[Wuxia] + [Decisive and Ruthless] + [Advice-Listening System] + [Chat Group]
Song Shuming is pulled into a world of combined martial arts and becomes Wang Chonglou of Wudang's junior fellow disciple. But he is terminally ill and has little time left to live.
While waiting to die, he is suddenly pulled into a transmigrators' Chat Group and obtains an Advice-Listening System. As long as he follows someone's advice, he can receive the corresponding reward.
He tries asking the group, “I'm already an adult. Can I still learn martial arts?”
The enthusiastic group members offer all kinds of advice:
“Martial arts are easy. Throw a thousand punches every day, and your fist technique will become invincible!”
“Why not pick a weapon? If you can use chopsticks, you can use a weapon!”
“To learn martial arts, train your mind first. Why not read the Daoist Canon from cover to cover? You might learn the cultivation method best suited to you!”
Faced with advice ranging from empty boasts to genuinely helpful suggestions, Song Shuming begins his journey from college student to Dao Ancestor:
[You throw a thousand punches every day and comprehend the Supreme Fist Art!]
[You diligently practice with chopsticks, and one skill opens the way to all others. You comprehend supreme mastery of both sword and blade!]
[You read the Three Character Classic and comprehend the Confucian Art of Preserving Benevolence! You rise straight to the First Rank!]
Years later, Song Shuming ascends as the Dao Ancestor and leads the combined martial arts world into a world of immortal cultivation. His group members are stunned:
“We were only trying to tease the kid back then. Who knew he'd do everything people told him to?”
Facing his disciples and descendants throughout the boundless worlds, Song Shuming says with heartfelt conviction:
“Listen to good advice, and you'll always have enough to eat.”
Nothing has changed. It has always been following other people's plots. It just added a pig's foot and a system. If the writing is to follow other people's things and add a pig's foot and heel system, then there is no point in reading. It requires some new creativity.
It's obviously a persuasion system, and you can increase your strength by listening to persuasion. As a result, I pressed hard and only used the system after being beaten. The plot is awkward
I can't stand it anymore when I see dozens of land gods in the underground river.
Everyone has already said that this is mixed martial arts. Wudang Mountain here combines all the strong men in other worlds, including Zhang Sanfeng. The plot in the snow where Wang Chonglou transfers his skills to Xu Fengnian is very unreasonable. It's not necessary at all
Yes, after the protagonist recovers, the first goal (rescuing the senior brother) is completed!
The pace is too slow, there is no passionate plot that captivates you, and the mediocre numbers make it less interesting the more you watch it.
Chapter 16, the combat power collapsed
I am rambling and cannot explain anything clearly. I don't know what I am writing or what I mean. 😳
I finished reading it, but I didn't understand it. The realms are vague, the points are useless, there are no other rewards except the first reward, and the plot is also very messy. Stop it. Stop writing.
It's really boring. This is the way I used to write novels.