
Naruto: Naruto Should Be Like This, How Can He Be Called Black?
火影:鸣人本该如此,怎能叫黑化
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Explore more →I Beg the Hokage to Read the Novel and Not Lick Konoha! ! !
Villain writing is the best
The Male Protagonist Was Abandoned by the Light and Turned to Join the Darkness
Naruto Has No Masterpieces (Except Dave, Artist, Sister Juan's, and Divine Land)
Naruto's Fourth Battle, I'm Resurrected
The Hokage Has No More Masterpieces to Argue With.
A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
The Protagonist Is Extremely Empty Inside, No Longer Trusts Anyone and Has a Ceiling on His Strength.
I was born in darkness, but someone showed me the light and pushed me back to darkness
Naruto's Single Heroine Hinata Is Invincible in the Later Stage.
Written on the topic.
Naruto Uchiha, Sharingan Book, Read Them All
Naruto Uchiha, Sharingan book, read them all
Naruto Is an Uchiha, and He Starts with the Mangekyō Sharingan.
Naruto Was Too Strong and Was Banned
Eye Technique! Eye Technique! Books Related to Eye Abilities (Not Necessarily Hokage)
As a villain, he was a senior brother in his previous lives, but his ending was tragic. In his last life as a villain, his junior brothers and sisters changed their view of the protagonist after being informed of the truth.
Burn to the Extreme! ! ! a Book That Even Boruto Cannot Download
Those Who Travel Through Animations and Anime Novels Only Have Female Channels, Only Female Channels!
For example, time travel to Ye Luoli, the little flower fairy and the devil fairy, or time travel to the magic battle to return to One Piece, literary hero Stray Dogs, etc. If you want all kinds of fan fiction, it is best to have no cp! It's okay, but don't be a heartthrob! Don't change from male to female!
Is There Any Hokage Who Is at His Peak at the Beginning?
Two-Dimensional Comprehensive Comic Zhutian Infinite Streaming
Not Kamen Rider, Demon Slayer, Ultraman, Armor Warrior, etc. I hope it's best for all heavens and all realms
The Protagonist of Naruto Is from the Uchiha Clan
Naruto Fan Ceiling! ! !
I want to read a book like "The most stubborn Uchiha, it's okay to dig into one's own grave."
Naruto + Sakura Death, Danzo Death + Kyuubi + All Eye Techniques + Eight Gates of Armor Death Gate
I Don't Believe There Are Books About the Fate of the Country.
The national destiny may be played by Obito.
The Protagonist Is Naruto and the Heroine Is Hinata.
Ball Naruto Fanfic! No Harem! ! No Heroine Is the Best!
Original protagonist, no harem! ! Or it would be better if the male protagonist concentrates on his career and there is no female protagonist, thank you! !
Naruto, Don't Feel Aggrieved, Cool Article
I want to watch content similar to "Su Nuo, I'm sorry, I couldn't let Uchiha-sama die". Is there a kind of novel that puts you first and doesn't act as a babysitter for others? It's a Naruto fanfic that makes people feel comfortable.





































































































It's pretty good, I don't know why the rating is low. I particularly like this kind of ambition-style setting. Other fans, whether it's Black Revenge or Konoha's loyal dog, all have a sense of being petty. As a time traveler, you must build your career with strong strength, instead of accompanying a group of plot characters to perform a tragic drama. Controlling everything behind the scenes also feels like a ninja hero. I look forward to the next book being more sophisticated.
This Naruto fan novel is written very realistically. The original owner's soul travels through Uzumaki Naruto, and uses Naruto's attitude to integrate the ninja world, and the concept of achieving great unification runs through people's hearts. Although it has a system, it is not a mindless novel. It is very interesting to read. I personally think it can be recommended.
It's good, brothers, don't be fooled by the title of the book. I can give it 9.5 Points. It would be nice to explain more about the ninja world after the unification. Many things that were promised were not explained. Where is Xiangling~where is Ningji~and others are fine. He is a pure and good person who dares to do what he does and dares to take responsibility. It's good-looking. It's better than many so-called black books. Those rats who have gained some power and don't deserve to be human are killed directly just because of their words... It's really [grievance]
Tomato is a rare good book. Unfortunately, the number of words is too few, but the plot and character design are not bad. The author is a smart man. He can also write more words, but he knows that the plot he designed is a bit fast and the protagonist grows up violently. In the later stage, it will only be watery. If the plot is written more, it will collapse, so he simply finished it directly. In this way, even if the book is a little regretful because of the too few words, he cannot deny that it is still a good novel!
Purely refreshing writing, fast pace, and a great read all the way. The content is a bit short, but it is not unacceptable. I personally always believe that the best number of chapters for fan works is between two and three hundred. This amount is just enough to cover everything that needs to be written, without being too long-winded. Of course, if the writing is particularly good, you can write one or two hundred more chapters, so that the full text is around 500 chapters, which is really enough. Nowadays, many fan authors are extremely ambitious, dragging out the pace in the early stages to overwhelm their ability, thinking that I have to write millions of words, but as a result, they are unable to keep up, and either end early, or start to rush like crazy in the second half and end up unfinished.
For such a good book, the score is indeed a bit low. The author's character creation is really original. Only those who truly understand this Naruto world and its ending will know how rare it is. Chun Chun Yun commented after playing a few games [laughing awkwardly], but I suggest that those who have not read Naruto should not read this book. There are quite a lot of changes. Those who have not read it will not understand it, and those who have read it once may not understand it. [Make a face] I have been a fan of Naruto for eight years. In my eyes, this book is indeed a masterpiece. The only regret is that the plot progresses relatively quickly. If it could be written as a long story, I think the effect would be better. [Full]
I don't know why the score is so low. Although the overall plot is short, there are not many poisonous points. In summary, it is a pretty good and enjoyable book.
Advantages: Not sloppy, clean and refreshing, many rewrites of fate are also very reasonable, and it is also very short, you can read it in half a day Disadvantages: The writing style is really average, the content is insufficient, and the plot is narrated in a running account style. Overall, it's okay. At least it's not sloppy. It's worth spending two or three hours to look at it.
Although it is a bit short, this is indeed the best of all the Naruto fanfics I have read. The protagonist not only has system plug-ins, but also has a very high IQ, handles affairs, and lays out plans in an orderly manner. The only pity is that the content of this book only covers Shippuden. The hidden dangers that appear in Boruto are not mentioned at all. Although I don't like Boruto, the hidden dangers in Boruto are mentioned in Shippuden, and even Otsutsuki Toneri on the Moon is not mentioned here, so this book gives me the feeling that it is incomplete and incomplete. This book is really good, but it is not complete enough and does not eliminate the hidden dangers after Shippuden. I hope the author can start with the ending of this book and write a second part.
Okay, really great. There was no peeing spot or water word count throughout the whole process. I feel it is still very powerful. It must be given a five-star rating. I have read some particularly serious novels about water quality. The difference is huge in comparison. This novel still has its unique highlights. Comment 666 must be double clicked.
Overall this book is very good, but the pace is too fast. If only the pace could be slower and the story longer. Even if the word count is low, it's okay [laughs] There could also be more emotional scenes. This might be the only flaw, it's not enough to watch.
It's very good-looking. I feel that the protagonist's IQ is online. Through prescient operations, he realizes his ideals. It's so awesome [laughs evilly]. However, the details of fighting are lacking. More can be added, but I like it very much.
It's not easy, honestly. I have read so many books, and many of them have hasty endings, or have bad endings, or are even more broken. This is one of the few novels that was completely written, and unlike other novels, it was written just to make up the word count. There are no redundant words here, and in order to save words, the redemption details and skill introduction are omitted later. Finally, the ending of the system is explained. Although the origin of the system is not described, it can be regarded as completing the plot of the system. In the end, the system breaks away from the host and looks for the next one. Naturally, it is impossible for the protagonist to know what the system is. Then, this Naruto is neither a Holy Mother nor a badass. It's more exciting than those white novels, but not as uncomfortable as the dark ones. Although the writing style is not top-notch and it is a bit short, I can give it 9 points in my heart. Finally, come on, author, I hope to see your full-length works
It is very good to have strength, upright views, no brainless plot, decisive killing, sincerity to friends and no mercy to enemies.
This book should get about 9.2 Points. Some readers think the setting is inappropriate and could be changed, and the length is too short. I think it's all acceptable, at least it's not bad. The most satisfying thing is the handling of those tragic characters, which is pretty good and makes up for my regrets [blowing kiss]. It could have been full stars but there are some problems, so I'll just give it 4 stars [OK].
The writing is very good and not sloppy. However, I feel that the characters are not well written, such as Shino's low sense of presence, but the rewriting of the mission fate is still relatively good, and it is too short and can be read in one day.
The plot is reasonable, the protagonist is not the Virgin, and it also solves some of Asuma, Jiraiya, and Konan's regrets. It's great.
It took me four hours to read it. It was very good. It is one of the most satisfying books I have ever read. When reading other books, I often skip entire chapters because of the same plot. You can tell what is going on in the plot just by looking at the table of contents. Many people say it's short, but I think it's just right for me. It's not sloppy or ink-stained. It's very good.
It's a cool story that has a beginning and an end. It's not as ugly as other reviews said. The only shortcoming is that the combat descriptions and dialogues are relatively unfamiliar. Compared with those novels that often end unfinished and are hastily completed, it's already very good.
It's not really a dark story, it's quite upright. I can only say that the title and introduction were not good, or maybe I just changed my mind after I realized halfway through that I couldn't write a dark story. The overall pacing is fast and not laggy at all. It kills when asked and does not open a back door for the villain. Unlike some novels where a villain looks like a cockroach and cannot be killed for hundreds of chapters. It is a truly enjoyable novel.
The smooth ending is in line with readers' expectations. There is no forced pacing and watered-down chapters. The system is not too smart to perform cross talk with the protagonist all day long. The protagonist is not a lunatic who blindly pursues the so-called "killing indiscriminately". These are very comfortable.
It looks good, better than the one I watched before about Naruto and Humanity.
The rating is a bit low. There is nothing sloppy about this book from beginning to end, and it actually feels quite good. Of course, the plot is a bit lacking, and there are very few details. My personal score is 9 points. Encourage and keep up the good work.
Although I haven't watched much Naruto, I know a little bit about it. Although there are very few chapters in this series, its content is very smooth and exciting, and it feels very good to watch. I highly recommend it.
It's very nice to make up for the pain that the war brought to the ninja world. It unified the world and not many people died. It's just that the tailed beast scenes are a bit sparse, and the fact that the tailed beasts weren't released later feels a bit pitiful, but it's better than being used as a weapon of war. Five stars is a must [laughing]
When I read the synopsis of the book, I thought it was a crazy revenge story, but I didn't expect it to be sensible. It is decisive and follows rules. Every grudge must be repaid with kindness. No irrelevant people are implicated. The dead who should not be resurrected can directly avoid future troubles. It ends when it needs to end without procrastination. It's quite good! !
A very good fan fiction with very obvious pros and cons. The advantage is that the protagonist is decisive in killing and shows no mercy when encountering enemies, but he is not too cruel, which is in line with the protagonist's personality. The disadvantages are that the pace is too fast, the content is too little, and it is somewhat idealistic.
The writing is still good, but the plot develops too fast. If I keep this pace, I can finish Otsutsuki in less than 200 chapters. . .
Cut the mess with a sharp knife. The plot is also okay. There is no bad ending either. Well, it's one of the short stories worthy of 5 stars.
A good author. I think he can hone his delicate writing skills. I suggest you read female novels. You will definitely be a great author in the future.