My Arrival Changes the World of Pirates

Not bad, keep up the good work

Awesome! It's okay to write, but women can just push it away! I hope all the famous beauties in the show will be accepted Not bad! I hate the theory of blood in One Piece the most. Wang Luffy, who has a background as a bastard king, and Kobe, the deserter king, can actually become heroes. All three views are shattered. As long as they are better with Wang Luffy, they can be forcibly cleared! I hope the protagonist can snatch the hotel owner's wife and the red-haired daughter as a woman and wait for Luffy to go out to sea to hang out in front of him. It disgusts the red-haired and Luffy, gets Usopp's mother and childhood sweetheart, disgusts Usopp and his dad, gets Sanji's sister and disgusts Sanji, and gets those female marines from Peach Rabbit to disgust Garp and the others! Zui wants to see them disgusting, but you can't beat them and make them mad! It would be better if I, Arrita, could rape Kobe and let Kobe know that it was you [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

I can see there's no big problem

It's also the case that Kaido's strength was a bit stretched even though the Seraph came out after Kaido's betrayal. Apart from the unfathomable strength of the red-haired group that didn't take action among the pirate forces, Luffy and Buggy's group who came later to make up for it were all a bit weaker.

I just saw a wonderful place, is it gone?

It's really great, the characters are vivid, keep up the good work

It's good, but not enough. I've finished watching it [almost crying]

The writing is getting more and more exciting! I hope the author's updates will get better and better!

The writing is very good, I suggest that after the pirates finish writing, go back to the Hokage and eat the fruit of the sacred tree or something. . . .

I hope the samsara eye will awaken soon

Very good and wonderful 🤩

Looks really cool

In short, it's just one word: cool [laughing evilly]

After reading the previous point, it was really cool to skip the war on top.

And you, my friend, you are the real hero

Well, as long as you kill Luffy, it's a good story.

Don't you need to lower the invincible Wooden Release Buddha?

Overall, there are still a lot of regrets

It's quite good to watch it in one go.

It's rare that it doesn't overwhelm combat power. It can kill many people one by one. It's very nice.

Not bad~ Looking forward to the excitement at the top! ! !

6.7 Is too low, at least it should be between 7 and 8! I'll give you 8 points. I originally gave it four stars, but now I only give it 1 star. ........... Counting the word count, it was reduced to less than 1,800 words. It's also 2,000 words, but I feel that yours is less than others, so I copied it and went to WPS to see the word count. After subtracting it, there were only 1,800 words.

Don't even say anything, just keep writing.

It's really pretty, come on

I like this book very much

Not bad, not bad, well written

Very good invincible article! !

Looks pretty good

Cow,, cow sleeps during class

Well written!