Elder Sister*****

It looks good, but some details in the early stage were not handled well. Sometimes the transition is a bit fast, but it is still very good. Come on, author.

Regarding the author's experience, I would like to say that "things that cannot be obtained by a young person will eventually trap him for the rest of his life" and stick to his own life creed.

Big support for the author Yiha. Also, is it a harem? Or a single heroine? It looks like it should be the harem, and now it looks like it's going to enter the Shura field, but don't send your daughter away [note]

Ma Jiaqi is very tall and stands out among the crowd. His body lines are very graceful and his muscles are tight, giving him a strong feeling. His face has deep contours and distinct features, especially his deep eyes, which attract people involuntarily. Ma Jiaqi's hair is black, a little curly, and looks very stylish. He always wears his hair neatly side-parted, looking capable and energetic. Although Ma Jiaqi looks serious, when he smiles, his whole person becomes warm. His smile is charming and makes you feel comfortable. Ma Jiaqi has a very resolute character and has unyielding perseverance. No matter what difficulties he encountered, he would persist in his efforts until he achieved success. He is very smart and good at thinking and analyzing problems. Ma Jiaqi is a character with a very special appearance and personality. He was tall, graceful and had a charming smile. He is perseverant, smart, and charismatic, but at the same time he is humble, honest, and not arrogant. Ma Jiaqi with divine appearance💜✨The ideal Ma Jiaqi in the world💜✨Gentle and considerate Ma Jiaqi💜✨Healing smile Ma Jiaqi💜✨Irreplaceable Ma Jiaqi💜✨My heart is won by Ma Jiaqi. His name is Ma Jiaqi. He doesn't like folded ear root and celery. He likes coconut diced eggplant noodles, winter melon and matcha frappuccino. He likes pasta, his idol is JJ Lin, his goddess is IU Li Zhien, he likes Hermione, he likes to invite in advance, and he hopes that the sea will witness him in the future. He is the pride of Zhengzhou. He is the favorite son of Mr. Ma and Ms. Guo, the favorite younger brother of his brother Ma Ka-shing, the gentle captain of the Youth League of the Times, Ma Jiaqi, the ideal in the world, Ma Jiaqi deserves it! [Lips] Ma Jiaqi is very tall and stands out among the crowd. His body lines are very graceful and his muscles are tight, giving him a strong feeling. His face has deep contours and distinct features, especially his deep eyes, which attract people involuntarily. Ma Jiaqi's hair is black, a little curly, and looks very stylish. He always wears his hair neatly side-parted, looking capable and energetic. Although Ma Jiaqi looks serious, when he smiles, his whole person becomes warm. His smile is charming and makes you feel comfortable. Ma Jiaqi has a very resolute character and has unyielding perseverance. No matter what difficulties he encountered, he would persist in his efforts until he achieved success. He is very smart and good at thinking and analyzing problems. Ma Jiaqi is a character with a very special appearance and personality. He was tall, graceful and had a charming smile. He is perseverant, smart, and charismatic, but at the same time he is humble, honest, and not arrogant. Ma Jiaqi with divine appearance💜✨The ideal Ma Jiaqi in the world💜✨Gentle and considerate Ma Jiaqi💜✨Healing smile Ma Jiaqi💜✨Irreplaceable Ma Jiaqi💜✨My heart is won by Ma Jiaqi. His name is Ma Jiaqi. He doesn't like folded ear root and celery. He likes coconut diced eggplant noodles, winter melon and matcha frappuccino. He likes pasta, his idol is JJ Lin, his goddess is IU Li Zhien, he likes Hermione, he likes to invite in advance, and he hopes that the sea will witness him in the future. He is the pride of Zhengzhou. He is the favorite son of Mr. Ma and Ms. Guo, the favorite younger brother of his brother Ma Ka-shing, the gentle captain of the Youth League of the Times, Ma Jiaqi, the ideal in the world, Ma Jiaqi deserves it! [Lip] Ma Jiaqi is very tall and stands out among the crowd. His body lines are very graceful and his muscles are tight, giving him a strong feeling. His face has deep contours and distinct features, especially his deep eyes, which attract people involuntarily. Ma Jiaqi's hair is black, a little curly, and looks very stylish. He always wears his hair neatly side-parted, looking capable and energetic. Although Ma Jiaqi looks serious, when he smiles, his whole person becomes warm. His smile is charming and makes you feel comfortable. Ma Jiaqi has a very resolute character and has unyielding perseverance. No matter what difficulties he encountered, he would persist in his efforts until he achieved success. He is very smart and good at thinking and analyzing problems. Ma Jiaqi is a character with a very special appearance and personality. He was tall, graceful and had a charming smile. He is perseverant, smart, and charismatic, but at the same time he is humble, honest, and not arrogant. Ma Jiaqi with divine appearance💜✨The ideal Ma Jiaqi in the world💜✨Gentle and considerate Ma Jiaqi💜✨Healing smile Ma Jiaqi💜✨Irreplaceable Ma Jiaqi💜✨My heart is won by Ma Jiaqi. His name is Ma Jiaqi. He doesn't like folded ear root and celery. He likes coconut diced eggplant noodles, winter melon and matcha frappuccino. He likes pasta, his idol is JJ Lin, his goddess is IU Li Zhien, he likes Hermione, he likes to invite in advance, and he hopes that the sea will witness him in the future. He is the pride of Zhengzhou. He is the favorite son of Mr. Ma and Ms. Guo, the favorite younger brother of his brother Ma Ka-shing, the gentle captain of the Youth League of the Times, Ma Jiaqi, the ideal in the world, Ma Jiaqi deserves it! [Lips]

Very good support for the author

It's good to read. As long as the author keeps updating, I will keep following him [blowing kiss]

I hope it will be updated more often. It looks good and I like it. I like it. [Send heart][Send heart]

The author is getting old [laughing evilly]

I like this plot [laughs]

Is this a female-dominated worldview? Girls are pretty strong

The plot is pretty good, but the writing lacks some spark.