Siheyuan: How Can I Be Allowed to Be the Sixth Child with My Strength?

A member of the main group, who just came back and started flirting with the heroine of the courtyard, wants to be Meng De? You can write about other people and other professions, but you can write about a soldier of that era as a thief? It's a bit insulting. When you wrote about the soldiers at that time, you also made them look upright. Do you want to sleep with their wives or the leader of the widow? What do you think? I can't understand the author's brain circuit

Seeing his mother being bullied, the protagonist still treats her with care, is he still a son of man without destroying two beasts? Still a veteran? Can you still get a merit medal with this kind of bloodiness? Pulling the Siheyuan Essay

What kind of brain circuit can you write this thing? When someone pulls your mother's hair and beats it, you are handsome and elegant and call her an old godmother? ? ? A retired team leader, are you kidding me?

Fighter in the garbage. You are insulting the families and soldiers of the martyrs. Just born in this era

Can you please stop writing about soldiers? Don't you think you are insulting the profession of soldiers?

What kind of plot is this? Liejun's family members are so easy-going.

No beginning or end, not smooth at all

What are you writing about? You can't use ignorance as a pass, right? Read more books and more history before writing.

Drive high and go low, the description in the front is awesome, but the handling of things in the back is like a coward.

The writing is very messy, there is no sense of reading, and the storytelling is poor. The author should re-read it and see if there are some essays for middle school students to choose for further study and improve [laughing]

It's written in a messy way, and it will dazzle anyone who reads it.

In the city of Beijing, the martyrs' families were insulted. Have you used your brain to write the chronicle? 😊

The author said that it is understandable when writing for the first time. The author can take a look at the courtyard house to feel the atmosphere of the times! Learn

Come on⛽Come on (っ´ω｀)ﾉ(╥ω╥)

How awkward!

Describe the supporting character as a fool

Not ordinary ink marks

What about primary school students' papers? There is no chapter of communication

The writing is really messy, and it feels like you didn't even think about the story line.

After reading four chapters, I feel disgusted. It's so off the mark.

Garbage is about the protagonist, a lover, who abandons his family and goes to the army for 13 years. Then he comes home and sees his father dead and dropping a few pieces of cat poop.

I really can't stand Chapter 18 anymore. Not to mention it's my first time writing Siheyuan. With this style of writing and logical thinking, I have to rush into writing anything else.

I don't understand. Do you think this is funny?

My cultural level is too low to understand

Next time the eldest brother writes about the mother and sister of the protagonist being bullied, let alone the second brother who joined the army and died, otherwise no one would dare to bully them at that time. That would be peanuts, especially in the capital.

O sea, you are all water!

It would be a pity for the author not to serve as a soldier

It's really boring and looks bad.

The more I write, the worse it gets.

Writing a little bit here and there, a little bit messy, and the people in the courtyard each write a few chapters. What kind of magical writing method is this?