Here Comes *********

I haven't read 100 chapters when I commented on this. I don't think I can persevere. The character of the heroine is okay. The shaping of the brothers and sisters is also okay. The writing style is quite average. I personally read it in my spare time. The author is still a novice and there is a lot of room for improvement. I can't persevere because I have read a lot of similar articles. It is a bit common. If the author has a lot of foreshadowing and a big layout, I may continue reading. It is quite daily at the moment. The logical thinking needs to be improved. The heroine's previous life is a mystery. At least I haven't seen her previous identity yet. We don't know what kind of person we are. Let's first look at the personality contrast and style of work between the original owner and the heroine. We can definitely see the difference. I just don't know if the original owner's senior brothers and sisters can see it. Of course not. I'm just complaining. I'm not giving five stars to mislead others because everyone has different tastes. For me, I think the author's writing is pretty good. It's not easy for a novice to write a book. It's also a support. I hope the author will get better and better in the future, and his writing will improve day by day. Come on [sending my heart] (ps: I'm just expressing my personal opinion) It cannot be viewed as an analysis. Readers must understand it for themselves. Sometimes the comments may not really be that way, or you may not feel that way. It is still the same sentence. Everyone has different tastes. Of course, you have to taste it yourself.)

Based on the 100 chapters I have read so far, this book is good. When reading this book, sometimes I will be amused from the bottom of my heart. The disciples in the sect are very united, which gives people positive energy. I basically don't have many requirements for reading the article. Based on the articles I have read, this book has less foreshadowing, so there may be a lot People who read the article will not be able to read it for this reason, so I still suggest that the author can give more foreshadowing in the follow-up, giving people a mentality that the more they read, the more they want to read. Also, the junior sister has changed a lot. Even if she usually pretends in front of others, as his closest senior brother, I think I should have seen some clues. (I hope other authors can continue their efforts. Great author, treasures will always come out. Come on, I'll wait for you to become famous [blowing kiss])

Am I the first to comment? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] It's pretty good-looking, and the heroine has a great time doing what she does.

It's not a loss to fall into the trap! It's not a loss if you enter the trap! ! ! !