Immortality: Grasp the Opportunities, Avenues and Fruits at the Beginning

Good luck to the author, and if the emotional line doesn't work, I won't write it. And if you have the chance, can you copy the ones written by the big guys? Or learn from them, and then adapt them. Once you are familiar with them, you can create your own. In short, even if you are writing a novel, you still have to learn to be successful.

I like this style of writing, which has a bit of ancient charm, but is also easy to understand. The setting of the training system is clear and clear. It is not a simple and crude way of saying that cultivating immortals is better than practicing martial arts, but it constructs a basic and reasonable setting framework. I like it very much, but it's too short.

First of all, this book is a slow book, and the golden finger is relatively new. Its main function is feedback, using old knowledge to feed back new knowledge, but the knowledge obtained through feedback and feedback cannot be fed back again. Matryoshka dolls are prohibited, and only the quantity of items will be fed back. The protagonist's experience in this book is not bad, but there is a section in the early stage when he is being chased. Some people will not like it and want to see it, while others will walk or jump. There is a section in the middle that is related to the relationship between two women in the mortal world. Some people think it is not good. Don't worry, there are only a few pictures. They will not appear later. They are directly separated from immortals and mortals. In the end, the protagonist kills the prince behind the scenes, obtains the cultivation skills, and then enters the world of immortal cultivation. The plot is roughly like this, the protagonist's The portrayal is average, and some people think that it should be completely behind the scenes, but I think it is not good to go behind the scenes in the early stage with this golden finger setting, because the inability to do nesting dolls means that the protagonist must constantly acquire new knowledge, which means that the protagonist must be real and act in the early stage. In summary, I am looking forward to this book and hope that the author will continue to work hard. This book is for readers who prefer pure behind-the-scenes or pure and refreshing writing.

Personally, I think it's okay. If the author keeps it tight and doesn't have any mindless scenes of ambiguous scenes with women, it will be perfect. This kind of novelty behind the scenes is quite attractive to readers. The first part is okay, but the second part changes people after entering the sect. The more you write, the more outrageous it becomes. If immortal cultivators still have luck, then why are they fighting for immortality? The upper limit is dead. If you don't break away from the upper limit, how can you cultivate immortality? What the author writes is that luck determines the upper limit. To put it bluntly, the author's rule is that five spiritual roots are not worthy of reaching the upper limit. You can lie flat after one level of Qi training. Anyway, your luck and immortality cannot compete with those with four spiritual roots or above. The low rating is justified. I gave it a five-star praise earlier. . . Haha, this book is not worthy

This subject matter is good, I still hope to continue reading it.

The prince offered a reward of only 500 taels for the real power, but the protagonist spent 1,500 taels and 50 pills, and used 2,000 taels worth of things to buy the woman's external power, which was far less valuable than the real power. The protagonist was more princely than the prince, hahaha, and even gave him a gift worth 200 taels, which made me laugh [laughter]

The protagonist is like a moving natural disaster. I like it so much. The opportunity arranged by the protagonist is just an opportunity at the beginning, but later it becomes a large trap. It's so exciting [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] After coming out of the sect, it was no longer interesting. I pretended to have cultivated the Nascent Soul, brought a younger brother, gave advice everywhere, and accepted a few younger brothers who were useless and had no personality characteristics... How can I put it, entering the sect was like changing the author, and the charm of the book itself was weakened by differentiation...

Yes, it's finally not a good start. I've read more than a hundred novels about cultivating immortals, and 99% of them are waste material counterattack novels. The protagonist of this book has good qualifications and is worth recommending.

What a good book. I can read it and hope it can continue like this. Although it is a bit new, it is okay. The subject matter is novel. I don't know if it is a new book from qd. [I learned it] Anyway, cheers for the author [Sending heartfelt wishes]

It's a mid-to-high-level work. If you don't like to watch the protagonist's development in the mortal world, you can first read the first few chapters to understand the use of the protagonist's golden finger, then jump directly to the spirit root test, and then jump to join the sect and be accepted as a disciple. This is the official start of the protagonist's path to immortality.

It's okay, I can only say it's better than Liu Shui. After more than 300 pictures, there is no need for it. And for the main protagonist, there is not much description of Golden Finger. I feel that what more people want to see is that the protagonist sets up opportunities for people who have nothing to do with the protagonist in the real sense to break through. And this kind of opportunity is not necessarily the traditional kind, just like the ancient tomb opportunity that the protagonist set up when he was innate. Generally speaking, watch the class

To be honest, it's really good. The character of the protagonist and the way he does things are all vigorous and resolute. There is basically no sloppiness, there are few poisonous points, the progress is well controlled, the plug-ins are quite good, and you will get something if you give it up. You need to change your mentality when reading this book. Although the protagonist throws away money at every turn, the protagonist can gain more than ten times or even more. The rhythm is quite good. When it's time to change the picture, he just changes it. It's very good.

It's very interesting. What attracts me more is the process of hiding treasures and finding treasures. I feel that the route can develop the ancient tomb reasoning style, which will be more interesting. It will feel better if I add some reasoning and analysis similar to Conan.

There is not much to be had, and the idea of ​​waiting for the right person is novel. The biggest loophole knowledge category has changed qualitatively For example, practice the exercises after the exchange, then put the exercises into opportunities and write down notes on the practice, or make medicine. Traveler Regulations 1. Live (life is not as good as death) 2. Live long and live well As far as this book is concerned, the first point is skipped, and the second point is also skipped. The second point is also unsatisfactory. The handyman was alive without being tortured or trapped. He understood from the beginning that the martial arts world with inner strength has the kind of kung fu that can be used to cultivate one's character and prolong life. It is easier to understand if you live well, with the spirit of food, clothing, housing and transportation. In a world with force, the stronger you are, the better you live. In the early stages of modern history, you have to rely on knowledge and insight. If you improve your material and spiritual well-being, you will live longer. Fellow Taoists, do you have anything else you would like to add?

It's very good to read. I feel that 8.0 Points for this book are too low. It needs at least 9.0 Points. The plot is reasonable and fascinating, the language also has an ancient charm, and Golden Finger is also very novel. It would be unreasonable for this book to be unpopular! [Top post][Ask for updates][Ask for attention]

When I saw the protagonist saving those two people, I knew that the author was screening readers, and I was the one to be screened [laughter]

Goldfinger is relatively novel, and the plot setting is not bad, but the conflicting level setting is not interesting (the main plot is not reflected too much, and the protagonist's pursuit of level arrangement is relatively simple). Although it is slow to develop, it still feels a little more exciting (small climax). At present, it is too bland. The subsequent plot is probably difficult to write. I look forward to the author's performance. I would like to encourage you with 9 points. [Thinking][shy][shy]

So far, I like it very much. It deserves 9 points from Tomato. It is suitable for people who like Gou Wen. It's a pity that it gradually becomes almost like a regular novel. It is no longer suitable for people who like to read Gouwen.

I hope I can settle down in Yunjian Sect! (Based on past experience, it is probably quite mysterious) You transitioned too quickly into each map segment! If you become a true dragon, you can also bring Yunjian Sect into the sea! Can grow together Write well and don't write dog-licking articles. You have a tendency to develop into a dog-licking king.

I finally understand why the score is so low. When I first read it, it was around 6:00, and now it is 7.5. This book is slow to gain popularity, and the cost of trial and error is low. Many people are impatient! Overall, it's pretty good. The writing is in an ancient style, and the author works hard to update it, three times a day! The only dissatisfaction is that there are too many typos. Occasionally one or two are innocuous, but if there are too many, the perception of the whole book will be worse (personal experience)

The start is a bit interesting. The plug-in is also good, it's the kind of complex version that gives you double the money back. Money and medicine can be stuck in bugs There is no bug in the technique Then the protagonist has to find techniques in various ways to bring opportunities... The progress is quite fast, in just over fifty chapters I have entered the cultivation of immortality from martial arts!

No matter whether other books are finished or not, I will still read them after reading them. This is the only book I have read. Although there is a golden finger, the golden finger requires the protagonist to work hard to make the best use of it. The author must take good care of his health. If you still have a breath, please keep up the good work.

I can only say that there is no such thing in Tomato. Anyway, I looked for it and it was other rebates, not this kind. The main reason is that after setting up the opportunity, it feels a bit cool to watch others fight. The author will update it soon. It's too little and not enough to read.

This book is okay. The slow writing in the first and middle stages was okay, but it fell apart later. I don't know if the author changed people or if it was because it deliberately conformed to the popular writing, which caused it to become a mess later on. But I still have to give the author some support, at least the writing style and fighting scenes are better than the average tomato essay.

There are really very few novels on this subject, and this is the best one. Please update it quickly [crazy]

It is written very carefully, very truthfully and realistically. One bowl of rice is a benefactor, ten bowls of rice is an enemy. This does not ask for anything in return. It is not a good thing to always give benefits to fellow disciples. It will breed white-eyed wolves.

There are no good books on Tomato, but this book is really good if you can listen to it. At least it keeps following the main line, unlike other books that stray from the topic. Although it has some shortcomings, it is not bad. Why are there so many nitpicks and negative reviews in the reviews?

I feel like this type of behind-the-scenes article could use more ink on Yuan Yuan who got the opportunity [laughs evilly]. Of course, it's still very good for me and it's very satisfying to me.

This book is a slow read. More than 120 chapters have been updated so far. The protagonist has reached the sixth level of Qi refining. But careful calculation shows that it only took the protagonist more than half a year from cultivation to the sixth level of Qi training. From the reader's perspective, it can be regarded as a farming article. Now it can be considered as a formal effort, and it has been admitted to the Jindan level sect. As for what happens next, it depends on the author's level.

It's very good, come on, author, this is a completely new feeling. It is a very good novel, and I read more than 2,000 pages in one go. Come on, author, this will definitely be a very popular novel.