Original God: Liyue Medical Immortal from the Demon God Period

It's okay, but there are a lot of typos. I suggest you read it carefully next time after writing. It can be seen that the author has 26 keys, and it is easy to get distracted when typing. It's a lot better later, there aren't so many typos.

There are so many things in this world that are powerless, such as maths that cannot be learned, endless vocabulary that cannot be memorized, weight that cannot be lost, wallets that cannot be filled, and you that are not updated.

So far it's okay, but there should be more storylines related to the Demon God during the Demon God period. All in all, keep going [laughing] @ Really Want to Be a Salted Fish

The writing is very good, I originally wanted to give it five stars. But Sister Ping's regret makes me feel pity, so I can only give you four stars. But if the author gives Sister Ping a title in the future, I will add five stars. Let me beg the author for help! [Cry][cry]

Changsheng, hey hey, Changsheng is so cute Author, you must persevere and finish writing. Don't stop. Just promise me, okay? .

How to say? It feels like it has a lot of potential! It's just that the plot feels a bit too routine. Author, let's talk about your current plot here. What you wrote at the beginning was pretty good, but look at what you write now. You have added too many emotional scenes now, and the description of the environment is not consistent. For example, in the few pictures you wrote recently, temple fairs and the like, it stands to reason that Gu Liyue should not have had these festivals in the past. After all, the Sea Lantern Festival was only founded after the Demon God War. Also, the direction of your plot is unreasonable. There are too many self-created plots. It should be written according to the historical trend in Genshin Impact. Author, if you continue writing like this, I'm pretty sure your book will be out of date soon. Author, you have only two choices now. One, continue writing like this, then this book will definitely become popular. Second, put aside some self-created plots or unreasonable settings, start the real main plot directly, and slowly advance. Only in this way can there be a glimmer of hope. When the book is almost finished, I will delete and correct some unreasonable chapters in the past. Basically this book is stable. How to do it depends on your own choice. @Really want to be a salted fish

I didn't forget to give it five stars, I gave it, and now I highly recommend this book as a beautiful book. Everyone will be impressed by it once they read it. I hope the author can write the protagonist in a decent way. He should be too strong and not too weak, right?

The writing is good, I hope the heroine will live forever (๑＞ڡ＜)☆

The writing is pretty good, but the character design of Grandma Ping is broken. The character is too arrogant and domineering. I hope the author can improve it. Also, why did the Yang Xiu book have to be updated? I really hope the author resumes updating. There are some small knives in the article. Don't worry about it. The writing is not very sharp.

Nice! Please give me more support from the author, don't give up. Come on, come on, come on, come on

I want to poke the salted fish, no one can stop me [punch out] [punch out] [punch out]

The writing is really good, isn't it? You only update a new book twice a day. Isn't it a bit too much?

Hurry up, Chang Sheng and Ping'er are the best two female protagonists.

The author is so short, it's really hard on my sister-in-law.

I like it very much, keep it up and update it quickly I hope there will be a single female protagonist [face covering]

I read part of it! The overall content is well written, but the character of Grandma Ping seems a bit (arrogant and domineering). The introduction of this article said that the heroine is an immortal, I hope it is not a harem, otherwise I will change the number and give points based on the actual content.

The characters are very vivid, and the growth process of a timid boy gradually growing into a medical saint who is not afraid of death is well written.

I watched it well૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)აCome on author

I really look forward to transforming in the later stages of immortality

It's pretty good, but the longevity scene is a bit lacking.

Well, how can I put it, overall it looks okay. Originally I was aiming for a single heroine to be immortal, but after looking at it, I suddenly felt that dual heroines would be good too. After all, the young Grandma Ping is still very charming [smile] I hope it can be changed to a double heroine [I understand]

Not enough, not enough at all. The most uncomfortable part of the novel is that I don't know who the heroine is. Is there one or more of them? Let's wait and see.

It's pretty good, good, keep up the good work (I hope the heroine will live forever)

This is the only book that makes me feel comfortable. It's very good.

It looks good. Come and see everyone. Come and see it.

I wish the heroine eternal life

Not bad, very pretty

Not bad at least that's what I think

It's quite interesting, but I don't know if there will be a female protagonist. If there is a female protagonist, I hope she will live forever.

If the author didn't give the final blow, I would definitely give it five stars [crying]