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It's baffling, let alone the fact that the protagonist is an extreme diode, it doesn't matter if all the Japanese are dead anyway, what he wants to do now is just sleep with women😰. And even though you know the plot, it's as if you don't know the plot. You put aside this quantum superposition state, you know that Gojo Satoru was cut in half, and you also know the opening plot and the juvenile hall plot, but you don't even know the strength level of Gojo Satoru, and you still guess that it is level 1, saying that it is normal to lose to the super-level Su Nuo, I don't understand.

To be honest, after reading Chapter 26, this book is not very good. The main character has a populist outlook and is not a good one. It's just that some of the character settings are a bit unreasonable, much worse than those written by other fans. On the contrary, the author's Conan fanfic is a masterpiece in the same series, and Aoki's character creation is good. I suggest that the protagonist's character should be based on Aoki's aspect. (If it doesn't work, just write the name Ke honestly)

Tell me your opinion The character's personality is slightly off, the plot has not been significantly changed, there is a lack of excitement, and the protagonist's presence is low and dispensable. The ability setting is slightly weak. There is no foreshadowing of Jackie Chan and the fate of the Destiny Child, which cannot highlight the protagonist very well. He has Thresh's soul lamp, but he picks up sesame seeds and throws away watermelons. Instead of looking for his strengths, he learns some inferior spells. To be honest in the battle, is the real person's level comparable to Thresh? The early foreshadowing of the characters is weak. The topic of "sister" is quoted to connect the main plot, but the main text does not describe too much, which does not resonate with readers. Instead, it is a bit superfluous. It is recommended to use two to three chapters to write more stories between the protagonist and "sister" to pave the way for the protagonist to intervene in the main plot later. The superfluous supporting characters, Gong Shi (forgot), are just briefly summarized in the article (from what I read). The character creation is most likely to find a way out for the protagonist's ability, but in fact, the role of Thresh is deeply rooted in people's hearts, even if the protagonist grows out of thin air as his strength increases, it is understandable. Like the above, there is too little foreshadowing and a weak sense of character creation. As the saying goes, the appearance is inexplicable and the behavior is also inexplicable. But the whole story is still good, some characters are also very faithful to the original work, and the protagonist's integration degree (the attitude and views of the original characters towards the outsider, the protagonist) is relatively high.

I haven't read many books. Many people say extreme. Most people will consider helping others if it does not endanger their own interests and their own safety. There are also a small number of good people who will take action even if it harms their own interests. Bad people don't care about their own safety. I think it is normal. I think people who are said to be extreme are often able to do such things. They will not express it under normal circumstances, but when they are in danger of life or death, they should express it. There are good people in the world, but there are not many bad people. They can't do it in reality, but they ask the characters in the book to do it as if they did it themselves.

I feel that the writing has a strong sense of fragmentation. It seems that something has been changed but nothing has changed. I feel that since writing a time travel novel must change a lot of things to be interesting, following the original work consumes not only the patience of the readers but also the author.

You can either write invincible articles, or you are not suitable for writing long articles.

The protagonist's brain is like a rag wrapped in a rag, and the memory of the original plot is like a schizophrenia. He remembers it and then not.

I like what the author writes very much, it is really strong and articulate! [Full]