Li Yan transmigrated to a world where spiritual qi had revived and ferocious beasts ran rampant. Martial arts flourished here, and martial artists basked in boundless glory.
He was a student at a martial arts academy with poor aptitude. After three years of hard work, he ultimately failed the martial arts entrance exam.
He thought he would be stuck at the bottom from then on, never able to break through the class barrier, spending his whole life struggling to get by.
But that very night, he awakened a System panel.
"Ding! Return to simplicity: Any cultivation technique can be simplified!"
"Basic technique Flowing Breath Method detected. Simplification available!"
"Beginning to simplify basic technique Flowing Breath Method... Simplification successful: Breathing!"
So what if my talent is poor and I can't understand cultivation techniques? Can't I just simplify them?
Breathing. Who can't do that?
Some time later:
An eighteen-year-old martial artist, the biggest dark horse in the genius martial artist tournament.
A specially recruited martial artist for a mercenary company, taking on missions no one else dares to handle.
Then one day, Li Yan made the news.
The class group chat exploded: Didn't you fail the martial arts entrance exam back then? How did you become the Invincible God of War?
This book is not slow-burning, it should be a single female protagonist. I also hope it is a single female protagonist. The advantage of this book is that it upgrades quickly, but the heroine has nothing to hide and exposes her strength. But she is not proud and does not cause trouble. The disadvantage is that there is a brainless villain. The brainless villain is very annoying. I hope that the villain can be written with more brains. I also suggest that the author give the protagonist a spirit. In the end, I just hope that the author will finish two hundred chapters as soon as possible. If there are too many words, it will be a bit boring to write. Because if there are too many words, you will have a lot of earth chapters and starry sky chapters. The plot should not change much, so it may be very annoying for people to watch. If you can't stand it, I don't recommend you to write too many. If you write four or five hundred Zhang, if there are more than 1,000 pictures, don't tell me if anyone can finish it. Even if you can finish it, your book should be almost useless. After all, it is too long. At your leveling speed, if you write more than 1,000 pictures, the entire world you have written will have to be killed to reach the world. Anyway, the evaluation is about the same. As for one star missing, is it the brainless villain? Others are okay. I just hope that the author can make those female protagonists or those who are close to the protagonist more talented. Otherwise, the male protagonist will be too dangerous. I hope it is just a personal suggestion. Well, I hope that in the future, the protagonist will form his own team or something, find a few others, and recruit a male protagonist, who will be brothers with the male protagonist. This is my own suggestion that I hope the author will adopt. I hope you don't open a harem, please don't open a harem. It's really not good to open a harem. If you open a harem, you will get tired of so many women every day. When will you improve your strength? Mr. Dai, you seem to be talking about killing monsters. To improve your strength, it would not be good if you open a harem. You can't even take good care of the harem and you can't take care of everyone.
What I have seen so far is the first work with this kind of plot. It is very good. Although the upgrade is a bit unreasonable, it is fun. It is suitable for readers who like invincible novels. It is specially approved. It has a female protagonist, but it is not a hindrance. This is very good.
The writing is okay, but the emotional scenes need to be improved. Good work, author.
Keep up the good work, the writing is pretty good!
Ha, it's quite interesting. There are all kinds of sentiments and meanings. It's better than those nonsense stories, cruelty stories, lovey-dovey stories, forced indifference and cold-blooded stories!
It's okay, I hope Pig's Feet can learn the secrets of magic.
Very beautiful, really beautiful, 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🉑 with 🐂🍺
The subject matter is novel, the plot is good, the emotional lines are very natural, and there is no bloody plot.
Keep up the good work, come on, it looks great
Mind-blowing! The structure is clear, the content is ups and downs, and there are many small mistakes. Create calmly and reach new heights!