火影：人在千手，但写轮眼

I like it, I like it so much. I just hope there will be two male protagonists, personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

First of all, I would like to praise the author. The writing is actually quite good. [Congratulations] It's beautiful. Maybe I came to this world just to read this book. There is basically no OOC in terms of character design, and the comic elements in the plot are also okay, which enriches the content of the novel. Maybe it's the ecstasy of multiple cooks? I hope I can post more about the plot and write it a little sweeter haaaaa Since I am a group favorite, can it be similar to All Direction? The main character is very cute! ! The above are personal suggestions. I wish the author a happy writing book and no worries [laughs]

I read the full text within a few days. It is a rare good article among the Naruto fanfics I have read recently. This is a typical tragedy that makes up for regrets and changes from the beginning. The male protagonist gradually becomes the group's darling. It is not a simple cheat or nonsensical and enjoyable article, but a little effort. The article feels a bit confusing at the beginning. After that, it gets smoother and smoother, and the viewers become more and more comfortable. I like the happy ending very much. The idea of the Ninja Kingdom is very good. What's even better is that the establishment of the Ninja Kingdom was not promoted through armed war, but the gradual development of early alliances and the natural merging of surrounding areas. The extra compensation for Naruto who suffered in the parallel world is also interesting. I have a small suggestion, which is the demon slayer that appeared in the previous part of the novel. When I read this, I thought the tone of this article was a mixture of various anime. I felt that it deviated from the main plot of Naruto and I wanted to give up. Then the system said the purpose of the world, and I thought it had some complicated meaning or that the male protagonist would go to another world to map in the future. After reading later, I realized that the main theme here is to introduce the male protagonist's powerful sword skills and ugly monsters. There is basically no other intrusion except the system. I feel that it is a bit weird to blend in with the demon slayer. Secondly, forget about the male protagonist's love line being completely blank, and forget about Hisama Madara being blank. After all, in the original text, they are single until old age, but Hashirama has a granddaughter. If there is no Uzumaki Mito, there must be someone else. At present, it seems that they will be single in the end, and the brotherhood is also so strong that it feels like orthopedics. This is also a small regret, haha, overall it is great, thumbs up!

Why doesn't the protagonist know anything? ?

I personally like it quite a lot and I feel like the rating could be improved upon, but I'll just list a few lightning protections that some people may need. If you miss anything, please feel free to add it. There is a little bit of the power system from other anime, but the proportion is not too big. There is a demon slayer. It's not a cool novel. The protagonist Goldfinger is not too big. It may be a bit frustrating to watch from the front. Some characters have to die after death. The protagonist has never watched Naruto before being reborn, so some things cannot be prevented in advance. The infrastructure construction hasn't started yet, but it feels like it will be soon... Right? Should (I want to ask when the alliance will be formed) There is no CP in this article, but it seems that you can read it casually (right?) If you want to see a heroine or a harem, you don't need to read further. The writing is not very good, there are some places where it is a little cluttered, but it is quite satisfactory and can be read if you don't look at it according to high standards. That's all I can think of at the moment. If you think of or see any interesting points in the future, please post them in the comment area. You are welcome to add additional points.

It's really good, but a little short. I'm looking forward to the follow-up, so keep up the good work! ! [Blowing kiss]

I feel pretty good after seeing it now, but I was confused for a while by the world view of Zombie➕Demon Slayer. If it involves a comprehensive comic later, how many chapters will it take? [Shocked]. Generally speaking, it doesn't seem to have any bad points. Although the character creation of Xiao Jingchuan has not been completely perfected so far, I look forward to some novel experiences in the later plot. As a new book, it is considered to be above average. I wish the author smooth thinking and a burst of ideas [Sending Hearts]

Come on author, I've read it three times

Hey-hey. It makes up for all the regrets. It makes me so happy to see it. . The writing is a bit rushed in some places, but I think it's pretty good, and the writing style is also okay. It makes people warm to the readers, and it's not abusive. In the middle and later stages, it's like a farming novel! This extra is delicious too!

A very good Naruto infrastructure fanfic! Hee hee~ All members have no CP~Quack, quack, quack~ The male protagonist is Senju Kagawa. I don't know why I always think of Uchiha Kagawa. Regarding the talk about the future, not much of the original content was explained, and there were no famous scenes from the four battles.

I want to see Kagawa live in Uchiha for a while, and I happen to have sex with Izuna, please! How can you write so well!

It's super good-looking, the main character is well-characterized, and it even has some attributes of other anime.

It's great, but it's too little. I finished it in less than one night. I stayed up until 1:41 in the morning to finish it.

Personally I think it looks great~

It's really, really beautiful. I highly recommend it👍👍👍. I feel like the male protagonist and Izumi are just like each other [laughing]

Boss, I will always follow you...

In the past, I didn't really like this kind of story about someone who traveled through time and became someone's brother, but I really like this one! After reading it, I felt a bit unsatisfied. I followed it for several days and finished it in one go. It was so satisfying. It is recommended that each age of Sagawa be written as if it were as many as when he was five years old (no)

It's very good. Izuna and Kagawa are really having a good time. The author should hurry up and type the words ^_^

This book is super beautiful! Author, don't give up! Koizumi Nana is so cute! There are basically no broken characters. Is it okay to follow ten chapters in one day? It's almost over... I feel a little empty

The book is very good, please support the author

The author writes superbly!

6. It's so 6. I'm fascinated by it. The result is gone. The author will try his best to update it!

It's really good-looking, the characters' emotions and plot are very good. To be honest, I'm quite picky when it comes to this kind of Naruto fanfic. This article is really good.

Very nice! I just feel a bit suffocated and the character is controlled by fate. I don't know whether the author wants to be BE or HE in the end. I hope that cute Izuna will not be led by a dog.

Beautiful, highly recommended

Nice! I hope there will be an extra [shy]

Hoho\^O^/I'm a little obsessed with Izumi and Kagawa

I seem to understand why there are so many five stars. Sure enough, I still can't do it. I can only ask others to come too... [Laughs evilly]

Very beautiful! ! Σ＞―(灬⁺д⁺灬)♡―――＞ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

Very pretty! The writing is good and the plot develops smoothly😽The growth of the protagonist is also very delicate. The only thing that makes me sad is that the ending with Izuna is not written😿😿