Sand Sculpture Master, He Raised the Protagonist Crookedly

I have read the best master-disciple stories (some people write master-disciple stories that are very contradictory and have many loopholes), this one does not, this one is very suitable for my taste, it is the first time I see this type of master like it so much 😍, and the apprentice's writing is very interesting, it has a The process of psychological changes (doesn't give me the feeling that there is something wrong with his brain), from loving to learning, the master has a big heart but does not give me the feeling that his brain is not good, and the apprentice also makes people feel distressed😣, they have a sense of CP, I can get along with him. (I don't know how to write some articles, and I can't write them anyway.) If you don't know how to exaggerate, you might as well read them. They are really beautiful, believe me. The author rolled it up greatly The author liked it. I'm so happy. It's a pity that I made a typo. I want to die. I want to find a hole to crawl in. It's so beautiful. I can't help it. My hands are shaking. Ah~ I want to crawl in the dark.

The content is very exciting, and the characters are very popular with me. Don't bother me and stay up late to read it. Come on, please add this book to your harem and promote me to a noble concubine! [Laughing][laughing]

Nice! It's rare to come across a novel that I like, I hope it won't be interrupted or stopped 💞💞

The author writes so well! ! So awesome! ! I really like the two-way love between Xiao Huaijin and Chu Hanzhou! ! Love is about responding! ! Each character is portrayed very completely and emotionally! ! Looking forward to a big update from the author! ! Come on, come on, come on! [Love][love][love][love][blowing kiss]

So pretty! Xiaojin and Hanzhou are so sweet and affectionate. Although there are some misunderstandings between them, they are not abusive. Xiaojin is so funny and angry [blowing kisses] I love it. Fang Xingyi's arrogant and petite young master's character really pokes fun at me, Shen Moze is restrained and gentle, Gu Junqian is cold and talkative but soft-hearted, An Nian is so funny, and the nine-tailed fox (forgot his name) is so funny... What surprised me the most - there were lesbians! ! ! ! ! Ling Ruan and Song Nuanyu had a good fight, and there was no misunderstanding at all. Their love was still strong. Ling Zhiyu has a proper eldest sister character, she is clever and worried about the love of adults. I really like it

I feel that there are still some problems in the handling of the story line. Secondly, the timeline transition is too rigid and the connection is not smooth. The author did not clearly explain the time changes of the male protagonist's growth. It felt like the male protagonist was still in his early teens one second and has grown up inexplicably within two chapters. Some plots are a bit confusing, and the typos and omissions may be a bit serious, but overall the emotions and the readability of the story are quite high! It's something you can use to kill time in your spare time! Overall, the love story between the master and his apprentice is explained clearly, and the characters are very distinct! (I am just basing my objective evaluation on you, you are right) But I still gave it four stars! Great support! Hope to see your other new works in the near future!

It's very good-looking, and it's my favorite type. I hope the author can give them a good ending, an ending that belongs to them, and write an extra chapter.

I have read a lot of Masters and Disciples, and I really like this type of book. I stayed up late to read this book, and I really recommend it [Shy]. The love between the two is described very well, especially the apprentice's love for the master. Although the two had a misunderstanding and wanted to imprison the master and tie him to his side, he still tolerated it and respected his opinions. Although he liked to watch the imprisonment, this kind of respect for each other is also very good. Especially when the two of them like each other, they don't show off at all. They confess their love directly without being sloppy at all. The process was indeed a bit difficult, and there was a bit of abuse at the end, but the ending was not abusive, everyone had a happy ending, and the young couple also lived a sweet life. It warms my heart to watch it. I have been through so much, so I must give it a good [blowing kiss]

There is almost no abuse in this article. Xiao Huaijin and Chu Hanzhou are very sweet, there are many Che Ches, and there are also deputy CPs (not many descriptions). My favorite is Ji Luo Bai, the nine-tailed fox in it. I really like him, but he only appears later. Anyway, I can only say that it is very beautiful. Although it is not as good as the NO.1 In my heart, it is still very good.

It looks good, and the author's writing style is also very good. I like it very much. I really like Xiao and Chu. It would be nice to write more about Xiao and Chu. I hope the author will update it soon. I recommend it! Recommend! Recommend! ! !

So sweet!!!! The little lovers are having a great time! You won't suffer any loss if you join the stock, and the writing is so delicate and great!! The two of them are sticky, I like it! I love reading it! It's a blast! Teacher! I licked the book you wrote first!!!

It looks good in the early stage, boring in the middle stage, and average in the later stage [exploration] The plot is like this. The author travels through the book and becomes a vicious master who abuses the male protagonist, and OOC saves the male protagonist who has turned into a black demon. Unexpectedly, the male protagonist was reborn. He was arrogant in the early stage and yandere in the later stage. He imprisoned and kidnapped a dragon in a dark room (although it was in a fantasy world). In the final ending, the author travels back in time, and the male protagonist and the boss go to find the small world of Heaven. When they arrive in the author's world, happyending [laughing] The plot is generally cliche, but there are some notable points. The writing is not naive, and the emotional lines are described step by step, which is very real. Moreover, after the master realized his feelings, he immediately confirmed the relationship. Except for the part where the author's identity was discovered, it was a little bit tongue-in-cheek, everything else was fine. They are also quick, accurate and ruthless in defeating the BOSS [laughing] Let's talk about its highlights: it's very funny, free of baggage, and has three sadistic little male leads (because they don't have any roles, they're just secretly in love). The master is very popular, but he is brave and resourceful (although he doesn't usually use it). The apprentice has no bright spots, he is a loyal dog with a dark heart and a yandere, but he always believes in the master and has an invincible love brain [blowing kiss] The logic is rigorous and the BOSS is difficult to guess. In the end, I was looking at it with an "Huh?" Expression. There is no big problem with the overall idea of ​​the book, and it can be read. If you like to read time travel and redemption stories, you can read them, recommended [Thinking] Finally, I wish Xiao Bao and Brother Chu a long life, a happy union for hundreds of years, a long-lasting friendship, and the birth of a precious son soon [Sending Hearts]

It is said that Master's literature is all the same, but this is the first time I have seen this kind of silly Master. I usually see a cold Master. I really didn't expect that this Master is so eloquent and can be so rebellious! Hahahahahahahahaha it's so funny, you can see that you are in a very good state of mind! Hahaha! I really like the secret realm where I become a little fox. I love this invisible master so much. There is no strong love rival to compete with the male protagonist for master hahaha. Summary! Just a very nice one! No loss in investing! Families support! [Blowing kiss]

This is the first novel with two male protagonists that I read on Tomato. I have read two other novels before and abandoned them before finishing them. I thought the same was true for this one. Unexpectedly, I was gradually attracted by the plot inside and finished reading it without even realizing it. The whole text is very light-hearted, and there are two small sadistic plots in the middle, which make the whole text feel ups and downs. Although I only read sweet articles, this little abuse is within my acceptable range. Moreover, the male protagonist is not shy about his feelings at all, he is happy in his crotch, which is amazing.

This book is so well written! The details are drawn very well, and the holes are completely filled in! But the ending is a little sloppy! However, overall it is still good, and the characters are well portrayed. I recommend everyone to watch it!

Highly recommended to everyone 👍It looks great! There are several pairs of CPs who are very addictive [shy] The whole text is not aggrieved, not sad, the plot has ups and downs, the content is exciting, there are no surprises, feel free to read [laughs]

This is the first cultivation book I have read, and it is super interesting. I really like reading this kind of novel that is systematic and just saves the male protagonist. The whole text can be said to be very sweet, and it does not feel sad at all. There are two misunderstandings in it, but they were solved immediately. Originally he was an aggressive wolf, but in front of Master he was just a chubby little wolfdog. Feel free to enter! ! !

The whole book tells a story that makes people feel drawn into it. The story happened to the master, the male protagonist, and he was reborn. The whole book has a sense of immersion, which is okay. Come on author, I hope to write more good books

Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, the author is hungry, please give me some food, please

The content is exciting, full of ups and downs, and it suits my taste! I really like this kind of plot that is not perfunctory, so keep up the good work!

It's quite beautiful. I like it very much.

The characters have distinct personalities and are vividly written. The important thing is that this article is a bit funny haha ​​and mainly focuses on the perspective of the reader. This article does not dig holes or fill in the IQ and EQ online (in fact, there are no holes, the main focus of the plot is to go all the way to the end). It is a simple love novel, worth reading during the break (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's very good-looking, and it's ridiculous. Master is a very nice person, he has a lot of fun, he's kind to the people around him, and the people around him will respond to his kindness and protect him. The love between the protagonist Gong and his master is really amazing [Adoration] and there are many sub-CPs. Everyone has a happy ending.

2024, May 16, the second brush is completed! The book is super nice, I don't understand why the rating is so low. The characters are well-defined and the plot is full of ups and downs. The most important thing is that although it is a bit sadistic, people who read the full text feel comfortable and happy. Whether the characters in the book are in the past life or the present life, the paper world or the parallel time and space, "lovers will eventually get married." Everyone is fully arranged, and each has its own mission and belonging, so they are all good! Super sweet!

I like it😍 This book is super good. In fact, I think Xiaojin and Hanzhou have two-way redemption. They both love each other very much, and then there are the other people in it. They are all a good group of people. The character of Young Master Fang is really interesting hahaha. Fortunately, Mianmian and Aqiao don't have a be. Anyway, it's good [shy][blowing kiss]

It's so exciting. Huai Jin and Han Zhou's lovers finally meet each other. Gu Junqian helps Han Zhou for the one he loves and silently protects Huai Jin. I like it so much. Every character in the book is very unique [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's pretty good to read, but the setting of this book always reminds me of another one. I've read too many stories about masters and apprentices who cultivate immortals. I can't look forward to the cliche plot after seeing it to the end (please don't complain if you don't like it due to personal issues), but it's so big that it's not easy and I need five stars!

Looks good! ! ! The master has a very humorous personality, he laughs so hard, hahahahaha, he is very funny, I like it very much. The younger brother is a bit yandere, but when he meets this ridiculous master, he is so obedient and obedient, which is great! ! ! There are more updates from the author, I love reading them! ! [Blowing kiss]

Super pretty! ! ! Xiao Huaijin: I have no shame, the apprentice and the money are mine~! In the process of getting along for a long time, Chu Hanzhou gradually fell in love with the master from the beginning of hating the master and wanting to kill him; and Xiao Huaijin also realized the apprentice's grievance and desire for love in the process. At the beginning, he only had "father-son affection" for the apprentice and wanted to complete the task and go home quickly, but these thoughts were gradually forgotten. The author's writing style is delicate, the story line is compact, and the rhythm is not draggy. It makes people feel very comfortable when reading the article! Highly recommended! ! ! Really nice! ! ! [Adoration]

It's really good-looking, and the author has a lot of imagination, but I really hope that the author can write a side story so that Xiao Gu can reunite with Xiao Xiao and the others. To be honest, I feel sorry for Xiao Gu [cry] [cry] [cry], and I hope he can be happy