My Parents Are Demonic Titans, So I Lie Low as a Miracle Doctor in the Demon Sect

Come on, come on, I agree (hey) In short, the story is well written, the writing is smooth, and the writing style is okay. 🍅A rare good book The character portrayal and foreshadowing of the protagonist are well designed. The protagonist has the bottom line of nine-year compulsory education for normal people, and he also has the courage to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. The two are relatively balanced and not offensive.

The timeline is confusing. If you want to write, just write one main line. If you write two main lines, is it because you can't continue writing the previous main line? The main plot I'm writing now is completely different from the original main plot. It's like writing two books in one book. Why not just open another book? I'm really impressed.

The only drawback at present is the introduction of the characters. Listing the characters like the names of the dishes will make people forget deeply and make people confused. Moreover, there is no need to list the names of so many people at once. It is better to introduce them one by one than to list them all at once.

For the time being, there are no poisonous points. It is still in the new book stage. The plot, characters and so on still need to be polished. Especially this is a harem novel. The emotional line, the battle line and the narrative line (which can be understood as dialogue) are all very important. Well, that's it. 🤭

I haven't updated it for half a month, and I haven't changed the last three chapters. It's okay if you don't have time to write and post this because of perfect attendance, but at least you can keep your word. I haven't updated it for half a month, and the content of the chapters hasn't been changed. That's awesome.

The fourth day of disaster + online games + fantasy, overall it looks pretty good, but I haven't seen the player rewards yet, so I'll give you a five-star to encourage it.

It's okay. People who like reading this type of books can take a look.

The reason why readers abandon reading is because of the clone, not because the pig's feet left home, and if the pen is not strong enough to write about the clone, it will be written into a pile of stones 🙂

? Where is the heroine?

Very well written