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Female drivers are very good at driving, much more powerful than the foot-picking guys!

There is not so much violence, which is good, but I hope the author is a harem stream rather than a stallion stream. The heroine should not accept it easily. She must have an emotional line, and she must cultivate the relationship even if she accepts it. Don't do any plot where the male and female protagonists are separated. It is best to form a group, and the male and female protagonists are the same. Let's fight together. Don't separate the male and female protagonists, and don't have too many female protagonists. In the end, it says that even if a certain female protagonist is offline, she will be unfavorable. The male protagonist has a good character, is responsible, stable, and treats the female protagonist well. Another thing is that I hope the author would rather spend a few more chapters describing emotions. There should be no such things as drugging or poisoning to promote the harem, including situations where the male protagonist saves people and takes advantage of them. Liking is not harmful, being romantic is not obscene, and there must be no things like mental control, forced contracts, etc. That go against one's will. We must respect female characters and avoid forced plots, including the forced recruitment of maids. It's rare to see a work that may appeal to your appetite, so it's hard to avoid saying too much with excitement. After all, there are too many novels with male protagonists who are not good people, especially those who cultivate immortality. I hope the author will work hard. Sister, you can drive slower and tell more stories. I look forward to my million-word speech from my sister.

This novel looks really good, and it suits my taste! Also, there are no numerical values ​​in this realm, but there are numerical values ​​in the qualifications. This setting is really good. I have read many similar novels, and the numerical values ​​in the realm will basically collapse within a few chapters. However, no matter how large the numerical value in this qualification is, it is still acceptable! In addition, the author must persevere. In this environment, it is easy for novels like this to be blocked. I have read dozens of novels of the same type, and all of them were either blocked or locked up in a small dark room from time to time.

The writing is brilliant, newcomers win, and it evokes people's basic needs. Fellow Taoists, please reward me more.

To be honest, the protagonist is very responsible. He is a man. The common problem with cultivating immortals is that the process is very slow. I feel that your progress can be faster.

This Stallion is a good book, and it can be considered a relatively good one. You can read it. I hope the author doesn't want too many female protagonists. Ten female protagonists will be enough. If there are too many female protagonists, it will be boring to read. If it is a novel, don't waste it.

The speed of the car is very stable [laughs], but the only flaw is the character of the protagonist. No matter how advanced the woman is, as long as she looks good, the protagonist will definitely scan her private parts. The author's aura to avoid being beaten to death probably depends on her. In addition, several other comments said that the protagonist's upgrade is slow. I disagree with this point. The protagonist's plug-ins only help the protagonist and his wife improve their bones. It cannot be done overnight. It is better to say that this slow speed is in line with common sense.

The writing is really good, the author has a certain writing skills, and the details are quite smooth. It is one of the best fairy tales in recent times. It's already better than Tomato 99's sweetness.

Come on, come on, baby, just read the novel and feel comfortable with just one word [cool] [cool] [cool]

Zizzi. Really good. I don't know what the author is like in reality. It's really exciting 😚

Good, good, very good, keep up the good work, come on. The character creation is very vivid and vivid. The plot so far has no surprises or flaws. In terms of the main plot, it feels like it has only scratched the surface and dug a hole. There is no obvious main plot yet, but the driving skills are so dazzling that the flaws in the main plot are not a problem.

I believe the author is really a female writer. The grammar is standard and the writing is smooth and delicate. Although the story is not particularly brilliant, the rhythm is well grasped and it is worth reading.

I have read Chapter 15 so far. The author's writing is online. There is no sense of déjà vu or hydrology like a junior high school composition. There is no twists and turns in the plot. The speed of the car is not very fast. It should be deleted, but it is still readable. It is much better than the one after an hour. Come on, author, keep writing like this. Don't make this cliché plot of the heroine being kidnapped and the hero going to rescue him. Keep writing like this, be stable, hold on, and make every step of the way. I have read Chapter 112. It is currently non-toxic, so feel free to eat it. Don't create any secret realms in the future, just fights. The author should have a clear idea of what he wants to see when reading this book. Just keep enjoying it like this. Just add more edges and daily routines. Just don't write Dragon King routines. One chapter of the fighting plot. Just solve it and that's it. Don't be like a certain novel where you write dozens of pictures at once. In the end, all the readers ran away. Don't write about secret realms. The previous novel was very similar to yours. Later, I always wrote about secret realms, fights and the like. From the original 9.1 Rating to the final 8.2, You can imagine how terrible these plots are.

It looks really good! I have never reviewed a book like this on Tomato. Absolutely different!

Cultivation starts from taking care of the master's wife Written by a serious little author Sese's bonus, but Naihe has been removed from the shelves. The plot is average to above average, not too attractive. It's average to above average. It's watchable, that is, watchable. But with the Sese bonus, you must get extra points, four stars.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't write, it won't be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I really appreciate your writing style, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you will be a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I'm just a bored idler. I clicked on this novel carelessly and didn't intend to finish it. But you succeeded and I "half" finished it. Now, only the feelings can make a difference! Only by leaving a message in the comments can I stabilize my mood at this moment. I am taking a chance and hope you can see it. Come on, the author is looking forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Let me give you a number. Ten chapters a day is not too much.

For the time being, I think it's okay. It's a cool article, and it's not sloppy. The male protagonist's level upgrade is too slow I hope no villains come in later, it will be a bit disgusting There's less shit, and it's quite comfortable according to the current pace, although it seems that it will be the same routine in the future - keep moving. In the end, it has been more than 5 years since I deliberately suppressed the male protagonist's realm, and he is still stuck at the 8th level of Qi training. The two wives have broken through to the golden elixir just by relying on the warm current. The male protagonist has no shortage of time + training resources when he has a clone, but he still can't reach the foundation building evil level by relying on the fire.

It's a classic. It allows you to read a chapter without skipping a chapter. It's just a point of exercise! There are no brainless stallions. Every woman has a name and is well portrayed. The golden finger improvement is not too abnormal. The spiritual root improvement is appropriate. There is no harm in a slower cultivation! Liu Shui'er, the twins, please hurry up and make arrangements. This is the one you're most looking forward to.

I found that when female authors write male harem novels, their descriptions are particularly delicate and wonderful, much better than most male authors.

When the heroine is not successful in the strategy, she is as beautiful as in the sky and on earth. When the strategy is successful, an even more beautiful heroine will appear, and the cycle begins again and again. But the beautiful sect leader has been portrayed perfectly, and she is my favorite heroine.

It is nonsense to say that men understand men best. It makes women understand men best. I didn't expect that female authors write more delicately than men and have more sense of empathy. The car drives fast and steadily [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Stop talking and get in the car. The protagonist's personality is just right, a little bad but emphasizing friendship, a little arrogant but still in control. The portrayal of each female character is very distinctive, and the emotional scenes are described very carefully, as if they were written by a female author, but her driving skills are amazing.

As an old bookworm, this book was once added to my reading list, but I didn't read it. I deleted it when I saw it was written by a female author. Later, I read five or six books and ignored the first few dozen. I was really short of books and saw recommendations, so I read it with the attitude of giving it a try. There is a saying that books written by female authors are indeed as good as those written by male authors. It's different. I can't describe the feeling. I can only say that the plot line has no ups and downs. It's pretty good. It's all on the route of conquering the heroine. I've finished reading it now, and there are five or six books waiting for updates. This one is the author's debut. I have no other books to read. I hope the author recommends one to read.

It's surprisingly good and updated enough, but I'm just surprised that a female author can actually write male harem stories. It's quite amazing.

Love to read, read more, I am a 10-year old bookworm. I haven't found such a good book about cultivating immortality for a long time. The main reason is that the plot is very novel and the writing is not bad. The description of the characters can also make me feel very interesting. It is a little h, but it is just right. It is not a complete stallion nor completely boring. Cultivation of Immortality will not make people lose their passion. It is really good. Come on, author! Believe in yourself, follow your own path, and don't be affected by bad comments.

The harem novel, YYDS, is a novel that you will never tire of reading. The plot is ups and downs, full of interest, and the characters are well described and vivid. Each has its own style, which leaves a deep impression on people. Hope to keep up the good work. Don't stop updating, keep up the good work [Like][Like]

This book is suitable for all ages and is loved by everyone. Genshin Impact? ? ? King? ? ? Don't let me start any of these things. With this book, I can't feel much better [smile][smile][smile]

Feichang is a serious book, suitable for serious people to read.

Yes, I read 100 chapters in one day. The emotional descriptions are more delicate than most fairy tales. I don't have to worry about each book's settings such as combat power. However, I feel that the protagonist has too many magical powers or cheats, and he can click on everything.

The driving speed is fast, the male protagonist is not overly cautious, and there is no deliberately depressing plot. It is quite good in a place full of thunder. I remember that the bookshelves in the dark room have been added so that they can be seen (unless they are taken off the shelves directly). If that doesn't work, the author could just post an outline as the end, which would satisfy everyone's wishes.