Corpse Taoist

Update quickly. The writing is very good. No need for a knife in the back. Shen Qingqiu and the little princess cannot die.

Good book, author, cheers, but I feel that it is even more hopeless. It will be very painful to chase it every day. I don't know how many words the author plans to finish the book, but I hope it won't be too fast and it won't reach the last word. I would like to give you a small suggestion. I hope the author can reconsider the chapter titles. I feel that some chapter titles and chapter content are a bit off, or they only click on the small points within the chapters instead of summarizing them. At the beginning of the new book, the attention is relatively low. Just keep it good and maybe one day it will skyrocket. Another small suggestion is that the author's message to readers is not recommended to open a separate chapter. After all, many people are more accustomed to the continuity and a chapter suddenly pops up, which will make some people feel disgusted. I suggest the author open a group and chat about the author's messages or plot advancement discussions in the group. This will create a better atmosphere and will not affect the reader's experience. Above Congratulations on the explosion.

The book has been out of stock for a long time. So far, these forty chapters are pretty good. When the protagonist goes through the experience, the world view can be enlarged. Don't limit it to just one dynasty and demon land. You can add a few continents, add places or other worlds. Although it is relatively cliché, this is currently a better way to expand the world view. I recommend this type of book. It is better to keep a female protagonist later or not to write about the lonely life of Qingdeng Ancient Buddha, because now it is common for books of this type to have multiple female protagonists. I have found many good books before and started reading them in a few days. After a few days, I started with three or four women. Anyway, the beautiful ones are all male protagonists. If the emotional details are not dealt with, there are so many female protagonists that it is really hard to watch (personal suggestion: don't blame me if you don't like it)

I have to say that the score is indeed a bit low. However, if the characters are not introduced in the early stage, the novel's emotions are indeed a bit abrupt. I can accept the dual heroines, but the expansion of the harem does not feel worthy of the novel's writing style. I simply think that since the male protagonist is a modern person who has traveled through time, it is better to have only one female protagonist. The rest can be beauties, but there must not be too many. Too many emotional scenes will ruin the work. Some regrets can actually improve the quality of the novel [Thinking] Finally, cheers to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Good, good, excellent. The protagonist is mentally mature and decisive in killing, but has his own bottom line. There are some old plots but they are always watchable. The only thing that makes me feel bad is that Shen Qingqiu was washed. If not, it would be so cool to chase her husband in the crematorium after she wakes up. Alas, the male protagonist and the first heroine have already explained clearly... Alas, the motivation to pursue desperately because of hatred is gone. [I'm about to cry]. It's very refreshing to see there, but what follows is a kind of emptiness, a kind of confusion that you don't know what to do after completing a big goal. This feeling is like the endless emptiness that comes after you impulsively rush 10 times [crying]

After reading novels for 9 years, this is one of the few well-written fantasy novels. I once thought about writing a magnificent world of cultivating immortals, but my writing skills were limited and I was lazy, so I never started writing. I hope the author can continue to write and not let life destroy the wings of dreams. Imagination is the greatest treasure of mankind. I also wish the author a happy life. I wish those who have a will, things will come true.

It's not novel. The outline should have been written. There are a lot of pitfalls in the early stage. I can only say that I will try to round it out later. The details are handled well, but the update speed cannot be complimented. Also, this is a fairy tale. It is natural and even necessary to have a love line, but it is absolutely not allowed to take up too much. I hope you can listen to this advice [laughing and crying] Sure enough, it still looks the same? The quality is reasonable.

So we met awesome people in the early stage? That secret place, I don't know what to say [face covering]

The pace of Qingmei's contradictory story is actually a bit faster. From the early stage, I felt that I should be able to write it for a long time [laughing and crying]. The author must have been affected, and I can understand it. After all, the mainstream male protagonist of Tomato can't take any losses, and happiness is the king. Haha [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] I still hope that the author can write according to his own ideas as much as possible, and readers' opinions are only for reference. The writing is good and the story doesn't have many logical flaws at the moment. Has the popularity bar of the heroines increased a little faster? The relationship between the master and the male protagonist is similar to that of Dou Po. In fact, it's not impossible to follow Dou Po's routine [please take a closer look]

It's a very good book, with beautiful language, smooth logic, and well-developed characters. I haven't encountered such a good-looking book in a long time [Admiration] The plot is compact and mixed with humor, it's fun to watch [Blow Kiss] Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

I originally thought it would be a no-brainer, but the author wrote it really well😁Finally, I want to ask if it's a harem or a single woman

The author's harem doesn't feel annoying, or maybe my mood has changed, and the writing is pretty good.

The writing is actually pretty good, except for the plot which is a bit cliche. This is the update. Judging from the setting, I should have thought about it seriously, but I don't know why the update is so slow. I feel that there is a high probability that I won't be able to finish the book according to the outline.

In fact, the writing is pretty good, but it's a pity that it was published on Tomato. Most people here are young and don't like to see this. Perhaps at a certain point, the age group is more suitable for such a plot. Everyone here likes the protagonist, who is free from worries, single-mindedly pursuing the high road, decisive in killing, and preferably ruthless and extremely self-interested.

The writing is obviously very good, but why do so many people make rash comments without even looking at how the plot develops later? And publishing them will affect other people's reading experience.

It's pretty good among the books of the same type I've read.

It is a very classic fantasy novel. Some people may say it is old-fashioned, but it can be read on, right? Regarding the question of Shen Qingqiu, whether it should be cleaned or not depends solely on the author's writing style. If it is written well, it will not be a problem.

I don't know how to evaluate this book. It is considered a traditional fantasy novel, but not entirely. It has its own innovative points. The author's writing style is really good. Each character has his own personality characteristics. There is no cliché. The characters are not brainless. The details are well controlled. There are no poisonous points. It is actually easy to invest a lot of emotions in reading this book. Your own emotions will be brought into it. It is really good to have the feeling of pleasure and revenge in the world.

How come I have changed so much after being raised for a year [cover face][cover face]

Damn it! It looks good [thinking], come on

I like the little princess [admiration] and give me a hard knock

Come on author, I believe this book will definitely be popular. I felt the same as when I read Xian Ni when I read this book.

The writing is good and the plot is well developed. The author of the back door has changed, and he is wrong.

It's a really rare good book, I must keep reading.

It's beautiful. I haven't seen such a beautiful new book for a long time. The author must persist. Many books are late bloomers.

It's really well written. It's okay to clean it up for the time being. Compound logic is not very obtrusive. Come on, I hope the small knife can be used, but not the big knife.

Come on, author! Very nice, I like it

Does the author write emotional lines? I feel that the first two heroines are good, and it would be more interesting to have a husband chasing after her [Like] [Like] [Like] If you can see it, I hope you can give me a reply [laughing]

Come on! Come on! Author[exploration]

Worth a read, the writing is good