——"It's time for Sao Nian to travel to another world!"
——"No, isn't this the forest park not far from my home? And that tortoise statue has just been changed into a blue one!"
——"Holy shit! Charmander is invincible at the beginning!"
——"No limit to means?! Hehe!"
——"Seeing how pitiful you are, let me give you something! This is it! Super Invincible Air Gift Pack!"
——"It's better not to have this stupid system!"
——"Fuck! You want to exhaust me to death with so many tasks!"
——"No, are you sure this is a secret realm?"
——"Holy shit! You fucking call this a Vulcan Moth!"
——Luo Yuan: "No! Who is the protagonist?"
——Yi Xing: "No, I am not the protagonist, why do I also have the protagonist's destiny? And I only have the protagonist's destiny, but no protagonist's treatment!"
——Mo Heng: "Okay, stop talking, I am the real protagonist!"
Reader comments
I advise the author to give me 2,000 words for every Friday in the future, otherwise I will let you experience what it means to be haunted by nightmares! [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]
The writing is okay. It looks quite funny. I feel like there is no system at all.
The author can't stand it anymore, and you really can't use your brain when reading novels. If you use it, your head will hurt! It feels like one chapter does not follow the next, and each transition is summarized in one sentence. The author also likes to keep the number of words small, and one chapter is at least two to three hundred words long.
It is full of loopholes, and I am trying my best to correct it, but it is obvious that there are too many typos and cannot be fixed, and there is one particularly important thing that I forgot at the time! The race value of Cocodora evolving into Boss Cordora is only 530. She is not a quasi-god. I would also like to thank the readers for reminding me, otherwise I would still be in the dark...
Then I also admitted that I am really bad at writing books! But I still need everyone's forgiveness, after all, I've just started~
Thank you all! ! ! I will work harder (show off)! ! !
I advise the author to give me 2,000 words for every Friday in the future, otherwise I will let you experience what it means to be haunted by nightmares! [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]
The writing is okay. It looks quite funny. I feel like there is no system at all. The author can't stand it anymore, and you really can't use your brain when reading novels. If you use it, your head will hurt! It feels like one chapter does not follow the next, and each transition is summarized in one sentence. The author also likes to keep the number of words small, and one chapter is at least two to three hundred words long.
It is full of loopholes, and I am trying my best to correct it, but it is obvious that there are too many typos and cannot be fixed, and there is one particularly important thing that I forgot at the time! The race value of Cocodora evolving into Boss Cordora is only 530. She is not a quasi-god. I would also like to thank the readers for reminding me, otherwise I would still be in the dark... Then I also admitted that I am really bad at writing books! But I still need everyone's forgiveness, after all, I've just started~ Thank you all! ! ! I will work harder (show off)! ! !