[No system + no time travel + single female protagonist + cool writing + decisive killing]
The great catastrophe is approaching, the prehistoric era is sweeping across, the undercurrent is surging, and the Nether Tribe, which has been dormant for tens of thousands of years, is making a comeback...
When the signs of destruction came, an unknown young man from a border town, a remnant soul that almost disappeared, brought a trace of change to this continent...
Reader comments
The writing is smooth, the story content is imaginative, and it is a very exciting fantasy novel. This time I finally have a good book to read under the quilt. The story is not over yet. I look forward to the follow-up! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Well, after reading the entire article, I have something to say.
First of all, I do not deny the author's writing style and plot processing ability. In a large number of plots, you can see the shadow of several famous traditional fantasy novels between the lines. This fully shows that the author has read many traditional fantasy novels and has a unique understanding.
However, Internet literature is a market-driven literature, and it is also a genre that changes rapidly. I have been reading online books for six years, not to mention eight years. Traditional fantasy books like this could have created gods ten or fifteen years ago, but not today.
Because there are too many traditional fantasy stories about a fallen genius meeting his grandfather and then counterattacking all the way, both good and bad. Under such a track, it is easy to destroy the hope of a book's success and reduce the probability of readers seeing it. From this point, I feel sorry for the author.
Also, I suggest that the author revise the beginning, because, how should I put it, from the perspective of a relatively senior Internet literature lover, it feels too strong. What does it mean specifically? Because no matter which loser counterattacks the traditional fantasy book, it all starts like this, with the same exciting points and the same plot. It is easy for readers who have read many traditional fantasy books to feel tired and lose interest. If the author can create his or her own unique and personalized style, I believe that the reader retention rate can be effectively improved.
(The above opinions are all my humble opinions. If you disagree, then just believe in your own opinion. After all, "One flower blooming alone is not spring, but a hundred flowers blooming together makes the garden full of spring." I hope my book review can be helpful to the author, and I hope my sincerity can be exchanged for the author's sincerity)
This novel presents a stunning fantasy world full of unique ideas and novel elements. The author skillfully blends traditional fantasy elements with modern ideas to create a world that is both familiar and unfamiliar, which is refreshing.
The plot has ups and downs and is exciting. Through carefully designed plots and character conflicts, the author takes readers into an adventure full of suspense and surprises. Each chapter is full of twists and climaxes that will leave you wanting more.
The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, each with its own characteristics. The protagonist is brave and intelligent, and the supporting characters have their own merits. Their personalities and fates are intertwined to form a colorful character picture. Readers can easily relate to these characters and be moved by their joys and sorrows.
The writing is smooth and vivid, and the wording is precise and imaginative. He/she is good at using various rhetorical techniques, such as metaphors, personification, etc., To vividly depict the fantastic scenes and characters' emotions in the fantasy world. Readers feel as if they are in a world full of fantasy while reading.
It explores themes such as human nature, destiny, courage, etc., And guides readers to think about the meaning and value of life. This profound theme makes the novel not only entertaining, but also thoughtful and enlightening.
This is a great book worth reading.
The four characters of Su Xuan have different personalities and characteristics. The plot of the story is twists and turns, the writing skills are solid, the content is as exquisite as knife carving, the content is clear, vivid and interesting.
It's good to watch with my classmates.
Wuhu, after reading Chapter 17 or 18, it is indeed a more traditional fantasy. Practice, upgrade, the protagonist is good🐮[Cool]
I rarely watch male videos, this one has a calming and passionate feeling hahahahaha
(｡ò ∀ ó｡)
Take a seat and keep taking a look ~ (๑> <๑)
Character creation, scene descriptions, etc. Are pretty good. This fantasy novel is okay.
The beginning is clear and clear, giving people a sense of involvement. There is a paragraph in the first chapter that is well written and makes people understand at a glance. The male protagonist Su Xuan has experienced hardships, insults... And slowly developed a strong heart. He works hard and keeps getting slapped in the face along the way. It is really enjoyable to watch.
No system, no time travel, no background, it is the flavor of traditional fantasy [Thinking]
Give me some strength [exploration]
The author's mind is wide open and his imagination is rich. He imagined the whole article so wonderfully, especially in the setting of the storyline. It is refreshing to see the author's strong writing skills. I like it. .
The visuals that shocked the audience were so strong, the writing was as sharp as a razor blade, and the characters portrayed were vivid and exciting.
The characters are distinct and beautiful!
A very good traditional fantasy. Traditional fantasy is very rare nowadays, and such excellent traditional fantasy is even rarer. I believe that the author's great article will shine in the Tomato, which is full of novices. Five-star praise [Love]
The combination of a frail young man and a remnant soul sounds very interesting. With the help of the residual soul, he will reach the peak of martial arts!
I look forward to the young man's growth, and the author should work hard! (ง•̀_•́)ง
The author's writing is good and the story is fast-paced. I hope it can continue to be updated. I look forward to the stories that will happen next. I also hope this book can be read by more people. Good luck, author!
Su Xuan turned around and looked in the direction of his finger, and soon found a secret door not far from the door.
The author's writing is clear and smooth, the story has ups and downs, and the rhythm is tight. The characters are portrayed vividly. This is a rare good book that I recommend to everyone, and the five-star reviews support it.
Beautiful writing, twists and turns of the story, and vivid characters
A great work that organically combines reality and magic, making people unable to put it down.
Brother Su is mine, no one can steal it from me. I just like Brother Su's wisdom and decisiveness, and his straightforward character without procrastination!
Exquisite. . .
It's beautiful and exciting. I stayed up all night watching it and couldn't let it go. This is another amazing book, I am ashamed of myself.
Su Xuan is as mesmerizing as chicken blood!
The writing style throughout is sophisticated and worth reading.
As a reader, please author please update more.
It's a rare fantasy novel without cheats, it's pretty good! Recommend! ! Worth a look.
A rare traditional fantasy novel with delicate writing style and strict logic. I look forward to continued updates.
The background of the story is grand, the characters are distinctive, the fantasy is rich, the plot is compact, and the descriptions are vivid. It is a fantasy novel worth reading.
The background of the story is fictional, the description is very graphic, the characters are well drawn, and the plot is vivid.
I can't help but listen to it, it's a must-read novel
"Tiger's Journey to the Mountains" is extremely exciting. Liu Yichen admires Su Yun very much. The plot is not procrastinating and the characters have distinct personalities. It's good to watch and worth following.
Looks good, keep going! !
The storyline has ups and downs, is compact and not procrastinating. The characters are vividly described, the characterization is flexible and vivid, the writing is clear and smooth, and the reading is very immersive. A good book, highly recommended.
It looks good. It gets better and better as you read more. Please keep up the good work, the author.
Ever since I read Su Xuan, a boy who cultivates immortality, I have not wanted to join this class for a day. I have imagined that one day I will wander in the fantasy world like the male protagonist, have boundless magic power, save the world from fire and water, stay with my loved ones, and survive the disaster together. Thank you to the author for adding a glimmer of hope to my ordinary life, illuminating the bed that I can't bear to leave every day. I empathize with your article.
The writing is very good, I look forward to Su Xuan's growth
Tomato is one of the rare fantasy novels. The writing is good, the plot is smooth, and it has the potential to be explosive. I recommend it.
The story is very brilliant and rich in content. The author has great imagination and good writing style. I can't read enough. Give it five stars.
I really like this book. The author's writing is exquisite and thoughtful. Good writing. Come on!
A rare traditional fantasy novel with a wonderful plot and five-star reviews
The writing is smooth, the story content is imaginative, and it is a very exciting fantasy novel. This time I finally have a good book to read under the quilt. The story is not over yet. I look forward to the follow-up! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Well, after reading the entire article, I have something to say. First of all, I do not deny the author's writing style and plot processing ability. In a large number of plots, you can see the shadow of several famous traditional fantasy novels between the lines. This fully shows that the author has read many traditional fantasy novels and has a unique understanding. However, Internet literature is a market-driven literature, and it is also a genre that changes rapidly. I have been reading online books for six years, not to mention eight years. Traditional fantasy books like this could have created gods ten or fifteen years ago, but not today. Because there are too many traditional fantasy stories about a fallen genius meeting his grandfather and then counterattacking all the way, both good and bad. Under such a track, it is easy to destroy the hope of a book's success and reduce the probability of readers seeing it. From this point, I feel sorry for the author. Also, I suggest that the author revise the beginning, because, how should I put it, from the perspective of a relatively senior Internet literature lover, it feels too strong. What does it mean specifically? Because no matter which loser counterattacks the traditional fantasy book, it all starts like this, with the same exciting points and the same plot. It is easy for readers who have read many traditional fantasy books to feel tired and lose interest. If the author can create his or her own unique and personalized style, I believe that the reader retention rate can be effectively improved. (The above opinions are all my humble opinions. If you disagree, then just believe in your own opinion. After all, "One flower blooming alone is not spring, but a hundred flowers blooming together makes the garden full of spring." I hope my book review can be helpful to the author, and I hope my sincerity can be exchanged for the author's sincerity)
This novel presents a stunning fantasy world full of unique ideas and novel elements. The author skillfully blends traditional fantasy elements with modern ideas to create a world that is both familiar and unfamiliar, which is refreshing. The plot has ups and downs and is exciting. Through carefully designed plots and character conflicts, the author takes readers into an adventure full of suspense and surprises. Each chapter is full of twists and climaxes that will leave you wanting more. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, each with its own characteristics. The protagonist is brave and intelligent, and the supporting characters have their own merits. Their personalities and fates are intertwined to form a colorful character picture. Readers can easily relate to these characters and be moved by their joys and sorrows. The writing is smooth and vivid, and the wording is precise and imaginative. He/she is good at using various rhetorical techniques, such as metaphors, personification, etc., To vividly depict the fantastic scenes and characters' emotions in the fantasy world. Readers feel as if they are in a world full of fantasy while reading. It explores themes such as human nature, destiny, courage, etc., And guides readers to think about the meaning and value of life. This profound theme makes the novel not only entertaining, but also thoughtful and enlightening. This is a great book worth reading.
The four characters of Su Xuan have different personalities and characteristics. The plot of the story is twists and turns, the writing skills are solid, the content is as exquisite as knife carving, the content is clear, vivid and interesting. It's good to watch with my classmates.
Wuhu, after reading Chapter 17 or 18, it is indeed a more traditional fantasy. Practice, upgrade, the protagonist is good🐮[Cool] I rarely watch male videos, this one has a calming and passionate feeling hahahahaha (｡ò ∀ ó｡) Take a seat and keep taking a look ~ (๑> <๑)
Character creation, scene descriptions, etc. Are pretty good. This fantasy novel is okay.
The beginning is clear and clear, giving people a sense of involvement. There is a paragraph in the first chapter that is well written and makes people understand at a glance. The male protagonist Su Xuan has experienced hardships, insults... And slowly developed a strong heart. He works hard and keeps getting slapped in the face along the way. It is really enjoyable to watch.
No system, no time travel, no background, it is the flavor of traditional fantasy [Thinking] Give me some strength [exploration]
The author's mind is wide open and his imagination is rich. He imagined the whole article so wonderfully, especially in the setting of the storyline. It is refreshing to see the author's strong writing skills. I like it. .
The visuals that shocked the audience were so strong, the writing was as sharp as a razor blade, and the characters portrayed were vivid and exciting. The characters are distinct and beautiful!
A very good traditional fantasy. Traditional fantasy is very rare nowadays, and such excellent traditional fantasy is even rarer. I believe that the author's great article will shine in the Tomato, which is full of novices. Five-star praise [Love]
The combination of a frail young man and a remnant soul sounds very interesting. With the help of the residual soul, he will reach the peak of martial arts! I look forward to the young man's growth, and the author should work hard! (ง•̀_•́)ง
The author's writing is good and the story is fast-paced. I hope it can continue to be updated. I look forward to the stories that will happen next. I also hope this book can be read by more people. Good luck, author!
Su Xuan turned around and looked in the direction of his finger, and soon found a secret door not far from the door. The author's writing is clear and smooth, the story has ups and downs, and the rhythm is tight. The characters are portrayed vividly. This is a rare good book that I recommend to everyone, and the five-star reviews support it.
Beautiful writing, twists and turns of the story, and vivid characters A great work that organically combines reality and magic, making people unable to put it down.
Brother Su is mine, no one can steal it from me. I just like Brother Su's wisdom and decisiveness, and his straightforward character without procrastination! Exquisite. . .
It's beautiful and exciting. I stayed up all night watching it and couldn't let it go. This is another amazing book, I am ashamed of myself. Su Xuan is as mesmerizing as chicken blood!
The writing style throughout is sophisticated and worth reading. As a reader, please author please update more.
It's a rare fantasy novel without cheats, it's pretty good! Recommend! ! Worth a look.
A rare traditional fantasy novel with delicate writing style and strict logic. I look forward to continued updates.
The background of the story is grand, the characters are distinctive, the fantasy is rich, the plot is compact, and the descriptions are vivid. It is a fantasy novel worth reading.
The background of the story is fictional, the description is very graphic, the characters are well drawn, and the plot is vivid. I can't help but listen to it, it's a must-read novel
"Tiger's Journey to the Mountains" is extremely exciting. Liu Yichen admires Su Yun very much. The plot is not procrastinating and the characters have distinct personalities. It's good to watch and worth following. Looks good, keep going! !
The storyline has ups and downs, is compact and not procrastinating. The characters are vividly described, the characterization is flexible and vivid, the writing is clear and smooth, and the reading is very immersive. A good book, highly recommended. It looks good. It gets better and better as you read more. Please keep up the good work, the author.
Ever since I read Su Xuan, a boy who cultivates immortality, I have not wanted to join this class for a day. I have imagined that one day I will wander in the fantasy world like the male protagonist, have boundless magic power, save the world from fire and water, stay with my loved ones, and survive the disaster together. Thank you to the author for adding a glimmer of hope to my ordinary life, illuminating the bed that I can't bear to leave every day. I empathize with your article.
The writing is very good, I look forward to Su Xuan's growth
Tomato is one of the rare fantasy novels. The writing is good, the plot is smooth, and it has the potential to be explosive. I recommend it.
The story is very brilliant and rich in content. The author has great imagination and good writing style. I can't read enough. Give it five stars.
I really like this book. The author's writing is exquisite and thoughtful. Good writing. Come on!
A rare traditional fantasy novel with a wonderful plot and five-star reviews