Get Three Unforgivable Curses at the Beginning of Across the Heavens

It mainly focuses on Hogwarts. There are too many themes like this and it makes me feel sleepy. Interspersed with Marvel to make some adjustments, and then use the method of reading the table of contents to read it directly.

Did the author forget? In the setting, the protagonist is still lying in the hospital, wearing a game helmet, and time is not paused. It is time to go back and take a look at the physical body, or change the setting to wearing it, and remove the setting of the helmet. See Chapter 7 for details. The writing is good and the plot is pretty good, keep it up.

Very good fanfic. At present, Pig's Feet is still in the first grade, and in the second and third grade, the current mana is still too small compared to the great wizard. I hope that a mobile spring can be opened to replenish it [laughing], otherwise I won't be able to roam in other worlds.

How come I came across this great book so early?

The protagonist in the author's plot is always unimpressive here and there. Why don't you go back to reality and download a movie novel to learn more about it? Anyway, I'm still in first grade, so I just need to understand 1 first. According to the author's time, the protagonist has not returned to the Harry Potter world after reading and understanding it. How many hours are there? Even if you are worried about disappearing suddenly and being watched, you can still choose the night.

I have read so many books, and this one is considered good. Don't tell me that Mi Huyou is really planning to do this.

The protagonist and supporting characters have good IQs, their logic is smooth, and their writing is good.

To me, it's pretty good-looking, and sometimes there are typos, but the flaws don't hide the good points. I hope the author can write about fighting and learning magic, and at the same time write out the "shock" of fighting, making people immersed in it. Moreover, the Death Curse is still the main character of the protagonist. I hope it will be more novel, come on

I am not saying that this book is super good-looking. First of all, the rhythm is good, it has a bit of a planeswalker feel, and it seems relatively smooth. But what really deserves full praise is attitude. It's been a long, long time since I've seen an author with attitude on various platforms. From being unable to let go at the beginning to being able to comfortably control the rhythm without crashing later on, it is very rare. Moreover, some details have been researched and it is known that teleporting people is the appearance of followers, etc. Most HP novels directly use phantom. However, some local food characteristics are questionable, such as butter beer, hot pot base, and oil dishes. There is basically no book-eating content. Chapter 370 can be replied to by being reminded of the book-eating chapter, and it comes full circle. It also sets up a new setting to advance the plot, but it is a bit rough, resulting in a huge amount of information being given to Harry at once. In short, the progress visible to the naked eye, the correct writing attitude, and the comfortable rhythm deserve full marks.

I really like this unique format of the universe. Many Harry Potter fanfics follow the rapid development of the plot and feel a bit samey. However, this book connects various popular movies or novels together, which is very comfortable to read and will not get boring.

Why can't I say enough? Hurry up and add more.

The main problem is that the audience of Xingyue is a bit small and the plot is long, resulting in fewer and fewer people in the later period. In the later period, it would be fine if the plot of Xingyue can be concluded quickly. The main chapters still depend on the growth of Infinite Flow. After all, this is Tomato. If it is FGO, maybe some people have seen it. If you want a late-stage audience for the Xingyue copy, you can only find it on Mao. There is no other way.

I chose Gryffindor because I didn't want to be noticed by Dumbledore. I don't know what I thought. If you don't want to see Gryffindor, you can leave.

Not bad, how beautiful it is, see for yourself! [Eat melon] It's hard to get into the Holy Grail. I wanted to skip it, but it turned out that it's dozens of chapters and I haven't passed it yet!

Personally, I feel that the author's writing style in the HP world is higher than when writing about other worlds. If it is changed to a Western name, I feel that it should be the same. It's a strange feeling. Especially Xingyue can't stand it at all and keeps jumping. Maybe I have read so many Infinite Streams and written about Xingyue world and now I have no interest in it, so the one star less is deducted from Xingyue (although it did something I really wanted to do). In the end, no matter what the final score of this book is, as long as the author can update it twenty times a day, I will give it a try. Chase after [smile][smile][smile]

I have read more than two hundred and forty chapters. The first one or two hundred seem to be okay, full of imagination and creativity. Although I follow the plot, the plot has not changed much, but it is still interesting to watch. However, it seems that the author stopped updating and started to write more than two hundred and twenty chapters. The world of Xingyue is not good. The protagonist seems to have lost his intelligence, and I feel that the author does not understand this world view very well. It makes me uncomfortable to read. The overall evaluation is okay, above average, you can take a look at the first 200 chapters.

Yes, you can travel around several worlds and gradually increase your strength and become stronger. Moreover, the time you spend traveling around the world is just right. You will not be separated from the previous world when you go to the next world.

The ideas are clear and the structure is reasonable. There is no sense of inconsistency between Marvel and magic. The only uncomfortable thing is that the current plot of Marvel is still a little unfolded, so I am anxious.

This book does have great potential, but the update period has been too long, and almost all the manpower has been lost. I hope that the update now can attract more people, and the Corsair book can be revived (づ ●─● )づ

Wouldn't it be more exciting to have the protagonist and Harley together [laughing and crying] [get it]

The first part was pretty good, but then I stopped watching the anime [laughs awkwardly]

What's going on? Author, you have not updated for six days

We already have snake charms, but a shadow mask isn't too much.

After a world is completed, no one can remember the statistics of skills and items. Has the real world been forgotten?

It's been 150 chapters since the Holy Grail War, and I haven't returned to the Harry Potter world yet. . .

I feel that it would be very interesting if the protagonist held the Holy Grail War in the world of Harry Potter. It cannot be about hiding his identity or appearing out of thin air. He has to let the protagonist do it. It would be super interesting.

A very good one. The elements added to the fanfic yesterday include Harry Potter and Marvel. I like Japanese comics and League of Legends.

Write quickly, write quickly [angry], it looks good, write it for me quickly! No interruption allowed!

Highlights: The protagonist's character is deeply portrayed and the plot is full of tension. What is slightly lacking is that some details are slightly abrupt. On the whole, it not only retains the magical charm of HP, but also brings a fresh perspective, making it worth reading.

The writing is very original, I think I like it very much.