I'll Eventually Become the Person I Never Wanted to Be

The writing is too messy, the description is not clear enough, the person's pronoun is wrong, and the details are not enough. I suggest the author polish it more and see if there are any mistakes.

To be honest, the content is too watery. I feel that if I can write five chapters of the same content in one chapter, I have to write something meaningless or repeat something over and over again. This feels like my writing is low on word count.

I feel like this novel is so confusing. Just reading a few chapters is almost exhausting my brain cells. There are some problems with the dialogue, and I feel a little tired just reading it.

I can't see the third one, it's like these two were forced together.

It looks weird, and there is very little dialogue. It would be better if there were more dialogue.

All I can say is that this is not how the novel is written. . . The word count is too many, it's completely unnecessary, and the punctuation is also very messy. The story was originally very short, but in the end, I couldn't finish a single thing with more than 10,000 words. That's not how AI is used. Novels are meant to be written and read by oneself, not to use AI to show the word count. Come on. The speed of the new version took off immediately. . . . I have the ability to read it, but the description really doesn't need that much. After reading the new version, I directly learned to describe the big scenes (the battle between two men was written like an epic). The four stars encourage the author, take your time, don't be in a hurry, and look forward to the day when you can successfully modify your work. There are repeated paragraphs in the second chapter. It is recommended that when using AI, you can read the text produced by yourself. If you don't read what you send, it will be meaningless.

Chapter 13 is full of repeated words, repeated over and over again. Can you use ai?

It may be that the brain has stored it too many times, and the understanding ability is not enough. I can't understand what is going on [what]

After reading a few chapters, I have no idea what to write!

It's so cool, I don't want to give it even one star. Is it necessary to keep going on and on about it? Some sentences are repeated all the time, and the protagonist is thinking about life like a philosopher. . .