I Grasped the Ideal of the World

I once read a topic that said: The delusion in the world is Shen Youchu, the ideal in the world is Xiao Rongyu, the reality in the world is Huang Hui, Shang Yanyan is a good girl, and Luo Xuan is a top pick. This sentence touched me very much, are we changing? No, it is this bad social environment that is changing, forcing us to become something we once hated! Maybe you wrote this book to satisfy your own fantasies and thoughts, but I hope you will write it well, write it with your heart, and write a perfect ending!

The author himself thinks it's very good [Thinking]

It's very real, the characters are well drawn, and it's consistent with the original work. However, I still hate Chen Gou's early behavior, but I will still give it 5 stars because Shen Youchu deserves full marks.

It's okay. Shen Youchu's character was restored well, but it was a bit abrupt when connecting with the original plot. Is it because there was no time to adjust? I hope the author will think about it, and then regarding the game between the protagonist and Chen Hansheng, people have thousands of faces, each with their own wonderful things, and bring out the beauty that belongs to the protagonist's modern young people. In the original work, Chen Hansheng lacked such campus life and used strong means to forcibly win over Shen Youchu. The protagonist must not fall in love! Don't over-repeatedly indicate the main character's thoughts, do more to express them, and you will definitely get a 9 points I haven't read it for a long time. I originally wanted to read it but I didn't expect it to end up (a pity). However, it can be seen that the author wanted to start with the character design but was not sure about it because I am a newbie (a pity). As a new book practitioner, it is good to have a sense of ideas and try it out. However, it is still a pity for this book. Shen Youchu has a different life in the hands of the author. She is Ideal in the world, the ending of the original work is very hard to accept. Since it is a novel, you should make the ideal better instead of sharing your own beauty with others (here I doubt whether Shen Youchu still loves Chen), so I originally wanted to see the author write the ending of Shen Youchu living with the person he loves, but for novels, as long as you have enough dreams, you can just reflect on the rest.

Shen Youchu should have a good ending [Like]

Five stars, give me more updates! Love cannot tolerate a third party. It's rare that a male author of a male video doesn't have a harem! ! Come on

Will the book be blocked if the author Tomato doesn't have the copyright?

Never engage in Long Aotian, just be safe and happy [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The author's writing is quite good, but sometimes the plot points can be bolder. Let's say that He Chang can follow Chen Hansheng. Anyway, it is your book. You can just write a few strokes for him to squat in. How can he miss Youchu? [Pout]

The writing style of the assignment is very good, and it makes people feel drawn to it unconsciously. I have not seen such excellent novels for a long time. I hope the author will get better and better, come on! More, of course, to ensure quality The author looks like someone who wants to get rich

The writing is great. I have long wanted to read the text of this book, and now I have it.

There is still a big gap compared with the original work. The author's writing style is not that delicate. It is not much different from a normal rebirth article. The five stars are also given to Shen Youchu. It is really difficult to surpass. Come on, author.

If the protagonist travels through the world of Chen Hansheng in the first life, then it is indeed possible, but what about the second life? I think the protagonist's talent and emotional intelligence should not be able to compete with Chen Hansheng, but the author has a trick that he uses very well, letting Young Chu and Yu meet in advance.

I've wanted to read this book as a fan before, but I didn't expect the author to have the courage to write it. Good luck, author!

It looks great, and I want to share my thoughts. Regarding rebirth, I used to think that it was to make up for my regrets, catch up with the person I like, find something I like, take good care of my parents, etc. But after reading so many of them, I always associate them with opening a harem. I admit that excellent people like it everywhere, but it always feels weird. After all, it is a novel and I don't like it, so I can only stop reading it. But I think the author wrote this very well. I don't like you having a harem and I despise you but I'm only interested in one thing. And the protagonist has always been for Shen Youchu from the beginning. I don't know what to say when the words come to my lips. Come on, author.

This book is well written and can be considered a very good fanfic. Compared with the original text, the character descriptions are not much different, and the emotional descriptions are also very delicate. It feels like you are reading a side story. But the description of business, emotional intelligence, and plot is relatively poor. Generally speaking, there are very few fans of "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn," but this one is a fine product and you can read it.

It's pretty good-looking. It would be great if I could get rid of two scumbag men [crying with laughter]

I hope the author's content will be richer. Now it seems to be a bit more like a romance. It doesn't matter if it's slow. For example, two people go shopping and the male protagonist asks her if it looks good. She takes a look at the price and says it's not good. Etc. The side highlights Shen Youchu's virtuousness and so on. It's more about the daily life of two people. I think we can add more psychological descriptions of the male and female protagonists, as long as the fanfic does not collapse.

It's a standard sweet story, but the male protagonist can actually be less love-minded.

It's very sweet. I hope that in this book, Chen will not be a scumbag [Sending Hearts]

I think it's pretty cool, why doesn't anyone see it? These people don't know how to appreciate it. Although the protagonist's character has some flaws, the protector is not an ordinary protector. Good guy, you inherit millions, right? I will become a fucking millionaire. It really protects my shortcomings. Except for a little lack of confidence at the beginning, everything else is really good.

Only now I realize that I haven't commented yet [face covering] The writing is very good, but the character descriptions and emotional descriptions of some characters are not very good. But I can understand the author as this is his first time writing a book. No one can write a book smoothly and beautifully the first time. Here is a five-star review to encourage the author. I wish every review of the author's next book will be five stars.

Three stars for the content, and one for Youchu [I understand]

It's full, it's really good

This is my first rating for you. Good job.

I have long wanted to kill Chen Hansheng through the book, and dare to slander Youchu. I didn't expect someone to write it for me, hahaha, five stars.

Shen Youchu deserves five stars!

The writing is good and well written. Come on and work hard

Hope it can be written down.

This is the first time I see a fellow Youchu friend and I give him a five-star rating.