After Awakening My Talent for Farming, I Traveled Across the Planes

Just a reminder, this is still a two-male protagonist article, so don't read it if it's too scary [Sending my heart]

It looks good, but the writing style needs to be improved, please give it a try

Update, sir, why are most of the good-looking ones finished so quickly [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

The author is Da Da, are there two male protagonists?

The poison has been tested, I can't be the only one who gets stabbed

I like the content, subject matter and ideas of the author's novel very much, but I feel that the author likes it very much. But there are too many combinations of wrong sentences. It is recommended to add less and add more details. From now on, I feel like you are writing a novel outline.

Even planters should have the ability to protect themselves

It's very nice, I'll update it more often, but some of the words in the article are a bit verbose, I hope they can be improved.

It looks good, the plot is good

Some plots are interesting

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking!

Very good, dual male protagonists

It's beautiful🤩Awesome author, come on

The author's book is great! Come on! ! ! [Learned][Learned][Learned]

Oh my god, my head hurts! Gay article~[][][]

I am particularly fond of farming recently, and I have a golden finger that can be accepted and the article is smooth through the quick wear.

The content is good, just [learned][learned][learned][learned][learned]

It's pretty good, no big problems, I just feel like the main character is a bit silly.