The formal content starts from Chapter 26 and Chapter 27. Those who want to read can skip the previous content.
The myths of the four original civilizations of Naruto World, Naruto Parallel World without a Protagonist, and the Next World. The current progress is that Konoha, the Naruto World, has just been established, and the Warring States Period is over.
Okay, the official content starts from chapters 26 and 27.
After all, it's been a long time since I've written anything.
Shit ninja nobles
Believe in Buddhism, right? You don't have any special pursuits about your diet, right?
At least some meat was given, and all the children ate was porridge, cakes, rice soaked in cold water, and pickled fish.
Haotian God, let me get out of here quickly, I don't want to become a Japanese ghost.
Wait, who are you? I'm not a refugee
Damn Thousand-Armed Buddha Room!
Reader comments
Incomprehensible, poor words
Redundant dialogue and unclear explanations
The connection between the upper and lower parts is blunt and difficult to distinguish between priorities.
There is no good plan for plot advancement
The purpose of the article is not clear enough
The central idea is difficult to understand
smelly and long
What I wrote earlier is some explanation, but I didn't read much later.
The main reason is that this is too uncomfortable, and it is not a book, so many words are densely packed and not divided into paragraphs. Like this
Segmented vs. Non-segmented.
Senju Tobirama stood in front of Hinata Mou, observing Hinata Mou's situation solemnly. He gently put his hand on Hinata Mou's shoulder, and then used his powerful perception ability to explore Hinata Mou's injuries. After confirming Hinata Mou's injury, Senju Tobirama said to Hinata Mou: "Your current state has far exceeded the endurance of your body. You were already a little overloaded after the battle. If you continue to try to break through Senbon's blockade, you will probably become a useless person. Listen to me, give in now. Senju Tobirama stood in front of Hinata Mou, observing Hinata Mou's situation solemnly. He gently put his hand on Hinata Mou's shoulder, and then used his powerful perception ability to detect Hinata Mou's injuries. After confirming Hinata Mou's injury, Senju Tobirama said to Hinata Mou: "Your current state is far beyond the endurance of your body. You are already a little overloaded after the battle. If you continue to try to break through Senbon's blockade, you will probably become a useless person. Listen to me and give in now
Author, please take a look at the above paragraph and bring it into the interface of the novel. It's very uncomfortable to read it without dividing it into sections👀
It is generally best to have no more than five [, commas] in a paragraph and then one [. Period] at the end or [exclamation point ❗️], etc.
Incomprehensible, poor words Redundant dialogue and unclear explanations The connection between the upper and lower parts is blunt and difficult to distinguish between priorities. There is no good plan for plot advancement The purpose of the article is not clear enough The central idea is difficult to understand smelly and long
What I wrote earlier is some explanation, but I didn't read much later. The main reason is that this is too uncomfortable, and it is not a book, so many words are densely packed and not divided into paragraphs. Like this Segmented vs. Non-segmented. Senju Tobirama stood in front of Hinata Mou, observing Hinata Mou's situation solemnly. He gently put his hand on Hinata Mou's shoulder, and then used his powerful perception ability to explore Hinata Mou's injuries. After confirming Hinata Mou's injury, Senju Tobirama said to Hinata Mou: "Your current state has far exceeded the endurance of your body. You were already a little overloaded after the battle. If you continue to try to break through Senbon's blockade, you will probably become a useless person. Listen to me, give in now. Senju Tobirama stood in front of Hinata Mou, observing Hinata Mou's situation solemnly. He gently put his hand on Hinata Mou's shoulder, and then used his powerful perception ability to detect Hinata Mou's injuries. After confirming Hinata Mou's injury, Senju Tobirama said to Hinata Mou: "Your current state is far beyond the endurance of your body. You are already a little overloaded after the battle. If you continue to try to break through Senbon's blockade, you will probably become a useless person. Listen to me and give in now Author, please take a look at the above paragraph and bring it into the interface of the novel. It's very uncomfortable to read it without dividing it into sections👀 It is generally best to have no more than five [, commas] in a paragraph and then one [. Period] at the end or [exclamation point ❗️], etc.
What the hell did you write [laughing awkwardly]
All I can say is that the author is awesome
It's too watery, more than 10 pictures.