The Corpse Daoist

Good book, author, cheers, but I feel that it is even more hopeless. It will be very painful to chase it every day. I don't know how many words the author plans to finish the book, but I hope it won't be too fast and it won't reach the last word. I would like to give you a small suggestion. I hope the author can reconsider the chapter titles. I feel that some chapter titles and chapter content are a bit off, or they only click on the small points within the chapters instead of summarizing them. At the beginning of the new book, the attention is relatively low. Just keep it good and maybe one day it will skyrocket. Another small suggestion is that the author's message to readers is not recommended to open a separate chapter. After all, many people are more accustomed to the continuity and a chapter suddenly pops up, which will make some people feel disgusted. I suggest the author open a group and chat about the author's messages or plot advancement discussions in the group. This will create a better atmosphere and will not affect the reader's experience. Above Congratulations on the explosion.

Update quickly. The writing is very good. No need for a knife in the back. Shen Qingqiu and the little princess cannot die.

The book has been out of stock for a long time. So far, these forty chapters are pretty good. When the protagonist goes through the experience, the world view can be enlarged. Don't limit it to just one dynasty and demon land. You can add a few continents, add places or other worlds. Although it is relatively cliché, this is currently a better way to expand the world view. I recommend this type of book. It is better to keep a female protagonist later or not to write about the lonely life of Qingdeng Ancient Buddha, because now it is common for books of this type to have multiple female protagonists. I have found many good books before and started reading them in a few days. After a few days, I started with three or four women. Anyway, the beautiful ones are all male protagonists. If the emotional details are not dealt with, there are so many female protagonists that it is really hard to watch (personal suggestion: don't blame me if you don't like it)

Since you want to write Qinmei like that, you don't have to whitewash it. You have to whitewash it later. Also, those dialogues really feel like the preface doesn't match the sequel. I saved the protagonist and gave him the money, but later I met him and said I could come to her sect. Don't you think this twist is too abrupt? Why didn't you let him follow you to the sect before? Quite funny

I have to say that the score is indeed a bit low. However, if the characters are not introduced in the early stage, the novel's emotions are indeed a bit abrupt. I can accept the dual heroines, but the expansion of the harem does not feel worthy of the novel's writing style. I simply think that since the male protagonist is a modern person who has traveled through time, it is better to have only one female protagonist. The rest can be beauties, but there must not be too many. Too many emotional scenes will ruin the work. Some regrets can actually improve the quality of the novel 🤔 Finally, cheers to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

It felt okay at first, but later on it felt like a cool novel. Just like the episode about Yu Yan Guo, the protagonist is a casual cultivator, and writing that he has no emotional intelligence is a bit of a detraction. There is also the episode about Lin Lang and Guo Yixin's life-and-death fight, which feels a bit forced in order to cater to the readers' pleasure. Of course you can also refute that you are indifferent when you see your sister being bullied? Anyway, I have been baptized by many cool articles in the past, and I will get bored after reading too much. I don't know how other readers feel. However, this is probably the first time for the author to write a book, so I can forgive it.

After reading novels for 9 years, this is one of the few well-written fantasy novels. I once thought about writing a magnificent world of cultivating immortals, but my writing skills were limited and I was lazy, so I never started writing. I hope the author can continue to write and not let life destroy the wings of dreams. Imagination is the greatest treasure of mankind. I also wish the author a happy life. I wish those who have a will, things will come true.

Good, good, excellent. The protagonist is mentally mature and decisive in killing, but has his own bottom line. Some plots are old but always make people watch it. The only thing that makes me feel bad is that Shen Qingqiu was washed. If not, it would be so cool to chase her husband in the crematorium after she wakes up. Alas, the male protagonist and the first heroine have already explained clearly... Alas, the motivation to pursue desperately because of hatred is gone. 🥺. It's very refreshing to see there, but what follows is a kind of emptiness, a kind of confusion after completing a big goal and not knowing what to do. This feeling is like the endless emptiness that follows after you impulsively rush 10 times 😢

It's not novel. The outline should have been written. There are some pitfalls in the early stage. I can only say that I will try to round it out later. The details are handled well, but the update speed cannot be complimented. Also, this is a fairy tale, so it is natural and even necessary to have a love line, but it is absolutely not allowed to account for too much. I hope you can listen to this advice [laughing] Sure enough, it still looks the same? The quality is reasonable.

The pace of Qingmei's contradictory story is actually a bit faster. From the early stage, I felt that I should be able to write it for a long time 😂. The author must have been affected, and I can understand it. After all, the mainstream male protagonist of Tomato can't take any losses, and happiness is the king. Haha 🤦 🤦 🤦 I still hope that the author can write according to his own ideas as much as possible, and readers' opinions are only for reference. The writing is good and the story doesn't have many logical flaws at the moment. Has the popularity bar of the heroines increased a little faster? The relationship between the master and the male protagonist is similar to that of Dou Po. In fact, it's not impossible to follow Dou Po's routine [please take a closer look]