Transformation: Saving the Girl Saki Who Is About to Fall

Whenever I look back at the novels I have written, I can't help but sigh, "It's so damn well written!" Haha [laughing evilly] This is my first time writing a novel online, so how should I put it, I haven't mastered many aspects very well, the writing style is very unfamiliar, the plot is also very average, and sometimes the words I write and what I want to express are not clear. So, let's encourage you and spray lightly.

A truly good work. Children can learn and understand self-esteem and self-love from this fan's original work and this book (once the bottom line is compromised, it will continue to be exceeded), and colleagues will also understand the love of their parents. Generally speaking, this book is a story of continuous redemption between multiple parties, which warms people's hearts in the winter. In contrast, the original novel refreezes the warmed hearts. (Trying to attract the author's attention with negative reviews) The author would like to ask if he plans to write the next novel? Looking forward to it (if the author has an answer, it will be changed to five stars) If you don't reply, I'll forget it [crying]

Among the fanfics I have read, they are considered to be some of the best. They are not brainless, and the protagonist's IQ is online throughout. It still looks pretty good [eat melon], cheers for the author [blowing kisses]

Although it is an adaptation of a book, it is unexpectedly touching. Through the protagonist's unreasonable power, he gradually broke the shackles dragging Yoshida, and achieved the final two-way redemption. It also triggered my thinking about friendship, family, courage, my own independent personality and other aspects. I can even truly feel the sincere emotions between ignorant boys and girls. What more can I ask for, maybe a happy end like a past life? But that doesn't matter anymore, the author is a great guy.

I just read Chapter 17 and just checked out the manga. The comic "Emergence" gives me the feeling that it is a success. The author has successfully created the character of Yoshida Saki, just like the heavy words marked on the beak. I thought it was a heavy word on the screen, but I did not expect it to be a heavy word mentally. Finally, I hope the author can write better and better [Like]

Not bad, not as brainless as other fan fictions. I don't like harems, but redemption stories suit my taste, and the emotional lines are also very rich! It's a very good book [like][like]

It feels really good. Most of the people I saw saving Saki Yoshida in Shuke and Tomato just took her into the harem and then just treated her as a silver pawn.

It's really great. Please come and support this author. I think he writes well. I hope he can write more [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] I think this book is at least 8.4. The writing is really good. The only thing I wonder about is how the protagonist will write after successfully changing Yoshisakida's character. I haven't read the original manga, only part of it, but there is only one chapter left in the book out of 65 chapters. The plot of rescuing Yoshida Saki involves getting rid of her scumbag father, and Yoshida Saki's cowardly character has changed a lot, but it's only over sixty chapters now. How to rewrite it after Yoshida Saki's character is successfully changed by the protagonist (and after the rescue is almost completed)? Should I write about daily life instead? Or add other anime and manga to some of the previous chapters? If I can continue writing reasonably and there are enough chapters, I personally think I would give this book at least 8.6 Points.

Good looking! My thoughts are very delicate, I just want to know that Miss Shiraki will not disappear suddenly!

The pace of the plot feels a bit fast, and it feels like it would be better to intersperse more daily life. I feel that the current plot just adds a rescue scene of the protagonist directly to the original work (it may also be because I have not read the original work), which makes people feel repetitive and visual. However, the plot design and character description are very good, and it is worth watching.

A very good novel. Although I haven't read the original work, I don't think there is any need to read the original work. [Pause face] In short, I like this novel. It's just a bit short, but it's reasonable and there's nothing wrong with it.

Give it a five-star rating. Personally, I would not engage in this type of transformation, as I am afraid that my moral integrity will collapse. From a perspective that I haven't read the original version, the author's writing is quite good and there are no poisonous points (it may have been changed based on the comments, or maybe I think the poisonous points are different from everyone else's) As for the single heroine Yoshida Saki, I think it is very suitable for this book. The ones I have read before are all harems. I'm not disdainful of harems, but certain themes make me feel that harems are inappropriate. Pure redemption contaminates the harem, which makes me feel something. At present, I am very satisfied with Yoshida's growth. I feel very refreshed and gratified, just like wearing new underwear to welcome the morning of the New Year. I hope the author will continue to work hard. It is not easy to write a book seriously. [Eat melon]

The dream book is really good. The bad guys get the punishment they deserve, and the good guys get the happiness they deserve. People who have read the original comic should be more impressed. The heroine has been redeemed and has not fallen into the abyss. (If you haven't read the comic, I suggest you don't go out to read it, so as not to ruin your good mood and dirty your eyes)

It's very interesting. Most of them were read from the original version. After reading it, I was really confused. Although Josuke has been there, my intuitive feeling is still not as realistic as this novel. The arrogant male protagonist, the shy and cute Saki-chan, and the story of redemption are always so attractive. The two of them have a sweet daily life. I won't object if the two of them are jealous, come on!

Hmm~ It's too little, not enough to read [thinking], what I've read so far is very good, come on, author [like]

Although it is a pure novel, the plot background is a bit crude, but the characters are clearly portrayed and the changes in personality are progressive. The final perfect ending, to be honest, completes a spiritual redemption for me, and is a relief from the original ending. This may be the greatest charm of fan fiction!

This is the first time I've seen a fanfic, but when you think about it, this is a transformation, so it's worth reading. As the author said, this is the inevitability caused by various factors. Saki is worthy of regret, so I want to change it. In fact, there are still thousands of Saki, which is much better than in Neon. I watched Transformation again and it was really uncomfortable. I came to the author to find some sweets~

Novels with this theme are really rare. They are really well written and redeem the original evil heroine. Unfortunately, the number of words is too few and it ends so quickly. I still hope to have a lot of sweet daily life. I am so upset that I can only do it myself [face covering] Wow, it would be nice if I could write more. The ending was too hasty and fast, not sweet enough. I felt a bit emo after reading it. I need to read some sweet articles to regain my blood. Looking forward to the author's next novel.

I have not read the original work, but the figure of the heroine is very familiar and seems to have been seen somewhere. It tells the story of a girl in the original work who has character flaws and the malice of people around her, which leads her to the abyss. Takano Hideki is like the dawn sun shining into Yoshida Saki's heart, educating her on the right path and guiding her out of the abyss. Just like the stars in the sky, they will accompany Yoshida Saki forward now and in the future. The setting sun shines on the fountain in the park, and the water splashes like a golden comet. An elderly couple sits on a bench. The elderly wife leans on her husband's shoulder and talks about the past. Wife: I am very happy to be able to spend the first half of my life with you, Hideki, and I will continue to be happy for the rest of my life! (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎) Husband: I am very happy that Onsaki-chan can accompany you. Wife: I will always love Hideki forever and ever. Husband: Me too. The petals of the cherry blossoms were falling in the wind, and the sunset was shining warmly on the couple's bodies, making them look very happy. Needless to say, pure love will last forever.

This book satisfies the regrets of the two works I read, one is Transformation, and the other is Your Name. Do you know the feeling in the last few chapters when I combined Sanye and Long with the male and female protagonists? [Crying] [Crying] At that time, it was no big deal to open the music app and play a song. It immediately filled the atmosphere [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Can there be more daily extras? I can do anything [crying][crying][crying]

This is an afternoon that is not surprising. I read the entire book in one go. In the past, when I read the book, whenever I reached the end, I would feel that it was too little, not enough, and that there was something unfinished. But this time it was different. From the beginning of Yoshida Saki's cowardice, anyone could bully her, to the end, when she resisted the oppression of her birth father. This was a redemption and a transformation. When I first read this book, I thought it was an old-fashioned plot, where the male protagonist travels through time, saves the female protagonist, and finally brings the beauty home. After reading this book, I found that this is a two-way redemption story. The plot mentioned the male protagonist's previous reincarnation process many times. Those who watched with cold eyes, until the end I understood that Takano had also been escaping from the reality of the main world.

The dead book suddenly attacked me, but the author has solid basic skills and it is still worth reading.

This is a truly good book! It satisfies all my fantasies about redemption. The plot is exquisite, the IQ is online, the plot is smooth, and the emotions are rich. Moreover, while the male protagonist is redeeming the female protagonist, the female protagonist is also slowly changing the male protagonist. It is a two-way rush and two-way redemption. This book is like a snow mountain. The plots in the early and middle stages are like snowflakes. When the male protagonist is about to leave after completing the task and the female protagonist expresses her love for him, it is the climax of the whole book. And the last few words are simply amazing, raising love to a new level. The worldview of this book is also very interesting Everyone, this is a great book!

Full marks. I haven't read Transformation before, but I understood it after reading the reviews from book friends. I didn't intend to read it when I first read the opening comments, but by some strange coincidence, I clicked back and saw this in one go. It is indeed redemption, a divine book, but I beg the author to have a good ending [please update]

A good work that makes up for the regrets of the terrible comic, especially the portrayal of Saki's growth is very profound. From cowardice to bravery, from blind obedience to independence, Saki follows Takano Hideki and finally leads to happiness. Although the teacher's departure in the ending is regrettable, it does not affect the visual experience of the work. I give it a five-star rating.

I'm a fan of a niche book. I haven't read the original work. Before I clicked on it, I thought it was a tokusatsu fan. ๑ᵒᯅᵒ๑, It's very interesting. This book is really refreshing for me in the Hongguoguo software. The characters and details are well drawn, and the atmosphere interspersed with descriptions of scenery is also in place (how does it feel like reading comprehension...) (Shame) There is no unfinished ending at the end, and the ending is perfect (Sister Shiraki is so kind ꒰ᐢ⸝⸝⸝⸝ᐢ꒱, I can't let it go~) However, stories with regrets are the best, so you can get the most real feelings and experiences. Generally speaking, this book is suitable for book lovers who are devastated by the current Shiwen, Shuangwen, harem, and sadistic articles. The plot of the story is very compact, but it does not pile everything together. The writing style is very comfortable, and the overall theme does not deviate. Everything that needs to be written is written. I really, really like this book, so I leave it to you to write my first book review. Other than that, there's really nothing else to say. Here, I would like to express my highest respect for all authors who love creation and value their works.

This book is about true redemption, the kind of redemption that allows people to become the people they are named after. No matter how the protagonist ends up, this book will be one of the pinnacles of redemption. Of course, it would be best if the protagonist and Saki-chan can form a lovely family ᕦ ᶘ ᵒ ㉨ ᵒ ᶅ ᕤ

A pair of young men and women redeemed each other, which gave me goosebumps all over my body. Although the beauty is unreal, who doesn't have the other half in their dreams? He/she may not be beautiful or perfect, but just a little bit is enough. I love him/her and that's enough. Often the simplest words contain the purest dreams of the greenest boys and girls.

It's nice to look at [love] [love], but it's hard to calm down in my heart [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Reading requirements are not high as to whether you have watched "Transformation" [full] [full]. The writing is very good, and the plot design is also great [sending my heart] [sending my heart]. When will the author release a new book?

It's a very interesting redemption fanfic. Although the logic is illogical in some places, the author has good control over the progression of the plot. Each plot teaches "Saki" a lot of truth. This article not only redeemed "Saki", but also taught us self-respect and self-love, sharp kindness, thinking, rejection and many other things. I also read the original work, and it was really uncomfortable to read it. Both the "he" line and the normal ending were very well written. It seems that regrets are normal in youth. The important thing is that people have to move forward (my own feelings about the normal ending). In the end, I really like this fanfic, and I am very grateful to the author for writing this article [heartfelt]. This article is really gentle.