Preaching and Teaching, but Everything Is Wrong with the Disciples?

A slow-burning novel about an apprentice developing into a master in the guise of a fantasy system. As a novel with a fantasy background, the division of realms is not obvious, the combat power is sometimes high and sometimes low, and the depiction of the cultivation part is not very good. But as a love story about a Chongshi, the emotions are delicately portrayed and the characters are well developed. It made my aunt laugh. It mainly depends on what type of novel you want to read. If you can tolerate the imperfections of cultivating immortals in a fantasy setting, then this book is an excellent novel for cultivating teachers. Mainly, it's really cool [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

A good book, a good book, compared to those with high ratings on Rotten Tomatoes, this book is what Tomatoes should be. The last time I felt this way was the book Victor. I remember that the score was not very high at the time, but now it is over nine. A good book needs to settle down.

So far it's pretty good, I hope it doesn't go downhill. There are some shortcomings, but it's still readable. The number of words in "Developing a Good Skill" is too small. Judging from the title, there shouldn't be only one apprentice. When will other apprentices come out? It was really disgusting to see what was going on behind the scenes. The disciple's entire family was wiped out with one sword. You want to kill only one person? It's really funny.

The writing is very good. The master teaches how to fight and how to be a good person. The growth path of the apprentice is clear at a glance. He is indeed getting stronger by being down-to-earth. The rhythm is well grasped. I almost didn't want to stop during the whole process. I can read it in one breath. It's very good.

No way, it's so beautiful And it's a nurturing one. The protagonist's character and the first apprentice's character are both very interesting. This is what Yazi should be like [please update]

OK, I have been reading this book for a while. The plot is very good and very immersive. First of all, let's talk about the protagonist. It is well portrayed. It is not like other master-disciple stories where you talk about not to do things while doing what you need to do. It is very principled, which is a major feature of the book. Then, the description of the protagonist giving exercises to the apprentices is also pretty good. At least there is a research process, unlike others where he directly masters or skips the research process as soon as he gets it. At the same time, the protagonist here is not omnipotent (relative shortcomings, such as alchemy and so on) ), the portrayal of the disciples is also okay, there are senior sisters who are optimistic and generous and like to stick to each other, and there are also the second junior sisters who are careful and sensitive to take care of the house (there are currently two of them). The overall description of the master-disciple relationship is not radical, and has the beauty of nourishing everything (at the same time, the apprentice is a good nurturing one) The next one comes after one), so the emotional description is very good (one-on-one after all). I look forward to the scene where the senior sister returns from the world of mortals and sees the junior sister. Also, Lin Xiao, don't spoil them too much. The emperor's ruler beat them hard, they are all rebels against the master (sad) ——Recommended reading

The duel between the male protagonist is the best one I have ever seen in a master-disciple novel. Unlike other master-disciple novels, the male protagonist is like a loser. He does nothing but systematically teach some skills [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

The details are described very well... [Laughs evilly], and the emotions are also described very well. If I insist on saying it... I suggest the author put some effort into a long paragraph and break up the sentences. Otherwise, the details are not good. This book is still very good. There are not many fine products on my bookshelf. Come on, I can't get enough of them!

The author at least listened to the suggestions, and the writing is not bad. It can be read as a farming novel. The protagonist has a normal personality, which is very important. He is not frivolous, not lewd, not paranoid, not persistent, and has a gentle personality. It is recommended to read it. I like it very much. The writing is really good. Come on, author.

It's good to watch. The current plot is like raising a daughter, and there may be a rebellion in the future.

The writing is clear and delicate, and the style is fresh and interesting. Although some words are inappropriate, it does not affect the reading experience. The division of realms in the article is relatively random. There are slightly fewer fighting scenes but not prevarication. It is more emotional description. Each apprentice has his own emotional line. This book is very unique compared to other stories about masters and apprentices. The male protagonist teaches each apprentice carefully, is responsible, and truly establishes the image of a master. The apprentices also change their attitudes little by little in the process of getting along (if you read too many posts without thinking, you will find this article is really refreshing). In short, if you like master-apprentice stories, you can just read it.

It can be regarded as an invincible and refreshing article, a master-disciple article, very sweet. The heroines (all apprentices) are all well described, and their relationships develop gradually. It's a bit like the previously recommended book "After Raising a Villain Heroine, They Follow Me", which is about recruiting and developing a disciple. It's worse than that one, except that it doesn't have a knife. Without a knife, the feelings are not that deep (although this one is also very deep). There is a system, but it doesn't matter. Pretty good, recommended

The writing is quite good, much better than the sleazy and ambitious male protagonists in those cool novels. The emotions are described in a more delicate way and it is considered a nurturing novel. The shortcoming is that the realm is not clearly stated. For example, in the chapter on the Kaiyuan Stone, I always thought that Taoist weapons were stronger than holy weapons, but it turned out not to be the case.

Nice! ! ! The writing style is a little immature, but the emotions are delicate, and the plot is also good. Little Liuying is so cute. After reading Chapter 80, I even thought that a single female protagonist is good. No matter what happens later, the author of the harem should not delete Little Liuying's scenes. It's so cute [facepalm]

The tenderness of the protagonist is so beautiful. He is afraid of hurting the person in front of him and feels ashamed of the person he likes. He has shown it very well from the fourth disciple (except that the sudden refusal is a bit sudden). He has done this and feels that he is just raising a daughter. Even if he doesn't want to hurt her heart, he can't do it again. He has been ridiculed. I feel that this part is quite inappropriate later on. The rest of the writing is really good, making people feel that An Liuying is cute and innocent. The straightforward hugging and shouting "take a bite" from the beginning are all beautifully written. It gives people a feeling of white moonlight. Every time I read about the new disciples, I feel unfair to the eldest disciple. Although the story is about the protagonist being forced, I feel An Liuying's love and tolerance. The acceptance of each new sister makes me feel a little pitiful. Her family has lost its only light and has to share it with others. It is pitiful to act like a simple and good girl in front of the protagonist. The second disciple is hard to say. Although the family has been through a lot, he soon drugged his own private domain, but In the future, I can accept the tolerance of other characters and the best reassuring role for the protagonist. The third disciple's life experience is not bad. He met the protagonist because of his stubbornness. He and the protagonist have mutual affection during the change. He may be the one the author really wants to write about. He is innocent enough to be selfish but also feels guilty for the first two, so he is tolerant of the new one. He is also very humane and in line with reality and the protagonist. I don't want to say what the fourth disciple said. As the part where he uses the protagonist as a cauldron to fight back and still teases the protagonist, I feel that the protagonist is too kind, and also I feel it's unfair to the previous ones (especially An Liuying), but the story is logical and beautiful (after all, it's a disciple, so there's no issue with combat power). Although it makes people feel uncomfortable in some parts, it's worthy of full stars. It's also the only episode that makes me feel that I want to continue watching but don't want to see it end. Every time I accept a disciple, I feel pitiful for An Liuying, but I also look forward to a new story. I want to continue reading, but I see it is finished but I am afraid of the melancholy after the end. This story is really good.

The male protagonists of male videos about Shizun generally give me the feeling that they are making a fool of themselves, and they don't even look like a master. The male protagonist of this book gave me the feeling of being a female master. He has a fairy-like temperament, correct outlook on life, and strong strength. It's really good-looking.

The writing is very good. My favorite pairing is An Yatou and Little Rouwan, a cute pair who traveled to famous mountains and rivers. From the moment they were accepted as disciples to the ups and downs on the adventure down the mountain, everything on the road to happiness seems to be to completely eliminate the tragic past of the girl and to completely bury the unbearable past of being a little beggar. It would be better if there were side stories about An Yatou and Xiao Rouwan's travels to keep us entertained. Although we can capture their wonderful stories from the existing texts, we still hope to have specific and more vivid side stories to experience the bond between Xiao Rouwan and An Yatou, their growth and transformation along the way, and their pure hearts that have not changed even after witnessing all kinds of life and going through all kinds of hardships. I hope that the whole book will have a happy ending. I hope that just like we can see through the novel, these people in the novel can continue their happy life and colorful stories in that world. Praise the author! 🙌

It's okay. At least the subject matter is old-fashioned, but the content routine has changed a lot, and it's still quite interesting. You are starting a new book, and the quality in the early stage is the most important. I hope you succeed.

It's good to read, but I feel that the cultivation speed in it is too fast. It's not as troublesome as cultivating immortals in other novels. It takes more than ten years or a lifetime to achieve golden elixir. The ordinary genius here can become a god in his twenties. Of course, the highlight is the apprentices. I personally hope that as mentioned in the introduction, four apprentices will be enough, plus the four guardian beasts and the male protagonist, and the nine soul lanterns can also be matched. Otherwise, if there are too many female protagonists, the average role will be too little. Currently, there are only two apprentices, the gluttonous silly dog ​​and the smart kitten. I wonder if there will be a proud phoenix and a cunning fox in the future.

I feel that the best thing is that the skills the protagonist obtains from his apprentice can be used directly. There are not too many and there is a limit on the number of times. This is very cool. The male protagonist is very male, and the female protagonist is very female. They are very beautiful.

100%, The writing style is very good, there are 4 Taoist companions in total, the whole article is mainly about the emotional line, supplemented by the line of cultivating immortality, basically there will be no worries about cultivating immortality. The emotional lines between the four Taoist couples are very clear, allowing readers to understand them. The characters of the protagonists are also very clear, and they are all very cute characters. The character growth and emotional changes of the protagonists can be clearly seen in the article. Although the pitfalls of where the system comes from are not filled in in the end, it is obvious that these are secondary. Seeing the warm daily life between them allows readers to feel the quiet life of the years. All in all, the writing is delicate, the emotions are sincere, the daily life is warm, non-toxic and knife-free, and it is a 100% sweet article worth reading.

Overall, it looks pretty good. The heroines have distinct personalities, which is an advantage. However, I personally think there are some things that I personally don't think are very good. The theme of the entire novel is revenge. The eldest brother avenges the family's destruction, which is classic and no problem. The second son avenges the elders in the family for fighting and his mother was killed, no problem. The fourth son avenges being tricked and killed, no problem. What kind of revenge does this third child want to take? The family's hatred for her marriage? The hatred for not giving her freedom? Or will the family take back all of her revenge? After reading the whole book, among these so-called villains, I think the Ji family, the third child, should be considered the least problematic. In my personal opinion, the old saying is quite true. Eat the emperor's salary and be loyal to the emperor. Repay the emperor's favor on the golden platform. Support the jade dragon to die for the emperor. The family has supported you since childhood and even pampered you. Even the autograph secrets left by the ancestors are fortunate to be read. The family environment is also very good. Brothers and sisters are respectful and sisters are harmonious. When you grow up, She said she was unwilling to make some sacrifices for the family. She said that this arrangement would not give me freedom, and the family was already trying its best to fight for her interests. She could just pick and choose if she didn't like her. The marriage could even bring the whole son-in-law home in the end. I feel that there is no higher treatment than this in the novels I have read. I feel that it is not as good as writing something else. The three previous revenge templates have been used. This time it can be written as a conflict between peers, which leads to the final desire for revenge. Later, I will join the male protagonist and go to the demon country for training. I will introduce the demons in this book. In ancient times, the demon clan was strong, enslaved all races, and treated the human race as blood food that could be killed at will. Later, powerful human beings emerged in large numbers to overthrow the demon's rule, seize the world's power, and sign an agreement with the demon to live in peace. However, in fact, the demon has been looking for opportunities to recreate the ancient demon's glory and rule the planet. This Beijing combined with the extreme example I gave gives me a sense of déjà vu and reminds me of something else.

It's good-looking, and the strong character of the protagonist is portrayed so well.

It's very interesting and the heroine's character is well portrayed. I hope it will continue to be updated without interruption.

I have been reading books for several years, and this one is considered good. I really feel that the rating is not consistent. It is at least 9.2 Or above. I would not expect that no one would read it. I guess some people are reading it, and the author has been insisting on updating it. This book can be regarded as a niche treasure.

The character creation is particularly good, the daily life is also very good, and the emotional line is good. The only problem is the timeline, and there are also some problems with the expression of spiritual practice. It does not show the strength that meets the realm, but it is harmless, and it is still recommended.

It's a good book, and the emotional foreshadowing is very delicate. Although there are some minor flaws, it is worth watching. There are too many daily plots, and the description of fighting plots is also acceptable. A very warm book Immortal Drunk is really a failure, I can't stand this setting anyway. What is the difference between adultery and adultery?

The writing is good and the descriptions are very delicate. It is not suitable for people who like to read refreshing articles. However, after eating too much industrial fast food, reading such daily articles will give you a relaxing feeling. However, now the four apprentices in the introduction have been collected. If you continue to follow the routine of adopting apprentices and then accepting apprentices, although it looks very comfortable, it is also a bit like a matryoshka doll. The fourth apprentice comes from the fairy world and naturally connects the future fairy world plot, broadening the world view, and I guess I can write a lot of words for a long time.

First of all, this is a novel that is relatively mature. The characters of the four female protagonists are pretty good and the characters are well-established. There is no facial expression. The writing is okay, and the way of dealing with the emotions between the characters is also good. However, the battle line is a little too long and there are a lot of boring chapters. In addition, the male protagonist's cheating all the way also makes the plot too bland. But as a daily novel, it doesn't matter if you can read it. I can only say that it is still good to read when you are bored.

It focuses on emotions and weak on combat. The protagonist has relatively few battles, which are basically cross-level crushing. The main battle scenes are for the female characters, and the description is okay; A large part of this book is devoted to describing the characters. At this stage, there are three female characters, and their respective styles are quite distinct; Generally speaking, the female characters were accepted as apprentices in times of hardship, and the protagonist helped them in various ways, which made them secretly fall in love. The main emotional line is that the protagonist struggled in the traditional identity of a master, and was gradually moved by the sincerity of the apprentices and chose to accept it; The description of emotional entanglements, transformations and epiphanies is very good, and it is the best way to write about emotions in male videos. Personally, I prefer this type of emotional writing, not to mention that it is rare for Tomato to write such traditional emotional dramas, but it may not be suitable for the general trend; This article is of course a fun article, but it may not be suitable for readers who only like crazy battles. The battles in this article serve the plot, not the other way around. There are some bad comments in the comments, which I don't quite agree with. I can only say that it's a matter of opinion.