On the Sixth Day of the Lunar Month, Come Back to the World

It's really good, but one picture a day is a bit slow. You can save up to watch it once a week.

Wonderful and wonderful! I couldn't put it down the first part of "The Old Man". It is definitely the pinnacle of Qianshu books. I even had to read it in an absolutely quiet environment, but it's a pity that it doesn't have an ending. This work is already fascinating from the beginning. I really like it. Is the author Xiaohu? What I hope is that the update can be faster and start well.

It's really well written. The author is Xiaohuba. Five-star praise.

It is more logical than before, and the chapters are shorter and scattered. Due to the meticulous and exquisite characterization of the characters in the previous work, there is no way to make this feature not outstanding. Haonai still has a certain degree of readability.

It's well written, I've really put my effort into reviewing the first half, but the text can't describe the depth of the characters' personalities. It feels like they are all in a hurry, and they are more than ruthless!

Second, to be honest, it is not as exciting as the old one at the beginning, and the purchase is compact. What others have written is really without a single word. Compared with it, the gap is still quite big. Please work hard. I just read the old version and want to see the result.

This novel won me over with its unique narrative style and profound themes. The author successfully brings readers into a fascinating world through delicate brushwork and rich emotional depictions. The characters are vividly created and the plot has ups and downs, making people immersed in it and unable to extricate themselves. This is a masterpiece worth reading again and again.

It looks good, but when will Su Mei come on stage?

I haven't finished reading Chapter 234 yet, but I saw that the author often asked for book reviews, so I came to support it. It must be a five-star book. The main plot of this book is prominent, which is to recover cultural relics, but there are almost no subplots, or they are quite scattered and intermittent. Compared with the first "Lao Qian", the sub-plot of "Lao Qian" can be said to be the creation of a team, so almost every one of her characters has a story clue, such as Su Mei and Brother Garlic. Their appearance is very casual but the plot is not random. Especially for characters like Su Mei and Qi Lan who are outside the team, they will not stop abruptly but will provide extended ideas throughout. It can be said that Chu Liu tells a story of rivers and lakes in the hidden line of recruitment. Maybe it's because the chapter I'm currently in is still in the early stages of the book, and I don't clearly feel a clear sub-line. Or maybe it's because the changes in the team are your sub-line, but everyone's story line is too short. Secondly, there are too many irrelevant plots and the major plots advance too quickly. At present, I don't see any continuity. For example, in Chapter 95, the suitcase was robbed on the train, and in Chapter 162, money was extorted at the train station. There are some abrupt feelings created for the sake of word count, and they have no connection with the main plot. I read that some book friends commented that you used too much pen and ink when writing "Sister Zhang Missing the Young Master". Personally, I feel that you did it for the sake of expressing emotions, so you have to talk about your language. Your language has the flavor of a middle school student, and you describe the environment more and more delicately than in "The Old Man", but this is something we fast-paced readers will not look at carefully. We pay more attention to the excitement and coherence of the plot. The flower picker may not understand Qian Shu. I believe he has thought about it hundreds of times and read hundreds of Internet searches on how to write Qian Shu. Maybe the excitement of Qian Shu, which makes readers feel like they are facing the gambling game with them on the sixth day of the sixth lunar month, has been written out. Here, the flower picker may also be unable to write as exciting as he wants, but the cleverness of the flower picker is to put the answer that is about to be revealed in the next chapter, giving a certain delay, and it can still better arouse emotions. I haven't seen the latest chapter yet, and it's hard to give advice to the flower picker (I always think of your name as Ning Caichen), but a new woman can be added as someone outside the team. This woman may be Chen Yonghong's, or He Xiaoshi is back, and Fang Chukai alone always feels that she is missing. Also, although the first "Lao Qian" has always emphasized the mole, you found out that the mole is He Xiaoshi, but I feel that the motive of the mole was not written, or maybe I didn't see it. In the process of reading this book, I also saw some negative reviews and even some dissuasion to withdraw it. Although it is indeed not as exciting as "The Old Man", who can understand the hardships Gao E went through after writing 40 chapters of "A Dream of Red Mansions"! (Seeing this, you may say that you are also denying others. No, I am not denying at all. I am really just an objective commentator.) This flower picker is also a writer with dreams and full of courage. I believe that everyone also has good words and advice. Please encourage me and support me. The more the merrier!

The novel is super good. Is there an ending to the first part? Thanks

Hope there is an ending. Ma Xiaohu didn't know where he had gone.

Please support us. After all, this is the first novel about cheating that many people get into, and the original work is indeed well written, so it's a first impression.

The content is exciting, with highs and lows, and detailed descriptions.

The author is rest assured that many people will read your book, so feel free to update the author!

You won't conflict with Xia Tian anymore, brother!

Still the same sentence, Ten gambles and ten cheats, if you don't gamble, you will win. Please remind me of this sentence

I feel that the sixth day of this issue is a little less magical, and the girl Xiaoduo is not that magical either. In short, it is not as exciting as the previous episode, but with the first step as a foil, I still want to read it.

Everyone thinks it's pretty good, but I have a different opinion. It would be better if it had more depth. Of course, it should be praised, so please support the author. Let me tell you my opinion: From the perspective of the plot, it is indeed full of ups and downs, traveling back and forth between cities, but when it comes to solving specific problems, I always feel that there is a lack of depth and details. Most of the content of each story is used to describe user behavior, which means that the adjectives are rich and the corresponding repetitions are also very high. As for the specific thinking logic and game-making, it is rare to see it. Maybe it's okay to write other books, and it's good to write this book normally. However, after watching The Coward, I found that it really requires a huge amount of thinking logic and game-making thinking to closely connect the thoughts of each character. Like now, I feel that the plot is suddenly over. But I always feel that the plot is still a bit awkward. I don't know if anyone feels this way. There must be a slow and logical process of change from beginning to end, and I think it will be more attractive. That's all. Thank you to the author. It took a lot of effort to write so many chapters, but it's still great. Please give it a thumbs up and keep going!

The connection is good! Is it because the previous novel was unfinished and I decided to write a sequel instead?

The plot is ups and downs and fascinating, the characters are described in detail, and the writing is simple and sincere. It is a good novel worth reading.

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Hurry up and change the mode of listening to novels to real people talking like the old con man.

Not bad, not much different from the previous rhythm. The writing is quite good. But can I use a real person's voice when listening to the book?

The structure is clear and the content is substantial. I love listening to it. The structure is clear and fulfilling. I like listening to it very much. Please update it soon.

Worth a look, very interesting to watch

After watching the previous one, I really enjoyed the gripping part, but at the end I felt it shouldn't have ended like that. I didn't expect that the second part will be picked up again. It's still very exciting. I urge you to update it! ! !

The system only recommended it today, and the author already had a sequel in November last year.

Like 👍 I like this book very much. I followed it for a long time last year. Finally updated

The article is well written and worth reading. I wonder where all the big names in the past have gone? I don't know if Qi Lan will appear later, but it's a pity to remove Qi Lan. Can we find another way to invite Qi Lan to join in the fun?

It's so good, I couldn't stop listening to this novel from the beginning to the end. Please follow me