Mortals Who Cultivate Immortality Start from a Young Talisman Master

(Super beautiful, five-star recommendation), as long as I am not embarrassed, others will be embarrassed.

Although there are shortcomings, for example, the male protagonist's training should not be too fantasy and mythical, and should be as grounded as possible. If you find it difficult to write, arrange for the male protagonist to have more adventures to improve his qualifications. You can refer to Jin Yong's novel writing method. But overall it's not bad.

Although it's a bit long-winded in some places. But it's okay! The golden finger is not very wide. Worth a look. It's just too frustrating. If you like cool writing, be careful!

It's good to read, but my suggestion is to add more bookshelves and keep it up. More than 700,000 words is not enough to read. So I finished reading it. It's really good to read. At least so far, there are no uncomfortable settings. There is nothing particularly unreasonable and only a frowning plot. I have read the novel for so many years and I can be considered an old bookworm. It is a good novel and worth reading. The rating of more than seven points is low.

The previous waste material stream was very slow to upgrade. It is true that the foundation was established at the age of sixty. After the foundation was established, it was regarded as a genius stream. The writing is not bad. It is considered a harem novel. There are more women and not those annoying women. It is okay. I haven't finished it yet. There are currently three or four

Mortal Flow's current high-quality work has written quite well the hardships and helplessness of low-grade spiritual roots at the bottom, and the struggle of scumbag qualifications to change their fate. I'm not going to complain, I wrote the Qi refining stage very well at the beginning, but I couldn't grasp it after the foundation building, and the end ended suddenly.

It's so beautiful, I couldn't stop reading it

A great book to read in one sitting! Actually 6.6 Points? Shouldn't it be 9.9 Points?

It's good-looking and has a good rhythm. I can see the protagonist's unwillingness, unwillingness to degenerate, and pure pursuit of truth.

Okay, at first glance, it's a book written by someone with social experience.

This is one of the few novels in Tomato that has its own ideas. For example, why did the United States launch a war? One beauty covers all the ugliness, so I gave it five stars. Although there are many shortcomings, such as Miss Yuan who wrote a lot in the beginning, she did not explain it well later.

The writing style is more interesting, but it is different from the traditional Cultivation of Immortality. In the early stage, a lot of space is devoted to business. Although it is reasonable according to the plot, it is too long. If you want to watch Cultivation of Immortality, you may not like it very much [smile]

He is really a speculator. He gets benefits from others and has no intention of repaying the favor. He will just run away if there is trouble😔

Good review. Nowadays, there are very few articles about cultivating immortals that are well written and can be read. Recommended.

The attractions are one after another, attractive and beautiful!

I have read more than 300 chapters and it is very imaginative. It is good and worth 9 points.

Overall good, but lack of life experience

The rating shouldn't be so low. Normally it should be above 8 points. Give it a full score.

Demons are rampant and the world is in decline, yet such a good article has received such a low score. Fortunately, I had the chance to meet him, so cheers for the author!

So far, I feel like the novel is pretty good, so I'll continue to practice.

Fortunately, I didn't read the comments before reading this, otherwise I would have missed it. There is something I said and written that is good, but I just updated the ink a little bit in a day.

I don't like to comment much, but this book is really good, although there are many typos.

As a time traveler, there is no sign of a time traveler at all

Haven't slept yet? Take a shower and go to bed. Health is the most important thing!

Very good writing✍🏻٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ Come on

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This is a good book. It is said to be about cultivating immortality, but in fact it is not life. This. . . Later changes in painting style

Everyone has their own preferences for radishes and vegetables. I personally think this book is good...

Update it quickly, otherwise everyone will run away, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

Yes, I am reading, except that the spirit gathering array requires the use of medicinal materials (which will make most readers feel uncomfortable), there is no poison!