A Song That Misplaces Time and Space and Puts Your Ex-Boyfriend on the Hot Search

So who is the male protagonist?

It's beautiful 😊, I like Yu Chen, that annoying little poem, it would be better if it can be offline as soon as possible, hurry up and enter the sweet love!

The subject matter is quite good, the writing is average, there is a kind of heroine who dares to stay at the same time, and the details are average

Nice. But I don't know why the author was in a hurry to finish it, and the later writing was a bit too condensed. If it's because few people read it, it's normal for a new author's first book to have few readers, so just try your best to write it well. The first and middle stages of this article are actually pretty good. The protagonist's character, life, and song selection are closely connected, and the lyrics are highly consistent, so the songs at this stage are very immersive. The character experiences and emotional life of the heroine and hero are also very vivid. The female protagonist is the only one who is physically and mentally independent of the male protagonist. She respects the female protagonist and praises her equally (I can't help it, I have seen too many rotten cucumber male protagonists. Some authors have no requirements for the male protagonist, which is sad [laughs awkwardly]). The song selection in the middle and later stages is still very good, but the fit of the lyrics has also declined. The main plot develops too fast, and it feels like a hammer blow here and there, a bit fragmented. And the preparation for the final World Series was really too simple. From the selection of players to the start to the preparation of others during the game, other people's works were ignored and everything was too hasty. This sense of haste is especially obvious in the ending chapter. The game has reached the final stage, but just like the subsequent lives of the male and female protagonists, they are all swept away. Summary: It's a bit of a pity, I feel that at least hundreds of thousands of words have been deleted from the entire story. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write the next book well. The plot that needs to be expanded must be expanded.

The song is okay, but it feels aggrieved and unpleasant. I hope the author can write it more comfortably.

This novel is well written and suitable for reading while listening to music

It's even, I think it's okay to pass the time. I searched for the music the author chose and listened to it while watching it, and it sounded pretty good [Chigua]

I also solved the misunderstanding step by step. It looks good. Come on and update it!

The songs I chose are all very nice. I listened to them while playing music.

Together together!

Emotional drama is incomprehensible

The process that the female protagonist goes through from ghost to human is quite interesting. Growth takes time and process. The male protagonist has always been very warm. It's good that her friends didn't bother her. It's good that the two female protagonists have good results in the end.

That's awesome, come on [blowing kiss]

Come on, come on, come on!

Very exciting, I like it very much

Very nice! The recommended songs are very nice.

The story is pretty good, and the writing is okay, but the song lists don't overlap very much, and there's no sense of immersion.

It's pretty good. Although there are emotional scenes, there aren't many that are boring. They are mainly just to find reasons for feelings. I don't know if it will get boring later. .

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻That's great, I wish them all the best together 9999 [blowing kiss]

It's nice and no nonsense. I've heard a lot of this kind of novels and there's a lot of nonsense. I just stop listening to it after hearing it for a while. I hope the rest of it will be just as smooth [laughing and crying]

As a little girl who has read more than 6,000 hours, I think this book is very well written. I read it in one go and am ready to go to bed. Good night.