[Card: Armor 1, King's Equipment, Naruto, Pirate]
Many years later, a young man had a knife full of cracks in his left hand and a black knife in his right hand. He had the Mangekyō Sharingan in his left eye and the Tsansei Eye in his right eye. He had yellow hair that reached his waist, and six Taoist Jade behind him. He looked at the people in front of him calmly.
"This is what it looks like when I use my full strength. Do you want to feel the pain?"
His eyes narrowed, and a huge meteorite fell from the sky.
"Only the surviving garbage can allow me to do it myself."
(If you have any questions, please post them directly in the comment area. I will be a bit lazy when I see the replies. Please remind me when you have time. Then,
It's gone)
Reader comments
Alas, the problem with the first twenty chapters is that it keeps switching back and forth between first and second person;
The whole problem is that the author doesn't know how to write the word "how" and what to use instead (are you sure it wasn't written by AI?);
The problem of missing characters is too serious (it is recommended to write cat directly, at least it will be more fluent)
The portrayal of the protagonist is too "turtle", and he has the beauty of a common man; (also, what can you expect the supporting characters to do, which corresponds to the title of the book)
The system is of little use, and without the system, the protagonist would be no different;
The subject matter is very good, but the author's writing is very messy. You don't even know what you get on the cards. It looks like it's in the clouds, and the storyline is not well written. It says that the ability will be copied, and then I don't know how to get to fight monsters.
Alas, the problem with the first twenty chapters is that it keeps switching back and forth between first and second person; The whole problem is that the author doesn't know how to write the word "how" and what to use instead (are you sure it wasn't written by AI?); The problem of missing characters is too serious (it is recommended to write cat directly, at least it will be more fluent) The portrayal of the protagonist is too "turtle", and he has the beauty of a common man; (also, what can you expect the supporting characters to do, which corresponds to the title of the book) The system is of little use, and without the system, the protagonist would be no different;
The subject matter is very good, but the author's writing is very messy. You don't even know what you get on the cards. It looks like it's in the clouds, and the storyline is not well written. It says that the ability will be copied, and then I don't know how to get to fight monsters.
Pretty good.
Really [smile]