that I haven't read many others since reading this novel. I personally prefer Su Qingling. It may be related to the fact that I am a sociophobic person in reality. I don't like to go to crowded places and I am not good at communicating with others [face covering]. The character of Hou Luo Lingxue was created very well. I hope that even if Luo Lingxue does not end up with the male protagonist, the author can give her a good ending [like] There should be other female characters in the end. I hope they can all have a good ending without too many pitfalls and too many love debts [grievance]

The writing is good, but there are a lot of foreshadowings. I don't know if the author can hold it all back in the end. If it doesn't collapse, it will be considered a masterpiece (personal feeling), keep it up ^0＾~

The book is good to read, but I have some humble opinions 1. Luo Ningxue's image is not full enough. As the protagonist, she is a good character as soon as she comes in. She is completely Tianhu's starting point, and she is devoted to the male protagonist. However, the number of plots is far less than that of Su. According to the character, it will not be noticed for so long that she has been stolen. However, there is an if line that says that she will kill the male protagonist when she detects it. This part is also not appropriate, because Luo does not have a strong desire to control or force the male protagonist to do something, and there is not enough foreshadowing for the sudden yandere (even if he is tied up first? How can he just marry her directly) 2. The male protagonist is really too indecisive sometimes, and it drags him on for a while. In order to avoid the Shura field, the character often goes offline for a long time before being picked up, and it seems that there is really no harem. The guide adheres to the strategy of teasing and running away. If this continues, the only way to end is Brother Cheng. 3. For non-emotional scenes, such as the scene with the villain, I feel that it relies too much on cards. Those who have cards and skills will win, and those who don't will lose. There is too little wit and fighting, and the fights are all straightforward. There is also too little psychological description of the male protagonist, and the transformation from knowing that this is a game to truly falling in love with the female protagonist is not written. I have been following this book for a long time. At the beginning, I was really looking forward to the subsequent development with enthusiasm. However, if it ends right away, I would still be a little disappointed in terms of the excitement of the plot. I like both Su and Luo very much. I hope they can be he. I don't really like yandere. I hope the plot at the end of the novel can make people's eyes brighter. I hope the author writes better and better. Come on!

When I first watched it, I felt it was a bit toxic, but not very toxic. It was watchable, but after watching it, I felt that it looked better. I felt that the plot became much better after watching the movie with Xiao Su. The writing suddenly became much better, and it was no longer toxic.