The Outcast: Raising a Golden Core Inside a Gu Child

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! One more thing is to update as soon as possible!!!

I have seen the latest 120 episodes, and the overall feeling is good. I hope that the male protagonist will continue to write in this way and not overwhelm his combat power (otherwise, the original Gu will be a dishonor, and the Gu master will be impure). And don't look at some of the reviews. People who read a cool novel just hope that the protagonist will be invincible from the beginning to the end. It seems mindless and boring. You can write more about the game between the company and local aliens and then the male protagonist participates in it. It can be expanded and written, otherwise the plot will advance too fast (it can be a brainless fun here, after all, the male protagonist can control the original Gu, and 1v1 against characters below Jiuluo is basically crushing). Then the author should work faster

This book is very suitable for my taste. The 6.5 Is low. Are you afraid that it will be banned if it scores too high? The protagonist does not have the heart of a virgin, does not have a harem, and does not lick the original characters. From the beginning to the end, he followed his own path, without those random sign-ins, or the special pursuit of the Eight Wonders. Unlike other books, you will be given a skill once, but you won't even need to use it once.

It's very beautiful, I don't know why the rating is so low. The group portraits are also well described. The protagonist has such an OP skill as Primordial Gu, but it doesn't make people feel boring. I can always feel that the protagonist has improved, not standing still, or relying on the skills he had from the beginning to kill randomly.

Objective and true evaluation. A very good novel, but the rating is very low. I usually read some on various novel platforms. The writing style of this book is relatively average, but it is not bad. There are no poison spots or big problems. Tomato's novels all prefer cool novels. This kind of food is a bit bland and will have a lower Tomato rating.

It's pretty good, why is the score so low? There is a lot of original content, but it fits the original work well without completely following the original work, so it doesn't look boring. It's pretty good, I've seen half of it.

The writing is indeed good, but the reason for the low score is probably that many people cannot accept that it is too late to enter the main plot. It was not until more than 100 chapters that the main plot of Zhang Chulan was entered.

The writing is quite good, but the pace is a bit slow, and there are still more than a hundred chapters left before entering the main plot. I think if you really want to set the stage or like to write, this is enough. If you write more, it will be a bit boring. The advantage of writing fan fiction is that it has a fixed plot as a template, and the author can create based on this premise. This will be very easy, and the general route is planned for you, so most new authors will choose to start by writing fan fiction. So I feel like this is quite a disadvantage. The author is a newbie, and it's a good thing to have ideas, but writing like this is a bit selective of the audience, and it tests your patience. However, I think the setting is good, and the subject of Gu is quite attractive. In addition, the connection between the protagonist and the Lu family is a good point. I can interact with the Lu family more later, but it can be written in such a way that "point out the truth without telling the truth", which is very interesting. Although it only has a score of 5.9 Now, it will definitely increase in the future. This book will definitely be far more than this score. Anyway, let's get into the main plot quickly. I also want to see the interaction between the protagonist and people like Zhang Chulan, Feng Baobao, and Wang Ye.

Although some parts of the setting are unreasonable, the author listened to the advice and the previous writing can also have a certain writing skills. At least it doesn't look childish. I wrote it from Anbao. I didn't see the new food. It was suddenly indifferent. It felt rather abrupt and a bit stiff. There was no foreshadowing in the front, but overall it was okay.

I really like this type of writing. It doesn't blindly follow the original plot. It is original and can be perfectly integrated into the plot. It does not lick the protagonist or babysit. It is strong and beautiful. I hope there will be no heroine. I have caught up with the latest and I have started to read. Is there any similar writing?