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Who is the author? Why does calling the police a guard feel like the Japanese Self-Defense Force? Moreover, at that time, there was no mention of military personnel being retired or transferred to other professions.

The factory secretary fought in the Vietnam War. Did he have a mobile phone in 1960? The novel can incorporate some science fiction elements, but it must also respect history! ! ! The author can say that the system will be divided to produce mobile phones in advance, but it cannot distort history. The Vietnam War only started in 1979, and you became the factory secretary just because of the Vietnam War in 1960? What do you think

What is written here is worse than a fifth grade elementary school composition.

Check out the latest chapter, drawing a sheep? What is written from chapter 58 onwards? ? ? ? ? ?

I've seen it, from now on.

It's good, but the old leader I rescued at the beginning no longer has any faith.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the author said let's go screw in the screws [laughing and crying]

What are you writing about? Confusing, bad review.

I thought it was good at first, but when I read the chapter after giving away clothes, my outlook was shattered. I couldn't accept it, so I decisively gave up the book.

The relationship between the characters before and after is contradictory, and the donkey's lips are not the horse's mouth.

What the hell? What a confusing timeline

The first fifty or so chapters are still readable, but the rest of it looks like it was written by a kid. There are a lot of typos, the sentences are not fluent, and there are chickens on the keyboard who can write better than you.

What will you write after Chapter 65? Rubbish!

Just so-so,

No matter what, I can't protect my woman even with the system

I have read Chapter 61, and I have seen that the protagonist has been teaching his brother Sha Zhu to see Qin as a person, but Sha Zhu still refuses to give up. It seriously affects your reading mood. I give you two stars.

It doesn't match up with the previous one. I guess I can't remember the copy. One moment, the doctor changed to the security director. In the first place, he asked the teacher to go on a blind date and then he went to find him again. I don't know if he wrote the word "Lai Shui" randomly.

I feel uncomfortable looking at it. Do I feel like I am cultivating immortality?

What rubbish, it seems off topic at first glance, if it doesn't work, I won't write it.

It's all typos, and my fucking phone is out.

I can't read it, not even after chapter 50. And it was a bit frustrating from the beginning.

Holy Virgin, there is something wrong with the head that sticks to the Silly Pillar family.

This Siheyuan novel is very frustrating and boring to read.

It's so messy, I don't know how to write it.

It looks good at first, but what the hell is behind it, it's a mess

This book is like written by two people

What kind of bullshit are you writing about? In that era, there were meritorious plaques on houses, and neighbors would act like fools and insult people?

The front is okay, but the back is unbearable

What he wrote was confusing. It's hard to understand, it's too messy

Wuyu finally traveled through time again? ?