Deng Qiang and the robot Luban are swept into a different world by an interstellar black hole. Here, immortal cultivators are rampant. The protagonist vigorously develops modern industry and eventually overthrows the old order. Science Fiction/Cultivation/War
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It's dry, just like Liu Shui Wen, not even remotely enjoyable.
Or maybe you don't know how to highlight the coolness at all
The protagonist and supporting characters are made to look like paper figures, very cold and rigid.
It is even more obvious that there is not a trace of emotion contained in the dialogue.
I had no appetite for the first three chapters.
It's dry, just like Liu Shui Wen, not even remotely enjoyable. Or maybe you don't know how to highlight the coolness at all The protagonist and supporting characters are made to look like paper figures, very cold and rigid. It is even more obvious that there is not a trace of emotion contained in the dialogue. I had no appetite for the first three chapters.