Curse Return: as a Swordsman, What's Wrong with a HE?

A very good novel, it made my flying sword whiz around. Love comes from the Great Flame. [Shy][shy]

Overall, it's pretty good. The writing is passable. Not to mention a masterpiece, it's a good novel. The plot progresses naturally and the emotions are described in detail. It's good except for a little bit (the author is a student, so I can understand). Demining: If you like no heroine/harem/multiple heroines, choose carefully. The pace is not too fast, no system and no cheating. If you like fast-paced invincible stories, don't enter. The author revealed that there may be a knife in the later stage. Personal suggestion: It can be maintained, but the traffic of this article is small and I don't know when it will disappear. If the author is active and listens, you can comment more. Summary: You can read it, it's a good choice for a fanfic, the author is cute and obedient, you can eat/pout (cross out)

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel with such reasonable wording, sentences, and plot. The writing style is really great, and the characters are vivid. Compared with those fan fiction that simply treat the original characters as tools or simply don't describe them at all, it's so different. The quality is so high that it's surprising that it's a Tomato novel. , The setting is also very interesting. The relationship between the protagonist and all the characters is established step by step rather than reaching the sky in one step. Originally, I was going to stay away from the emotional line in the fanfic, but I didn't expect that this book handles it so comfortably. I want all people who are involved in curses to see this almost perfect fanfic! Congratulations on the completion! It's great to be able to follow it all the way to the end!

It's really beautiful! ! Among all the Shuai fanfics I have read, the development of the relationship and the progress of friendship between the protagonist and Gojo and others in this one are the most natural. The plot rhythm of the book is quite comfortable to read. Come on, author! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The writing style is very good, and the characterization of each character is in place. It does not suffer from the common problem of most online novels (always focusing on highlighting the protagonist, and everyone else becomes a burden or accessories). The author's description of the group portraits is still very good. You can see that each character has his own "role", and even in the final battle, you can see different people's different coping methods. This kind of author can still insist on "bringing everyone along for fun" in the later stage is really rare. I read it in one sitting after finishing this article. Generally speaking, the plot is very smooth and not too stiff. I think it's quite good with a bit of ancient writing, it doesn't feel abrupt, and the quotes are quite consistent. It can be seen that the author has put some effort into researching the information. Sometimes the transitions are a bit sudden, such as memories turning into reality (I think it can be distinguished by dividing lines or adding square brackets), but it is not a problem to understand, but the reaction will be a little slower. Overall, this is a very good fanfic that respects the personality traits of the original characters and incorporates additional settings very well. I personally don't like to read Long Aotian-style cool or mindless sweet stories, but the author of this work has a good grasp of the "degree". The plot has twists and turns, and the characters' emotions are "on point". It is very comfortable to read, and the ending HE still has a "reverberating" feeling. It's a very high-quality article. I'm surprised to see it on Tomatoes. I recommend it. *Also, thank you to the author for your hard work. The article is very beautiful. Come on!

It's so good. When I first saw this book, I felt like someone shared my brain, but I don't have the ability to write a spell fanfic. The author is so amazing. After reading the book, I realized: I don't deserve to share a brain with you [crying] Please give me more support, the author writes really well! ! ! It feels like watching anime, I really like watching daily life! !

I really like it. I like Taoist stuff very much. The most important thing is that the heroine is Jiazi. I like it so much. The author must update it well. I look forward to coming back to read your novel every day in class.

It's pretty good. I quite like the subject matter and the writing style. But at the beginning, when the time travel was exposed to Glass, I felt it was completely unnecessary. If it were weakened later, it wouldn't be a big deal. Overall, it's pretty good.

541. This article is about ordinary and daily life, so there is no excitement or excitement in the fights. If you don't have any requirements, you can still read it. But I can't accept the plot. I don't like the plot of "drama within a drama" 😂😂. As for the plot of Mengmo in the early stage, emmm can't describe the feeling 😂 So I fell into the trap of the curse and wrote other content. It felt very inconsistent, a bit separated, and I couldn't read it🥹 So now I can't tell the plot of the article, whether it's a dream about a cursed spirit's trap or real life. The writing style is too bland and I can't relate to it. I'm so confused that I can't read the article. When I realized it, I suddenly realized that it was only when Hu Zi appeared on the scene. I was shocked and quickly looked through the table of contents and found out that it was a special episode🤣. I was scared to death. I thought it was outrageous and I had missed the plot for more than ten years. I could only gather myself and continue to read it seriously. The relationship between the male protagonist and Glass is that they got together after having a good relationship with each other. In fact, I don't know how they got together, and then they got a son-in-law🥹 Later, I felt like, well, the male protagonist is the only brain in the magic world, and he almost has the magic world in his hands, and everyone else is a gorilla. The words are so spicy, if I don't say it anymore, it will be endless. Come on, the author, and make the next book more passionate and involving. This book is so sweet that it goes in one ear and out the other. I forgot about the previous plot before I finished reading it. 😰But, the author's original plot is great😎 I really like the original parts (except before chapter 78)

This book written by the author is one of the best I have ever seen among the Cursed Return fanfics. The pacing is well controlled, it is not compact, and it does not make people feel dragged out. There are no awkward conversations or inexplicable disputes between the characters. I hope the author can continue writing it. [Salute]

To be honest, this book is a micro-group portrait novel that stands out among fast-food single-perspective novels. Some characters in it have been optimized to be more suitable for Chinese babies' physiques while being pasted into the original works. They dare to write and can write, and their strength and writing skills coexist. Although sometimes there are some small problems with improper details of characters and oversimplification of character transitions, the flaws are not concealed and it is still an excellent fanfic (what else do you need for a bicycle when everything is free? [Thinking])

I have read more than a dozen spell fics, and to be honest I can't find any faults with this one. There are no awkward dialogues, and the modal particles do not appear several times in a sentence (the status quo of most fics). The rhythm is also well grasped, and the writing style feels very sophisticated. This is not the author's first time writing a book.

I have never read Magic Return War, I have only heard about it, but while reading this book, I unconsciously want to know more about the characters in the story, and enjoy the growth of the four little ones, the changes brought by the protagonist, a little butterfly, to the original few people, the sweet love between Miss Kairi and a certain little border collie, it is very good and beautiful, my favorite Magic Return fanfic (I am also starting to make up for it now!) Author, keep up the good work! Whether it's daily life or the future main line, I'm looking forward to it! ! ! [Cool][cool]

It's very well written, much better than any other spells fanfic.

Looks good! The structure is complete, and the emotional scenes are subtle and moving. It really touched me. The game of wits and fighting scenes are great👍🏻. Taoist thoughts are embellished in it, and it has oriental aesthetics. My favorite is the Chinese wedding and the respect for the original characters! ! ! Maybe the incident at Qingji Temple felt a bit sudden to me (maybe I was overthinking it). All in all, worth a look!

It's a really good book. It gives people the feeling that this is the original work. After all, the original work only has "will you win?" [Face covering] [face covering] This book fulfills the regret and sadness of the comic. I can only say that the author is very careful [note] [note]

After reading it, I can only say that the writing style is very good. I can only say that it is one of the few high-quality fan stories. It is a pity that the author writes about fan fiction. It has a bit of a Renaissance feel, a literary youth style, and ancient environmental and psychological descriptions. But relatively speaking, the description of fighting scenes and battlefield differentiation is a little weaker. I hope the author can write better in the future. Five stars!

Simplified version: The work is more of a daily-style emotional drama, interspersed with battles. It makes up for the discomfort I felt when watching the original work. Original version: This is a very classic creative style. The purpose of the work is not to live in the world of original works every second, but to fill the readers' regrets from a perspective that has inherited many readers' regrets. The work starts from the timeline of the boy Gojo Satoru and ends with the Su Nuo incident. The work is not strictly a fighting work, but it is full of the author's emotions, which will exaggerate every reader while reading. Disadvantages: You can comment below after reading, I won't go into details [laughing]

A great new conjuring fanfic! I hope that the author can still update more while ensuring the quality in the future! One update a day is really not enough! And if possible, I hope that Ie Natsuko will be the heroine [sending heart]! I want to see a plot where Jay is no longer going dark! I want to see the warm and funny daily life of the foursome! I want to see the protagonist guide Nanami and Haibara, two junior students! I even want to see the sweet love story between the protagonist and the heroine in the future! Thinking of this, I can't stop raising the corners of my mouth [blowing a kiss]!

It took me more than a day to finish it, and I read the middle part relatively quickly, but this book is really well written, and the battles outside of love are also very attractive, making it not boring. The relationship between Sawa and Glass is also very well grasped. It is sweet but not boring throughout the whole process like ordinary love novels. Both of them care about each other. In addition, I feel that Su Nuo is going too fast. Should I give him some back-up and let the plot have its ups and downs? But these are all things for later. The show of flowers has been completed. I hope to see the post-marriage episode. I want to eat sweets. I wish the author all the best and all the best, sincerely.

It's really beautiful. The author's writing style is very good, and some of the plots described also made me feel very visual. Especially the friendship between the protagonists during the high school period is also very enviable. Overall, it's very beautiful and of high quality. Good luck to the author.

1. The perfect ending makes me feel satisfied during the days when knives are everywhere. 2. The perfect description makes me feel happy with the arrangement of words. 3. The reasonable plot made me give it five stars without realizing it.

A great, very good fanfic that basically makes up for all the shortcomings of the original work. The protagonist is vividly portrayed. He will be confused and scared, but he will not run away; he will be sentimental, but he will not be hesitant; he will be compassionate, but he will not let the tiger go back; he will regret it, but he will not stand still. It can be said that the shape is perfect. What is even more amazing is the performance of the original characters, which is both distinct and does not deviate from the original work. As for the shortcomings, it may be that the author's writing style is a little out of the ordinary. I listened to the book, so the scene changes often made me a little stunned. But overall, the flaws outweigh the advantages.

Even now, I have read a lot of novels. But this book is considered top-notch in terms of writing style, grasp of character influence, writing style and rhythm, etc. But this is not what I think is the best thing about this book. The best thing about this book is the [warmth] it captures in its writing. Whether it is from the starting point of he or from the plot layout with a cinematic feel, the author's warmth and gentleness can be seen The whole book is as clear as the waters of East Timor, cleansing one's heart. It is the sunlight that shines through the flawless windows and reflects the infinite blue of the sky It's refreshing and memorable Love it so much, the author is great! Come on! , Haixing really still loves you the most, it's so well written! ! ! ! I'm speechless! ! ! Ah, wasn't I talking? ? It doesn't matter anymore! ! Starfish competition high! !

It's a really great novel! Every plot transition is perfect. The description of the psychological activities of Summer Oil and Bitter Summer and how everyone resolves conflicts are also in line with everyone's characteristics. The protagonist will not plan everything just because he is the protagonist, he will also have his own bottlenecks and confusions. The most important thing is that everyone finally achieved a happy ending in a perfect and reasonable way! It's really beautiful, highly recommended! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

I would like to call this book the original work of Juju Kaiba. The author's writing skills are really good. The style of Japanese light novels. I have finished reading the Huaiyu chapter. It is really worth reading every chapter. The feeling of youth with sadness in spring and autumn is really hard to put down.

Awesome! ! ! The best fanfic (in my opinion)! ! ! It can make me feel the reluctance to leave when my favorite anime ends and the desire to know what happens next. Although there are extra chapters, there are still some dissatisfaction. Maybe the ending does not need to be too complete and perfect, because the readers themselves have the perfect answer! Come on, author! ! !

I personally like this book very much. This book may not be a perfect fit for everyone. But the author's writing content and thoughts and feelings are very good. I don't know how to describe this feeling. Reading this book feels like following the protagonist's footsteps through life. The protagonist is like a gentleman. Practice your own way, whether it is guardianship or otherwise. It's also pretty cool when the main character sprinkles candy. I was a little moved by what I wrote.

To be honest, in my mind, this book ranks among the top three best-reading fics I have ever read. The story is moderately good, and the protagonist's combat power is not like that of some fans who casually scorn other characters. Looking at the title, I feel that the protagonist's final strength is not too outrageous. I just hope Gojo can be strengthened and not be like the manga where he says he won't lose but turns out to be a clown [face covering] and then he doesn't want to be a eunuch.

It looks good, the rhythm is really good, and the characters are well drawn. Unlike some novels I have read before, this novel can make me definitely feel that the people in it are alive and living people. Well, I can only say so much because I am not well-educated. My evaluation is that it is very good!